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Reading this is such a pain, to the point of MTL which i very much doubt it is. I mean use of 'I' instead of "He/She" is like everywhere to the point i don't know who is speaking to who. 'He' and 'She' are reversed and some of the paragraphs outright don't make any sense. Though i still will be giving it 3 rating as emperor's domination fanfics are rare and i still enjoyed reading whatever bit i could understand.
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Giving it 5 stars since it's actually an Emperor's Domination fanfic, and all the previous ones I read were dropped at like 5 chapters. Good story though grammar needs a lot of improvement.
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Reading this is such a pain, to the point of MTL which i very much doubt it is. I mean use of 'I' instead of "He/She" is like everywhere to the point i don't know who is speaking to who. 'He' and 'She' are reversed and some of the paragraphs outright don't make any sense. Though i still will be giving it 3 rating as emperor's domination fanfics are rare and i still enjoyed reading whatever bit i could understand.
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Giving it 5 stars since it's actually an Emperor's Domination fanfic, and all the previous ones I read were dropped at like 5 chapters. Good story though grammar needs a lot of improvement.
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is he going to be his own character or just his lackey?? ......................................................... ........................
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