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I'm interested in this premise that you have here. as being reincarnated as broly 17-year-old broly before the destruction of planet Vegeta . the only problem with this I have is the beginning started out with way too many wishes it just made it feel terrible. if the wishes had been a more moderate number like three at most it wouldn't have made the story feel as terrible. as I feel like you could have gotten most of everything you wanted in this story with one wish or two and instead you just made it into an absurd eight wishes. for example you could have just turn him into a gamer for the first wish. just by changing one of The wishes just to being a gamer you've already removed a number of The wishes. as you won't have to wish for the inventory or increase gravity. well that's if you make it so you modify the training instant dungeon from the gamer to have higher gravity instead of more time passing in the instant dungeon. and if you have monsters you can just farm for money so you don't have to wish for that infinite money thing. so that's three of The wishes you could have eliminated just by wishing to be a gamer instead and if you add a game store that sells items or all techniques in dragon Ball magic or otherwise. you could have ended up removing another wish now that I think about it. and then just wish to be broly at 17 year's old and placed on planet Vegeta before Frieza takes over. as one wish and that's pretty much everything on your wish list unless I'm forgetting something. also all the techniques and stuff you wanted MC to have just make it so it gets it through the game store through the course of the story. As it be more entertaining that way for readers. as far as saving the Saiyan's that should be a moral debate have the main character should struggle with through the course of the story.
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I'm interested in this premise that you have here. as being reincarnated as broly 17-year-old broly before the destruction of planet Vegeta . the only problem with this I have is the beginning started out with way too many wishes it just made it feel terrible. if the wishes had been a more moderate number like three at most it wouldn't have made the story feel as terrible. as I feel like you could have gotten most of everything you wanted in this story with one wish or two and instead you just made it into an absurd eight wishes. for example you could have just turn him into a gamer for the first wish. just by changing one of The wishes just to being a gamer you've already removed a number of The wishes. as you won't have to wish for the inventory or increase gravity. well that's if you make it so you modify the training instant dungeon from the gamer to have higher gravity instead of more time passing in the instant dungeon. and if you have monsters you can just farm for money so you don't have to wish for that infinite money thing. so that's three of The wishes you could have eliminated just by wishing to be a gamer instead and if you add a game store that sells items or all techniques in dragon Ball magic or otherwise. you could have ended up removing another wish now that I think about it. and then just wish to be broly at 17 year's old and placed on planet Vegeta before Frieza takes over. as one wish and that's pretty much everything on your wish list unless I'm forgetting something. also all the techniques and stuff you wanted MC to have just make it so it gets it through the game store through the course of the story. As it be more entertaining that way for readers. as far as saving the Saiyan's that should be a moral debate have the main character should struggle with through the course of the story.
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