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I wish there was a second book or more chapters. what happened to the divine elder and the laughing god? after he took her away. what happened with Cain and family. did he ever go back to the world with all the dark light people? did he have any more children as a dragon? what happened with him becoming an administrator of the system?.. wish it kinda didn't end on a cliff note
This is one of my favourite novels on this app. I have lost count of the number of times I have read it, and it never failed to leave laughing. Love the work, and I am currently enjoying your new novel. Keep up the great work.
A truly wonderful story that had me laughing and smiling along the entire journey. I was always looking for more time to read. This book is a must read if you’re looking for something wholesome and creative for read.
honestly the fact this on here asking for locked chapters when dungeon diver. which is a way better read, is free I'm gonna have to dip out now sad too
I've read many novels... this one is the first i ever dropped. I've tried, i REALLY tried just to see the ending, but it just got worse and worse. The writing is awful, the story is forced without a single care for continuity, and the characters.... the MC is borderline lobotomized, while in general no character has "development" they all are just instantly shifted to fit forcefully in a very bad design. I honestly, as a reader, hope the author doesn't ever publish anything else.
Simply put this is a mess. There are bare bones here but every attempt to flesh anything out leads to confusing contradictions. There is obviously a total lack of foresight and it feels like things are getting slapped together last minute to try to make things work.
I really enjoyed reading this, it kept my attention and imagination entertained.
Overall, it was a very great novel to read, easy to follow, and understand and keep the reader immersed into the story. all the main characters are incredibly entertaining and relatable.
One of my favorite books, just finished rereading it again. it would be really cool to see someone make this into a manga
Pretty chill story, nice for lazy brainrot, albeit with some writing flaws, especially when it comes to grammar consistency and punctuation. But as chapters go on, it shows absolutely no improvement in writing and if anything, the story becomes repetitive and filled with empty gaps ; side characters become repetitive ; and scenario-advantaging power ups allowing the main characters to never have an issue get more and more recurrent Last but not least, loses all interest when hitting the paywall. It then literally becomes yet another member of this industry of milking the readers for their money. All in all, the beginning is nice to read lazily, but any further than the paywall is a pure loss of time and/or money.
I just finished reading this wonderful system-style adventure. The lore is amazing. The side stories aren't too far from the plot and build on it. Love it! It even has a cultivation bit toward the end chapters. The ending few chapters round it off nicely. Satisfied and you can tell that the characters are too. That have all the time in the world.
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Love the novel and all. The only thing that made me disappointed is that there is no wiki for the novel to look up to. I love looking at Wiki information on almost all novels I read. It's probably a pain to do it, but just rereading the information about the MC and a quick reminder on who is who and description on what they look like give me a sense of more vivid imagination whole reading. Overall, it's a great novel, and I give it 5 stars! Thank you!
I binged through this story faster than I care to admit but it was very well paced and a fun read
Great history, I liked the pace and the ending, the romance could be better regardless if there was an harem or not, the travels with her daughther were awesome, it would be awesome if we had more
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The first 2020 chapters are a bit rough. But not in a sense words, bad grammar or anything. Just a different style of writing that you're not really used to period instead of taking the route that most authors do where they need to explain everything that's happening. The author jumps a little bit period Instead of writing how they walked from point a to point b, the author will simply state that they are going to go do something and thenre are periods.It's hard to explain, but after a couple chapters.You get used to it and that odd feeling disappears. Overall though I would say this is an amazing book, I came here from the inheritance of the magic king simply because I like geriding style.And I wasn't disappointed with this novel in any way. Some pieces are a bit does take a little bit of a tonal shift In the latter half of the story. Spoilers ahead, once Cain becomes an ancient, the story goes from more of a dungeon, crawling power fantasy.To what if someone who used to be a human got the ability to create people essentially.And power them up. It goes from the dungeon, crawling mood and tomorrow.They a slice of life with a bit of action. That doesn't take away from the story at all.Because it's more or less.Just us being caught up on what some of the other characters are doing.While kane goes through a turbulent period in his life with misha being kidnapped. Friend, you know, hasn't read this book before?If you end up liking the progression of the novel after ten chapters I would say you absolutely have to finish the entire book because it is amazing
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Nice story set in a kinda D&D world. It’s a western written novel, not a Chinese one, so there aren’t any arrogant young masters. MC is kinda OP, but it’s not too annoying because they usually fight mobs rather than players. It basically becomes a Monty Haul campaign with ridiculous rewards falling out of the sky for the MC and there is no threat or fear of death. It’s just a nice easy ride, more about the relationships than any challenges. About the relationships, it reads like a harem novel and feels like a harem novel, in that the MC adds a pretty chick to his group every few chapters, and he’s the only guy in the group, BUT it’s not actually a harem novel because he only gets on with one girl, in an off-screen segment. The first few chapters are a bit bumpy, with abrupt scene changes without any explanation and a few parts that don’t make sense until you read a bit further and figure out what the author is trying to say, but after the world is introduced and the story starts moving, it’s a fairly smooth ride. Good for a non-challenging, comfortable read. No brain cells required. In fact, probably better to turn them off, you’ll enjoy it more that way.
really good overall! I think it would be nice of the author to go back and correct spelling and math errors throughout the story. many comments have pointed them out so it shouldn't be too hard to locate and fix them
There were some minor grammar and spelling errors, but nothing a reread can't fix. I enjoyed this world and its story so much that I would be ecstatic if I were to wake up in it one day. (Especially if the Laughing God deems me worthy of the class I desire). Fingers crossed for a sequel.[img=recommend]
Although t's nice book, I dropped it. The story turns to be about guild building, which is not my thing, and the problem is that the storytelling reminds me a calendar...there was no suspense at all (chapter 80)... The last ten or something chapters i read was because i liked the world building and wanted to learn more.
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If you are wanting an action or exciting read, go try a biography as it’ll do better than this book. A great idea and very nice potential but honestly it’s so hard to read even a single chapter with how boring it is. I‘m sure the writing gets better but I just can’t make it past the first ten or so chapters
Nice novel and I am enjoying this novel and it's very entertaining but 🥺 what is meaning of "INT,DSP,MP,SP,ATR,DEX,CON,HP please explain me 😔।
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I hate that guy carlos to be honest, whatever that bald guy's name is. Everytime I want to read this book, i'm reminded that this guy might appear in the future and finding myself scrolling past the book. Why does that kind of character need to exist is something only the author knows.
love this book, the only thing I didn't like was that it could of lasted so much longer but still a great read
I’ve read and reread this story a few times now and I still enjoy it everytime
Really a great read!!!the pacing at the start feels a bit wonky (it's like the characters think about getting ready to do something and then immediately after that thing has already happened) but once you get used to the style it reads pretty well.With the references to his other stories I think I might pick them up too. Great job with this one, I'm looking forward to the others!!!
This novel has 'present tense narration', which irks me a lot and throws me off my pace.
This is a great story with an easy to read and relaxing flow. Great content! No massive lore dumps, which lead to the novel flowing better and allowing readers to try and understand the world from how characters act.
I wish there was a second book or more chapters. what happened to the divine elder and the laughing god? after he took her away. what happened with Cain and family. did he ever go back to the world with all the dark light people? did he have any more children as a dragon? what happened with him becoming an administrator of the system?.. wish it kinda didn't end on a cliff note
This is one of my favourite novels on this app. I have lost count of the number of times I have read it, and it never failed to leave laughing. Love the work, and I am currently enjoying your new novel. Keep up the great work.
A truly wonderful story that had me laughing and smiling along the entire journey. I was always looking for more time to read. This book is a must read if you’re looking for something wholesome and creative for read.
honestly the fact this on here asking for locked chapters when dungeon diver. which is a way better read, is free I'm gonna have to dip out now sad too
I've read many novels... this one is the first i ever dropped. I've tried, i REALLY tried just to see the ending, but it just got worse and worse. The writing is awful, the story is forced without a single care for continuity, and the characters.... the MC is borderline lobotomized, while in general no character has "development" they all are just instantly shifted to fit forcefully in a very bad design. I honestly, as a reader, hope the author doesn't ever publish anything else.
Simply put this is a mess. There are bare bones here but every attempt to flesh anything out leads to confusing contradictions. There is obviously a total lack of foresight and it feels like things are getting slapped together last minute to try to make things work.
I really enjoyed reading this, it kept my attention and imagination entertained.
Overall, it was a very great novel to read, easy to follow, and understand and keep the reader immersed into the story. all the main characters are incredibly entertaining and relatable.
One of my favorite books, just finished rereading it again. it would be really cool to see someone make this into a manga
Pretty chill story, nice for lazy brainrot, albeit with some writing flaws, especially when it comes to grammar consistency and punctuation. But as chapters go on, it shows absolutely no improvement in writing and if anything, the story becomes repetitive and filled with empty gaps ; side characters become repetitive ; and scenario-advantaging power ups allowing the main characters to never have an issue get more and more recurrent Last but not least, loses all interest when hitting the paywall. It then literally becomes yet another member of this industry of milking the readers for their money. All in all, the beginning is nice to read lazily, but any further than the paywall is a pure loss of time and/or money.
I just finished reading this wonderful system-style adventure. The lore is amazing. The side stories aren't too far from the plot and build on it. Love it! It even has a cultivation bit toward the end chapters. The ending few chapters round it off nicely. Satisfied and you can tell that the characters are too. That have all the time in the world.
Revelar spoiler Love the novel and all. The only thing that made me disappointed is that there is no wiki for the novel to look up to. I love looking at Wiki information on almost all novels I read. It's probably a pain to do it, but just rereading the information about the MC and a quick reminder on who is who and description on what they look like give me a sense of more vivid imagination whole reading. Overall, it's a great novel, and I give it 5 stars! Thank you!
I binged through this story faster than I care to admit but it was very well paced and a fun read
Great history, I liked the pace and the ending, the romance could be better regardless if there was an harem or not, the travels with her daughther were awesome, it would be awesome if we had more
Revelar spoiler The first 2020 chapters are a bit rough. But not in a sense words, bad grammar or anything. Just a different style of writing that you're not really used to period instead of taking the route that most authors do where they need to explain everything that's happening. The author jumps a little bit period Instead of writing how they walked from point a to point b, the author will simply state that they are going to go do something and thenre are periods.It's hard to explain, but after a couple chapters.You get used to it and that odd feeling disappears. Overall though I would say this is an amazing book, I came here from the inheritance of the magic king simply because I like geriding style.And I wasn't disappointed with this novel in any way. Some pieces are a bit does take a little bit of a tonal shift In the latter half of the story. Spoilers ahead, once Cain becomes an ancient, the story goes from more of a dungeon, crawling power fantasy.To what if someone who used to be a human got the ability to create people essentially.And power them up. It goes from the dungeon, crawling mood and tomorrow.They a slice of life with a bit of action. That doesn't take away from the story at all.Because it's more or less.Just us being caught up on what some of the other characters are doing.While kane goes through a turbulent period in his life with misha being kidnapped. Friend, you know, hasn't read this book before?If you end up liking the progression of the novel after ten chapters I would say you absolutely have to finish the entire book because it is amazing
Revelar spoiler Nice story set in a kinda D&D world. It’s a western written novel, not a Chinese one, so there aren’t any arrogant young masters. MC is kinda OP, but it’s not too annoying because they usually fight mobs rather than players. It basically becomes a Monty Haul campaign with ridiculous rewards falling out of the sky for the MC and there is no threat or fear of death. It’s just a nice easy ride, more about the relationships than any challenges. About the relationships, it reads like a harem novel and feels like a harem novel, in that the MC adds a pretty chick to his group every few chapters, and he’s the only guy in the group, BUT it’s not actually a harem novel because he only gets on with one girl, in an off-screen segment. The first few chapters are a bit bumpy, with abrupt scene changes without any explanation and a few parts that don’t make sense until you read a bit further and figure out what the author is trying to say, but after the world is introduced and the story starts moving, it’s a fairly smooth ride. Good for a non-challenging, comfortable read. No brain cells required. In fact, probably better to turn them off, you’ll enjoy it more that way.
really good overall! I think it would be nice of the author to go back and correct spelling and math errors throughout the story. many comments have pointed them out so it shouldn't be too hard to locate and fix them
There were some minor grammar and spelling errors, but nothing a reread can't fix. I enjoyed this world and its story so much that I would be ecstatic if I were to wake up in it one day. (Especially if the Laughing God deems me worthy of the class I desire). Fingers crossed for a sequel.[img=recommend]
Although t's nice book, I dropped it. The story turns to be about guild building, which is not my thing, and the problem is that the storytelling reminds me a calendar...there was no suspense at all (chapter 80)... The last ten or something chapters i read was because i liked the world building and wanted to learn more.
Revelar spoiler If you are wanting an action or exciting read, go try a biography as it’ll do better than this book. A great idea and very nice potential but honestly it’s so hard to read even a single chapter with how boring it is. I‘m sure the writing gets better but I just can’t make it past the first ten or so chapters
Nice novel and I am enjoying this novel and it's very entertaining but 🥺 what is meaning of "INT,DSP,MP,SP,ATR,DEX,CON,HP please explain me 😔।
Revelar spoiler I hate that guy carlos to be honest, whatever that bald guy's name is. Everytime I want to read this book, i'm reminded that this guy might appear in the future and finding myself scrolling past the book. Why does that kind of character need to exist is something only the author knows.
love this book, the only thing I didn't like was that it could of lasted so much longer but still a great read
I’ve read and reread this story a few times now and I still enjoy it everytime
Really a great read!!!the pacing at the start feels a bit wonky (it's like the characters think about getting ready to do something and then immediately after that thing has already happened) but once you get used to the style it reads pretty well.With the references to his other stories I think I might pick them up too. Great job with this one, I'm looking forward to the others!!!
This novel has 'present tense narration', which irks me a lot and throws me off my pace.
This is a great story with an easy to read and relaxing flow. Great content! No massive lore dumps, which lead to the novel flowing better and allowing readers to try and understand the world from how characters act.