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Thank you so much for your hard work to revise the 51 chapter . I really like the lemon scene now . Hopefully you will be able to make it through the last chapter . As always thanks for the great work
This story had great potential... potential that was ruined by a single genre, the ntr. It's incredible how a single stupid decision can completely ruin something, I would have liked to see this story in the weekly or monthly top, it's a shame, I hope you don't make the same mistake in your other novel
I have only read a few chapters and can tell that it has good grammar. As someone who has read many ero-novels. I can tell this is gold even though it will have NTR. I sincerely wish the writer to not stop uploading the chapters regularly. Thanks for a great novel. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Revelar spoiler
5 stars for having the Ntr element, exhibitionism is my favorite fetish but Ntr is second very good 5 stars for having the Ntr element, exhibitionism is my favorite fetish but Ntr is second very good
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Nice novel. I really like the balance between romance and ntr.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
Good story, the world where the story is presented is quite original and interesting. The grammar is good which makes reading much easier, as for the update frequency, the novel is updated very regularly, almost one chapter every two days. It has a rather strange beginning, let's say, but when you get used to reading the novel as a spectator and do not project yourself into it, it becomes quite an interesting read.
The story is great since i don't know how to rate but for me it's great. And why do i feel that April must get inserted with some meat stick before getting saved?
Thank you so much for your hard work to revise the 51 chapter . I really like the lemon scene now . Hopefully you will be able to make it through the last chapter . As always thanks for the great work
This story had great potential... potential that was ruined by a single genre, the ntr. It's incredible how a single stupid decision can completely ruin something, I would have liked to see this story in the weekly or monthly top, it's a shame, I hope you don't make the same mistake in your other novel
I have only read a few chapters and can tell that it has good grammar. As someone who has read many ero-novels. I can tell this is gold even though it will have NTR. I sincerely wish the writer to not stop uploading the chapters regularly. Thanks for a great novel. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Revelar spoiler 5 stars for having the Ntr element, exhibitionism is my favorite fetish but Ntr is second very good 5 stars for having the Ntr element, exhibitionism is my favorite fetish but Ntr is second very good
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Nice novel. I really like the balance between romance and ntr.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
Good story, the world where the story is presented is quite original and interesting. The grammar is good which makes reading much easier, as for the update frequency, the novel is updated very regularly, almost one chapter every two days. It has a rather strange beginning, let's say, but when you get used to reading the novel as a spectator and do not project yourself into it, it becomes quite an interesting read.
The story is great since i don't know how to rate but for me it's great. And why do i feel that April must get inserted with some meat stick before getting saved?
Tq for the chapter .. .. .. ..... .. .. .