Marked by the Heartless Alpha

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BaeVida

Nice title if I must say. The synopsis is well written and reveals something I feel like beating her parents for but I believe things happen for a reason. In all it is captivating enough to make one give the book a try, good one author. The first chapter... Simply great. I live author's description of thw world background, characters and everything .it brings to live a vivid picture of the scene. . Another thrilling scene was the beginning where her mouth worked faster than her mind. ..Sweet. Basically author's sense of writing is great. The only issue would be that the text per paragraph is much. It normally doesn't give readers an easy flow when it gets bulky and we most times miss and forget some important information in the process. So author should check. Other than that and perhaps the length of the first chapter. . Its all great and definitely going to be a thriller roller coaster of a book. Keep it up author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Scorpious_star

First things first... WOW! ❤ Anyone who loves reading AlphaOmega novels will conaoder this a simple master piece. Grom the way the characters are described to the fevelopment of the story everything is simply amazing. The only thing I feel is that the story is a little slow paced, but again depending on how well each character is designed with full attention it is not much of a deal. I also really like how the MC is considered as well as hella cold towards the pwople of his own pack really making him the heartless one amonst them all. Also, come onnnn the FC really needs to pick side I started having anxiety reading the whol scene where they argue... I really like rhe overall setting of the book as well. The plot is so well written it makes one want to read over and over again. This is simply a book that can be placed as a best of the best for the omegawerse settings. Handsdown the most blood boiling as well as soothing book for me. Some scenes really had me wondering where the next senario is heading too 😅. Outstanding!!! 👏🏼👏🏼

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ada_55

The book is actually super duper interesting and I don't anything more to say so 'lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala

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Glimmy

I'm speechless! The first chapter alone brings a sense of mystery that draws one into reading the rest of the chapters. Author payal is a very good author and it wouldn't surprise me if this book becomes a masterpiece!

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Pinkyprincess

Yay, I'm the first reviewer!! The synopsis and chapters look awesome!!! I'm sure this is gonna be a very good novel. The most important thing is that the writing quality of the author in the first two chapters is topnotch! I'd like to read what happens the next time. PS: Dylan is hOt!!!!!!!!

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LeeMaRi1999

Wow! A new novel was written by this amazing author! Definitely well written! The pacing is great and I am slowly falling for the main characters, Dylan and Hazel as well! Looking forward to this amazing novel!

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AngelLily

I have read 16 chapters straight and I can't help but admit that this book is really good. it's a slow burn, but the amazing kinds. the author is honestly doing a good job with this book cuz it has a lot of potential. I love it and will be keeping it in my library ❤❤❤

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DragonRiderOfHell

Im a bit late in reviewing my dearest author. I been extremely busy lately but im sorey for the review taking so long Anyway for the review. The chapters are good and interesting as well as showcasing the writing style that i have fallen in love with. It is or well has the potential to be a hit novel... I am. Loving it in every way... So keep up hard work... Good luck!

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Imoh_Paschaline_1152

OMG! 🤭 Author, you are so good with your description 👍 The first chapter was so perfect 💯 I love the male lead already ❤ Moreso, I'm in love with you 😍 Author, and this work as well 💥

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ReincarnatedSaint

A Story worth reading...Only a few chapters into it now, but Author has already proven her skills with her previous works...and this one is sure to be another great work too....

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Munchkin_2

Hey readers, if you are here to check the reviews before reading, just go for it. Our dear author never misses putting forward her unique stories and sinking us into the wonderful world she creates. 😍😍😍 And yeah, All the very best dear author-san, You got this😘

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Jeanie_Geer

love it. I am enjoying this book. I will recommend this to anyone.

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Googies2006

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME IF ITS FINISHED? I WANT TO READ IT BUT DON'T WANT TO GET MY HOPES UP IF ITS NOT FINISHED

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Googies2006

aaaaaahhh someone please tell me is this book finished so I can read please

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Limah_Lisah

Oh my goodness I wonder where this book has been since all these days It is AMAZING 😮😮 Right from the first chapter, I did not want to leave the book 😁😁 Nice job Nice job😇😇

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PIXIE_DUST

This story is super addictive! The author has done a briliant work in sketching out the charcters and from the start it will hook you that you can't get over it.

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priyabolagani

great story line. author is good writing complicated emotions. and this book is another whirlwind of emotions with mythical beasts. nice story author. all the best.