Reviews of A Fourth Lion by SIMA_ - Webnovel

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that_crazy_bastard

what happened is there a continuation or what❓

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Mastarius

the title should be changed! better it be (canon Report) at least it's not deceiving the readers, peace.

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DaoistZuZvc3

Please update. it is very good.

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Infinit

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ReaderVult

Very nice fanfic, congrats. It's pretty cool frankly when you like to stay politically correct, a logical and believable story, a friendly Mc (at least for now, who knows), etc. This is a pretty nice way of writing, I must say. It's easy and pleasant to read, but also well described. I'm also doing a Lannister fanfic, being a beginner as well. From what I've been able to see, I think that we're headed in different directions for the rest of our respective fanfics. But I'm trying to get better at my writing, which is only starting to get a little better now I think. In any case, reading your fanfic, I don't have the impression at all of seeing an amateur's work. I'm pretty impressed, and I'll be sure to read this fanfic to the end. It's also rare to see a Game of Thrones fanfic that isn't dropped at some point (yet), so I sincerely hope that you don't quit. I'll try to finish mine too. Good continuation and good luck for the future, author :)

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Cequem

Other than grammar mistakes its good Hdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhfhfhfhfhdhdhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhdhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhf

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AgustinaGM18

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Will_Caruso

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Dr200

I don’t know if mc is a midget or not, even what he looks like hasn’t been explained apart from that this novel is really good

LV 4

Will_Caruso

I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

LV 3

Marshall0lee

It's boring, the cool part of a GOT fanfic is being able to see the MC grow in power in general. But here the MC doesn't grow up, everything he does, whoever is winning is his father, it annoys me, does he not have an inkling of who the father is? And this MC who seems to be a saint? Please, you're not in the right world for this. "Dad I have an idea!" "Ok do it" Idea work "Congratulations son for giving me more power and wealth you are a great pawn" . Exactly for this reason that choosing to be from the house of Lannister doesn't work out, because the MC is totally arrested until he takes office, which until home is a long time and the Lannisters would have already entered the war. I've lost interest in this work, I find it boring, irritating, disappointing and incredibly clueless. Goodbye.

LV 1

Xensalit

В заподных землях живёт приблизительно 5 миллионов человек .Это мижно определить по количеству арми которую собрали на войну 5 королей.В средневековье обычно могли собрать 1 или 2 процент населения а армия Ланисторов насчитыва лась 50 тысеч. А в самом вэстэроса живёт 32 милиона человек. Атакже надеюсь автор будет продолжать потому что все очень интересно.

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DaoOfCopying

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Sunarcobaleno1234

It is quite good even though updates can kind of get iffy but the world background is good for the purpose of the story which mostly about the character.

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MS7soul

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Will_Caruso

I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

LV 1

kingbastard1999

It's good, so far he's a true Lannister, he's not a moralist who tries to save the Targayens for no reason, very good, I hope he continues and his wife isn't a Targayen It's also realistic, with no 2-year-olds fighting karate and managing territory, or that story of kids dreaming of things and adults believing in nonsense.

LV 7

Medalha

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LV 2

Egika

Started well, but with the following chapters it started to get Bad, forced situation, character is useless and kinda stupid😓😪.................................................................,

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Siegfried_Shepherd

It getting good though there is one semi forced scene it seems that the author heard the criticism there so I have a lot of hope for the story

LV 7

Medalha

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Chronus12345

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LV 1

Siegfried_Shepherd

Little too early for a review but I like this fan fic. Usually most ASOIAF/GOT fanfic's threw the 4 year old SI MC into combat and have him kill like 40 fully grown men in this it's much more realistic with he mc focusing on internal affairs as he is too weak for war currently, I am also very hyped to see what tywin will do when he feel's he has an a least semi-suitable heir.

LV 13

Adolstein

I just discovered this story and i read the 10 chapter in one go. I will be quick, that has the potential to be a pretty good fanfic of GOT. I hope that the story will continue

LV 1

OliverWeb_Bisplo

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Gd_Sys

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Crimson_Star96

I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

LV 4

Ghostbuster_Boy

So far, so good. I'm waiting to see how this story unfolds and it looks promising, the update times can improve, but other than that everything is great. I like that there is a story about the lannisters

LV 3

Great_Abby

its coming along nicely.