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My suggestion is that the scale of power used is too much in this novel. As a comparison, the strongest person in Tdg Aja Tier 4A and Sage Emperor 4 C. And that alone is equivalent to the supreme emperor in your novel 🤣. When compassed in cultivation, the saint rank- Sage is Tier 3C-3A. And Sage Rank- Demi god will be Multiverse rank Tier 2C-2A, And True God Tier Is 1C Dimensional. The strongest is Eternal God Tier 1B-1A. This is the best scale that I can conclude from the many ridiculous realms you have written. I summarize and explain 🥳🤣
A história e boa ate agora,apenas as atualizações sao um pouco inconstantes ,mas isso e o de menos. Continue com o bom trabalho. Nao tem discord?
i just started reading this but i can't drop this feeling that i have read something similar on Wattpad. so far good.
If you like OP stories you'll love this. The character get OP in the first universe and then travels to other universes OP and has fun while getting stronger but unlike some novels that just say they are OP characters but they aren't he's pretty unbeatable every universe he goes to. The writing is well done. It's fun to read even if you haven't read the novels that the worlds the MC goes to are based on. I myself had read TDG the first world he goes to. But the second i had only read the first 20 chapter and the next world i didn't even know the name of the novel but still liked the characters and the world.
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I like this novel very much, author's idea is brilliant, good grammar, nice plot, i hope he can write this novel I like this novel very much, author's idea is brilliant, good grammar, nice plot, i hope he can write this novel I like this novel very much, author's idea is brilliant, good grammar, nice plot, i hope he can write this novel
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It's a very good novel, I wish it continues as it goes and I look forward to the updates 🙏 I want it to be updated like the other novel that is a chapter a day or two, I look forward to the next update
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Update is slow....................................................................................................................................................................................................................4 days we have to wait for chapters..........
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this is good fanfic bruhh hope you dont drop this...................................... . ................ .......
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Great story, the pace is neither to slow nor to fast. Good choice of harem members, keep in mind that this is not a new story, but mostly ( at least in tdg) the Mc would follow the story, which is progressing faster and without the drama, just changing little things and giving it the ending. The relationships between characters could be improve, but I think it is okay for a fic. The uptades are a little slow, but at least steady. hope solo leveling is at good, and would like TOG to be the next World.
Overall a good story with good development but still feels like going little fast and he didnt have to work to gain power and how did he get different types of law crystals didnt explain.
The author doesn't seem to know what present or past tense is he uses knew when it should be know or told instead of tell that's just the tip of the problems he has with tense's. Sentence structure is good in some places but horrible in other's there's no consistency in the quality of writing. He uses a lot of wrong words that are somewhat related to the word he should be using, I'm guessing google translate here. As for the story.... Things just seem to happen people we haven't seen before are introduced as someone the MC has met before and know. The MC's parents are background characters and are mentioned maybe 3 times in the first 10 chapters, he may as well been an orphan. Finally when i stopped reading i could already tell that this was going the be one of those stories where the MC just pulls skill's out of thin air when he needs them and you'll probably never hear of those skills again.
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really nice story really hoping to see sage emperor get one shotted by nie li and hopefully he goes to other cultivation world and get more waifus but the head waifus goes to zi yun and ning er
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Comn update please.........I love this fanfiction........ please update daily................why don't you add that director of alchemist association ...she also loves mc in the manga
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Muy bueno, me interesa bastante el resto del desarrollo de la historia pero hasta ahora esta bastante bien
My suggestion is that the scale of power used is too much in this novel. As a comparison, the strongest person in Tdg Aja Tier 4A and Sage Emperor 4 C. And that alone is equivalent to the supreme emperor in your novel 🤣. When compassed in cultivation, the saint rank- Sage is Tier 3C-3A. And Sage Rank- Demi god will be Multiverse rank Tier 2C-2A, And True God Tier Is 1C Dimensional. The strongest is Eternal God Tier 1B-1A. This is the best scale that I can conclude from the many ridiculous realms you have written. I summarize and explain 🥳🤣
A história e boa ate agora,apenas as atualizações sao um pouco inconstantes ,mas isso e o de menos. Continue com o bom trabalho. Nao tem discord?
i just started reading this but i can't drop this feeling that i have read something similar on Wattpad. so far good.
If you like OP stories you'll love this. The character get OP in the first universe and then travels to other universes OP and has fun while getting stronger but unlike some novels that just say they are OP characters but they aren't he's pretty unbeatable every universe he goes to. The writing is well done. It's fun to read even if you haven't read the novels that the worlds the MC goes to are based on. I myself had read TDG the first world he goes to. But the second i had only read the first 20 chapter and the next world i didn't even know the name of the novel but still liked the characters and the world.
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I like this novel very much, author's idea is brilliant, good grammar, nice plot, i hope he can write this novel I like this novel very much, author's idea is brilliant, good grammar, nice plot, i hope he can write this novel I like this novel very much, author's idea is brilliant, good grammar, nice plot, i hope he can write this novel
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Update is slow....................................................................................................................................................................................................................4 days we have to wait for chapters..........
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this is good fanfic bruhh hope you dont drop this...................................... . ................ .......
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Great story, the pace is neither to slow nor to fast. Good choice of harem members, keep in mind that this is not a new story, but mostly ( at least in tdg) the Mc would follow the story, which is progressing faster and without the drama, just changing little things and giving it the ending. The relationships between characters could be improve, but I think it is okay for a fic. The uptades are a little slow, but at least steady. hope solo leveling is at good, and would like TOG to be the next World.
Overall a good story with good development but still feels like going little fast and he didnt have to work to gain power and how did he get different types of law crystals didnt explain.
The author doesn't seem to know what present or past tense is he uses knew when it should be know or told instead of tell that's just the tip of the problems he has with tense's. Sentence structure is good in some places but horrible in other's there's no consistency in the quality of writing. He uses a lot of wrong words that are somewhat related to the word he should be using, I'm guessing google translate here. As for the story.... Things just seem to happen people we haven't seen before are introduced as someone the MC has met before and know. The MC's parents are background characters and are mentioned maybe 3 times in the first 10 chapters, he may as well been an orphan. Finally when i stopped reading i could already tell that this was going the be one of those stories where the MC just pulls skill's out of thin air when he needs them and you'll probably never hear of those skills again.
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really nice story really hoping to see sage emperor get one shotted by nie li and hopefully he goes to other cultivation world and get more waifus but the head waifus goes to zi yun and ning er
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Comn update please.........I love this fanfiction........ please update daily................why don't you add that director of alchemist association ...she also loves mc in the manga
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Muy bueno, me interesa bastante el resto del desarrollo de la historia pero hasta ahora esta bastante bien