Naruto: The Wandering Blacksmith

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Kitsune_Raijin

It's really bad, first he can't even write kunai, it's always Kuni, that really drove me crazy xD, second the plot is non-existent and full of holes, and the personality of the MC doesn't make sense. The general concept of the novel is good, but the execution is nefarious, the only thing that can save this is a rewrite, not before some time to work more in the plot, the personality of the MC, the grammar... basically everything

LV 14

JStyles

The start is really good then it suddenly goes from 100 to 0 in 1 chapter. Characters making really stupid decisions Mc's father a ninja who knows jutsu almost died to a normal guard The plot is so forced This story could have been really good

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Monsterduck

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_VOIDLESS_

To be honest it would have made more sense if the world was danmachi it would have been amazing reading that but this to is great. But If you have time try making it a danmachi story with the same setting but am still liking the story the same

LV 15

MellyK9

Honestly, the story has tons of potential, but I feel it was executed poorly. First of all the Mc just has the ability to turn anything into whatever he feels like because apparently he is a genius in transformation jutsu, which makes no sense. Then there is the fact that he this random blacksmith child beat multiple ninjas without training. Then he slaves himself away to konaha because he is an Uchiha, which is possibly the stupidest decision so far. At least danzo can get two free eyes. Also, I know writing is hard, so don't feel bad about my critique. It's just how I feel about the story.

LV 4

MajorLove_Gravy

Thoughts so far, I dont think this is how the transformation technique works, like at all. I feel like if you could use it to have extra limbs then we would have seen countless people use that in other scenarios. Author states his reason for seeing the transformation jutsu as so op is naruto turning bunta (an adult sage toad) into the 9 tails but the only reason that was possible is because it was Naruto doing it. I'm only on chapter 3 and I feel like author is just going to attempt to abuse this jutsu in ways it can't be used

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PurpleMuse

He should be paired with TenTen if you ever add romance since they’re both blacksmiths and weapon fanatics.

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kobeblackmamba

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LV 4

20_Mystic

this is really good but the writing style gets really monotonous during the fight scenes, like the thrill type of feeling is not present in the fighting scenes. I really hope you will try to rectify that.Thanks for the Fanfiction.😌

LV 3

Joseph_Boardwalk

I rarely Review and this will be a short one just to let everyone know that the start is just slow world & character & plot building but once you get to chapter 30 it becomes a really interesting story as how the author gave him a unique ability that will let him grow to be a very overpowered character/person in a short amount of time if used right by the character. in conclusion read to the end of chapter 30 and if you don't like it by then, you should stop. but most likely you will keep reading as the author has some interesting/ingenious ideas on how to use the MC's chakra/powers/jutsu

LV 4

DaoOfEgg

I don't want to write that much, but just know that this story is really good.

LV 4

QuiteSarcastic

Writing Quality: Amazing, there can be small errors at times but they are easily understandable, this is also one of this fics strongpoints. ----- Stability of Updates: Its not bad at all, and once chapters get released it's more than one, considering the length of those chapters it's worth the wait . ----- Story Development: It was slightly slow at the start, but once it moved on from the naruto universe it became an whole other story. ----- Character Design: This right here, is what the fic is all about, the OC MC is unique, his way of doing things are hands on, and logical, the author even manages to make basic characters that were initially boring, into something better, like Yoruichi, she has never been explored as a character, except for being an overall flirt + cat characteristics(D'uh). Into a logical heroine in the story, unlike 99% of the other fics on this platform that include her. Those are horrendous harem collective heap of garbage in comparison. ----- World Background: Naruto / God of war / Bleach / One Piece / Need I write more? ----- My own conclusion is that this fic... is underrated, underappriciated, and deserves much better than its current overall rating. And strongly advice deleting 1 star reviews that refuse to actually put the reason of said review. Keep it up author! :)

LV 13

Omori101

i really like the premise, it's really creative and we'll executed if a bit fast in how op he becomes. even then it is storywise plausible and not " haha plot needs him to be able to do it so he does "..... i don't have anything i particularly find bad and just want to ask, is there romance? i hope there is ..... not five stars because I don't know if there will be and if theres not then 4.6 is fine

LV 14

Alex_Boen

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LV 14

Demonshadow639

I really like this, I usually don’t go for the super OP stories but this one is done beautifully. I really recommend a read through I finished catching up in a single day because I was hooked

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scary_obunga

the story is good and I hope it doesn't get dropped, although the story is about op mc, mc's strength doesn't increase steadily or fluidly , he instantly gets absurd power ups and it's really fast, one second he is above civilian-level the next he can barely survive/kill jounin-level nin, then he gains a big power up and unlocked some big potential but is very laid back because he can easily defeat beings like third hokage/jiraya although mc already became a top dog in naruto, it's a multiverse fic so I'm Looking forward to the next world and I hope the absurd power ups are tuned down a bit

LV 13

SrMori

I was tempted to drop it after the first 20 or so chapters The story gets quite interesting when he gets to Konoha.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Anas_AsBEIY

كنت ابحث منذ زمن طويل عن رواية معحبين عن المهن الداعمة كالطب او الحدادة او الكيمياء اوغيرها ولم اجد عندما. وجدت هذا الكنز بالصدفة افكار ابداعية. من عالم ناروتو باسلوب منطقي ترابط وتطور الشخصية مذهل استمر لقد استمتعت كثيرا

LV 4

omnigamergt

Very goodd fanfic with great potential with a more unique beginning than most and unique interpritaions and uses of a jutsu and with the hole blacksmith element and how it can be develpoed dont know how it w ill go currently at chapter 16 but it looks very promising to me at least