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Dropped. I recommend this to everyone who has standards under the sea ,doesn't care about the MC's IQ in books or sense in relationships, likes cheaters or just new to reading so u won't mind anything. Read it and tell me your thoughts I'll listen.
Which of the characters is the top? I just didn't get :( Please help. I have difficulty reading stories whose main character is seme. If the main character is uke, I will continue reading with peace of mind. When I find out later, I leave the story, I feel sad.
At first the plot was interesting but it got confusing, I couldn’t follow it.
I pretty much like the book, it started out fine... I did ended up dropping this book midway, but it is still good. I would love it if the author raised the IQ of the MC... I was dying from second hand embarrassment, at least he is (over) confident about himself.
The synopsis of this book piqued my interest, so I added it to my library. The story's written well with only few errors. However, after a few chapters, I dropped it as it was not really my cup of tea. The first reason was that it was a story about royalty. They're supposed to be formal, but I couldn't tell since they're just being casual, as if they've known each other for a long time, even when they're meeting for the first time. Second, their social standing does not correspond to their bratty behaviors (specially the king). I tend to focus on character design and writing quality. Hehe. I'd like to say more, but I haven't read the book very deeply, so this is all I have to say. This is just my honest opinion as an avid light novel reader (but never the writer lol). However, I am confident that the author will improve as time goes by. Best of luck. 😊
Tbh... Your writing kinda sucks... But you have a nice plot tho... There are lots of loopholes in your story... But u know how to keep a reader reading... Hope this review was helpful 😌
dropped the story at ch 21, concept is super good but the story is inconsistent and irregular. seems like a ch is missing between 14x15 when mc changes personality and gains memories to inexplicably not having them again few ch later. some sentences make no sense and need serious editting. bit disappointed cause it started out good and got my interest but didn't deliver
Revelar spoiler
In the beginning of the story it’s very frustratings to see our MC act with only 1% of his brain cells. I get kind disgusted and angry with his thinking process in the beginning of the story, it just baffles me that he thinks that the outcome of his actions is someone else’s fault, like how. But he does get better as the story progresses, it take a while for him to realize that his actions and word will hurt people around his, and his behavior is selfish and self-centered. He does grow as a person but I still get angry with how he thinks something, but I’ll still keep reading since I want to see the outcome of the story.
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It was fresh to read this ... you know something new . I enjoyed it very much but honestly I don't like the growing misunderstanding between author ( Davy ) and Jason . It would have been nice if Jason got to say that he is searching for his memories by coming to school when Davy asked him before getting transmigrated back to novel. You know Davy doesn't have alll the right to be angry with Jason as it is completely not his problem , Davy should also have tried to ask him the reason for his rejection in High school then he could have gotten gist of reality instead of hurting both of them. It was my personal opinion as I am not into too much misunderstandings but your novel was nice and specially characters for Davy and Jason ... I truly truly loved them , plot was also nice overall ( leaving misunderstanding part ..) Thank-you for writing novel ★★
The writing is kind weird to read and i know its placed in the old times where sexism was the norm but that doesn’ t make it any less uncomfortable, pretty dumb mc that changes according to the plot?? And there are typos which i dont usually mind but all the other reviews keep saying its so good and well written?? Its pretty mid ig
just in love with the main characters they are adorable even with the things that happen in the course of the story i don't know which side i would be on if the protagonist or davy
overall a good novel, the main problem i have with this novel is is how stupid the mc is because he is not only constanting creating problems for himself for no reason but when he tries to succeed in something he goes about it all the wrong way, if the most stupid mc that i have ever read(never thought that the title of that i would have to reassign it after the last mc i assigned it to) doesnt stop you then i can say that the novel is overall nice to read(probably better than that if your oppinion doesnt get worsened by the stupid mc).
here's another idea people like mc harem not ml harem so why don't you make ml your mc. if you are going for that route I had rather let mc be with that girl atleast he will be happy. I just don't understand why there is ml superiority like every author tries to put mc down and torture him. And the end result will be that he get to share the person he loves with other person. add angst in your tag
I really enjoyed this book. The way the characters of the story go together. It's a different way looking at the story. I was able to see a new perspective from how the Author would be apart of the story. It is very exciting to see how the Butterfly Effect takes place. Especially when it is the author changing the very nature of a story he himself wrote. I hope to be able to read and experience more from this series.
Ok, good story I liked the concept and how it is written. Though I had problems with the characters interaction or the MC interaction. I believe the MC should have the body physical memory like how a person with dementia that have memory lost can play the piano like an expert. Anyways anyone who I planning to read the novel should. And Author can you make the MC more private about his past life and his obsession with the girl.
The novel deserves a thumbs up. It is a nice read and funny too. Jason is quite an interesting character to read about. Wonderful job author.
Wow I love the story idea, like who would have thought of this Your writing style is smooth. This novel is incredible I highly recommend... Thumbs up to the author
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what is this amazingly written book? the mc is super relatable and the concept of the story is great too 💖 so far, even with 3 chapters uploaded i could day the book will go far.. i hope jason gets his happy ending 🙈
Oh, wow yes. I am soo hooked on your book that I want an update. The story is so good and we can correlate with Jason So much. Wow, I highly recommend this book to read by everyone. I love your book so much..... Hat's off to you dear? Keep up the good work. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
First I read it, I like 'second ml never gets what he deserved' and i found interesting when the ml tries to sabotage instead get a norms class girl, the ml got the prince. It's hillarious and i can't wait for jason's journey to get the prince's heart..
First of all, this is a pretty interesting concept. Second, the work is both well-written and well-thought, I have not notice errors so far. It is already hooking and intriguing with only the first few chapters. I think, the MC is a really relatable character for readers, he's really cute. I love how his character was laid out. I just got caught off guard from the transition of point-of-views. Overall, this is a nice book with an amazing concept. I'd recommend this! ❤️
Only two chapters are our, but the plot is already interesting. The MC is relatable, and his reactions are so natural and sometimes funny. The writing flaws from beginning to end, and you're left with the need to read more. Unfortunately, there aren't any many chapters yet. However, the updates seem stable.
What an amazing topic to write on🤩 Such great plot is seriously needed😍 So gonna keep up with Jason’s journey👍🏻 Great job done by the author to write in such a way that it just draws you in👏🏻👌🏻💜
Dropped. I recommend this to everyone who has standards under the sea ,doesn't care about the MC's IQ in books or sense in relationships, likes cheaters or just new to reading so u won't mind anything. Read it and tell me your thoughts I'll listen.
Which of the characters is the top? I just didn't get :( Please help. I have difficulty reading stories whose main character is seme. If the main character is uke, I will continue reading with peace of mind. When I find out later, I leave the story, I feel sad.
At first the plot was interesting but it got confusing, I couldn’t follow it.
I pretty much like the book, it started out fine... I did ended up dropping this book midway, but it is still good. I would love it if the author raised the IQ of the MC... I was dying from second hand embarrassment, at least he is (over) confident about himself.
The synopsis of this book piqued my interest, so I added it to my library. The story's written well with only few errors. However, after a few chapters, I dropped it as it was not really my cup of tea. The first reason was that it was a story about royalty. They're supposed to be formal, but I couldn't tell since they're just being casual, as if they've known each other for a long time, even when they're meeting for the first time. Second, their social standing does not correspond to their bratty behaviors (specially the king). I tend to focus on character design and writing quality. Hehe. I'd like to say more, but I haven't read the book very deeply, so this is all I have to say. This is just my honest opinion as an avid light novel reader (but never the writer lol). However, I am confident that the author will improve as time goes by. Best of luck. 😊
Tbh... Your writing kinda sucks... But you have a nice plot tho... There are lots of loopholes in your story... But u know how to keep a reader reading... Hope this review was helpful 😌
dropped the story at ch 21, concept is super good but the story is inconsistent and irregular. seems like a ch is missing between 14x15 when mc changes personality and gains memories to inexplicably not having them again few ch later. some sentences make no sense and need serious editting. bit disappointed cause it started out good and got my interest but didn't deliver
Revelar spoiler In the beginning of the story it’s very frustratings to see our MC act with only 1% of his brain cells. I get kind disgusted and angry with his thinking process in the beginning of the story, it just baffles me that he thinks that the outcome of his actions is someone else’s fault, like how. But he does get better as the story progresses, it take a while for him to realize that his actions and word will hurt people around his, and his behavior is selfish and self-centered. He does grow as a person but I still get angry with how he thinks something, but I’ll still keep reading since I want to see the outcome of the story.
Revelar spoiler It was fresh to read this ... you know something new . I enjoyed it very much but honestly I don't like the growing misunderstanding between author ( Davy ) and Jason . It would have been nice if Jason got to say that he is searching for his memories by coming to school when Davy asked him before getting transmigrated back to novel. You know Davy doesn't have alll the right to be angry with Jason as it is completely not his problem , Davy should also have tried to ask him the reason for his rejection in High school then he could have gotten gist of reality instead of hurting both of them. It was my personal opinion as I am not into too much misunderstandings but your novel was nice and specially characters for Davy and Jason ... I truly truly loved them , plot was also nice overall ( leaving misunderstanding part ..) Thank-you for writing novel ★★
The writing is kind weird to read and i know its placed in the old times where sexism was the norm but that doesn’ t make it any less uncomfortable, pretty dumb mc that changes according to the plot?? And there are typos which i dont usually mind but all the other reviews keep saying its so good and well written?? Its pretty mid ig
just in love with the main characters they are adorable even with the things that happen in the course of the story i don't know which side i would be on if the protagonist or davy
overall a good novel, the main problem i have with this novel is is how stupid the mc is because he is not only constanting creating problems for himself for no reason but when he tries to succeed in something he goes about it all the wrong way, if the most stupid mc that i have ever read(never thought that the title of that i would have to reassign it after the last mc i assigned it to) doesnt stop you then i can say that the novel is overall nice to read(probably better than that if your oppinion doesnt get worsened by the stupid mc).
here's another idea people like mc harem not ml harem so why don't you make ml your mc. if you are going for that route I had rather let mc be with that girl atleast he will be happy. I just don't understand why there is ml superiority like every author tries to put mc down and torture him. And the end result will be that he get to share the person he loves with other person. add angst in your tag
I really enjoyed this book. The way the characters of the story go together. It's a different way looking at the story. I was able to see a new perspective from how the Author would be apart of the story. It is very exciting to see how the Butterfly Effect takes place. Especially when it is the author changing the very nature of a story he himself wrote. I hope to be able to read and experience more from this series.
Ok, good story I liked the concept and how it is written. Though I had problems with the characters interaction or the MC interaction. I believe the MC should have the body physical memory like how a person with dementia that have memory lost can play the piano like an expert. Anyways anyone who I planning to read the novel should. And Author can you make the MC more private about his past life and his obsession with the girl.
The novel deserves a thumbs up. It is a nice read and funny too. Jason is quite an interesting character to read about. Wonderful job author.
Wow I love the story idea, like who would have thought of this Your writing style is smooth. This novel is incredible I highly recommend... Thumbs up to the author
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what is this amazingly written book? the mc is super relatable and the concept of the story is great too 💖 so far, even with 3 chapters uploaded i could day the book will go far.. i hope jason gets his happy ending 🙈
Oh, wow yes. I am soo hooked on your book that I want an update. The story is so good and we can correlate with Jason So much. Wow, I highly recommend this book to read by everyone. I love your book so much..... Hat's off to you dear? Keep up the good work. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
First I read it, I like 'second ml never gets what he deserved' and i found interesting when the ml tries to sabotage instead get a norms class girl, the ml got the prince. It's hillarious and i can't wait for jason's journey to get the prince's heart..
First of all, this is a pretty interesting concept. Second, the work is both well-written and well-thought, I have not notice errors so far. It is already hooking and intriguing with only the first few chapters. I think, the MC is a really relatable character for readers, he's really cute. I love how his character was laid out. I just got caught off guard from the transition of point-of-views. Overall, this is a nice book with an amazing concept. I'd recommend this! ❤️
Only two chapters are our, but the plot is already interesting. The MC is relatable, and his reactions are so natural and sometimes funny. The writing flaws from beginning to end, and you're left with the need to read more. Unfortunately, there aren't any many chapters yet. However, the updates seem stable.
What an amazing topic to write on🤩 Such great plot is seriously needed😍 So gonna keep up with Jason’s journey👍🏻 Great job done by the author to write in such a way that it just draws you in👏🏻👌🏻💜
It’s good but the Mc is killing me bro