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Really good fanfic. Good story. Nice world background. Well written characters. Good romance. What else do you need for a good read?)
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Soooo happy. This one's a gem. The author builds upon characters thoughts and actions in a manner accurate to canon instead of twisting their personalities past recognition. The story flows smoothly. It is a little tedious having to read the stat changes every time, but it adds to the development of the story so oh well..
It’s amazing but the party system is one of the worst themes :( amazing fanfic tho good character development and wolrd development and relationship development 👌🏾
System revealed so dropped. Overall, this novel was good. Not amazing, since it’s a standard system fic but it’s well written with decent grammar and few typos. I won’t go into the many positives and negatives but I’ll say this, never reveal the system in a gamer fic. You will always lose a good percentage of the audience you built. The ones that wanted it revealed would have continued reading anyway, but the readers who do not want it will stop. The negatives always outweigh the positive, from hindering story progression/immersion, forcing character progression/interaction, I can go on and on. Awful decision.
el fia antes de la reescritura era de los mejores fics de naruto, pero ahora es mi fanfic favorito, y eso que mi biblioteca esta llena de fics hasta el tope
Best Naruto System fanfic I have read and also one of the best Naruto fanfics in general. I thought I liked the previous version but...this? It a masterpiece. The characters you have carefully crafted, the plot you created, the world building and history...Amazing. And if that weren't enough, THERE IS HINATA!!! For some reason I am obsessed with Hinata. Probably because she is my first waifu. Normally I like harem. BUT. there are some ships that I like I would rather prefer to be not harem. This is one of them. And hopefully (PLEASE) Naruto and Hinata end up with each other. Anyway. Here, a free Hinata pic.
I don't even know what to say. This turned out to be much more than what I expected. Especially the character development is totally unique and like a breath of fresh air. The other characters don't feel like a one dimensional character but genuinely real characters with different personalities and opinions. The updates are consistent. The grammar is impeccable. I am speechless. Absolutely recommended. ❤️❤️
I'm really liking this story. Although at first it seems a bit strange with people's descriptions, not currently.................................................... .. ..........
Vraiment bon😁 but WHERE IS MY 143 CHAPITER😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????
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Hey author... answer me this... Did you stole the 2014 fanfic from here fanfiction.net/s/10574684/1/Naruto-The-Gamer-Files ???? It was written by MaxFic. You just changed the words a little but the content its 100% the same. And did not bother to even change the title.
I honestly really liked the previous version of the story but this rewrite seems to include a better narrative compared to the previous iteration. Props on the author for their work!
The latest version is good......................................................................................................................................
I'm liking the story, the pacing is nice, well written and a lot of chapters, Author seems to be trying, shown when he looked up every single weapon ten ten used During the fight and commented their picture so that we could better imagine the fight
Revelar spoiler
It has several problems if you consider carefully. Naruto telling about his gamer ability to other people is weird I guess. But I sincerely believe the problem is being blown out of proportion here. Narutoverse doesn't have games . They don't know the acceleration it provides to the user(which in case of Han-jee-Han system is too fast to stop). Not that it matters , by the time they would want him captured , he will be too strong to stop. P.S- He is already jonin level. And the chunin exams are still 3 months away. he is a monster already
Revelar spoiler Très bon j’adore …………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….…………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….…………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….
Just started reading this I enjoyed it so far have finished chapter 59 wish the updates happen more but I understand that writing takes a lot out of people just don’t drop it’s so good so far
Now to be honest even with so many people opposing you're idea of sharing information about the game you still did and that was a good decision since this doesn't look like a spur-of-the-moment decision since it seems to be well thought out I mean these are question most would ask how would naruto buy clothing, food, house appliances and book and stuff even if he had a system without an old man at the age of 50 in his body and you are answering those questions so keep it up author your doing good job so far, I mean I am at chap 16 and this the conclusion I have reached. Thank you author for sharing your creativity with us.
5 stars for the quest in chapter 4, finally a system that doesn't punish you for trying
A good read overall , a massive improvement to the original for sure , I hope the author doesnt turn Naruto into a chick magnet with kurenai and Anko in the group. Dry not to get reduced to degeneracy , dont have more than 2 or 3 girls with naruto. When the number of fanfics that have been destroyed because of this reason have exceeded the number of fingers you have , you know it has to be avoided at all costs. But , its your story really, you dont have to listen to me. Anyways, till this ff has been consistent. All cool
Will he take revenge on Konoha?..............................................................................................................................
5 stars bcuz I like it.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Great story love it. But if you find the time can you create a Shadow Slave fan fic ,l just love your writing style and l think it's perfect for a world like Shadow Slave.
Really good fanfic. Good story. Nice world background. Well written characters. Good romance. What else do you need for a good read?)
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Soooo happy. This one's a gem. The author builds upon characters thoughts and actions in a manner accurate to canon instead of twisting their personalities past recognition. The story flows smoothly. It is a little tedious having to read the stat changes every time, but it adds to the development of the story so oh well..
It’s amazing but the party system is one of the worst themes :( amazing fanfic tho good character development and wolrd development and relationship development 👌🏾
System revealed so dropped. Overall, this novel was good. Not amazing, since it’s a standard system fic but it’s well written with decent grammar and few typos. I won’t go into the many positives and negatives but I’ll say this, never reveal the system in a gamer fic. You will always lose a good percentage of the audience you built. The ones that wanted it revealed would have continued reading anyway, but the readers who do not want it will stop. The negatives always outweigh the positive, from hindering story progression/immersion, forcing character progression/interaction, I can go on and on. Awful decision.
el fia antes de la reescritura era de los mejores fics de naruto, pero ahora es mi fanfic favorito, y eso que mi biblioteca esta llena de fics hasta el tope
Best Naruto System fanfic I have read and also one of the best Naruto fanfics in general. I thought I liked the previous version but...this? It a masterpiece. The characters you have carefully crafted, the plot you created, the world building and history...Amazing. And if that weren't enough, THERE IS HINATA!!! For some reason I am obsessed with Hinata. Probably because she is my first waifu. Normally I like harem. BUT. there are some ships that I like I would rather prefer to be not harem. This is one of them. And hopefully (PLEASE) Naruto and Hinata end up with each other. Anyway. Here, a free Hinata pic.
I don't even know what to say. This turned out to be much more than what I expected. Especially the character development is totally unique and like a breath of fresh air. The other characters don't feel like a one dimensional character but genuinely real characters with different personalities and opinions. The updates are consistent. The grammar is impeccable. I am speechless. Absolutely recommended. ❤️❤️
I'm really liking this story. Although at first it seems a bit strange with people's descriptions, not currently.................................................... .. ..........
Vraiment bon😁 but WHERE IS MY 143 CHAPITER😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????
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Hey author... answer me this... Did you stole the 2014 fanfic from here fanfiction.net/s/10574684/1/Naruto-The-Gamer-Files ???? It was written by MaxFic. You just changed the words a little but the content its 100% the same. And did not bother to even change the title.
I honestly really liked the previous version of the story but this rewrite seems to include a better narrative compared to the previous iteration. Props on the author for their work!
The latest version is good......................................................................................................................................
I'm liking the story, the pacing is nice, well written and a lot of chapters, Author seems to be trying, shown when he looked up every single weapon ten ten used During the fight and commented their picture so that we could better imagine the fight
Revelar spoiler It has several problems if you consider carefully. Naruto telling about his gamer ability to other people is weird I guess. But I sincerely believe the problem is being blown out of proportion here. Narutoverse doesn't have games . They don't know the acceleration it provides to the user(which in case of Han-jee-Han system is too fast to stop). Not that it matters , by the time they would want him captured , he will be too strong to stop. P.S- He is already jonin level. And the chunin exams are still 3 months away. he is a monster already
Revelar spoiler Très bon j’adore …………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….…………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….…………………….………………………………………….……………………..…………………….
Just started reading this I enjoyed it so far have finished chapter 59 wish the updates happen more but I understand that writing takes a lot out of people just don’t drop it’s so good so far
Now to be honest even with so many people opposing you're idea of sharing information about the game you still did and that was a good decision since this doesn't look like a spur-of-the-moment decision since it seems to be well thought out I mean these are question most would ask how would naruto buy clothing, food, house appliances and book and stuff even if he had a system without an old man at the age of 50 in his body and you are answering those questions so keep it up author your doing good job so far, I mean I am at chap 16 and this the conclusion I have reached. Thank you author for sharing your creativity with us.
5 stars for the quest in chapter 4, finally a system that doesn't punish you for trying
A good read overall , a massive improvement to the original for sure , I hope the author doesnt turn Naruto into a chick magnet with kurenai and Anko in the group. Dry not to get reduced to degeneracy , dont have more than 2 or 3 girls with naruto. When the number of fanfics that have been destroyed because of this reason have exceeded the number of fingers you have , you know it has to be avoided at all costs. But , its your story really, you dont have to listen to me. Anyways, till this ff has been consistent. All cool
Will he take revenge on Konoha?..............................................................................................................................
5 stars bcuz I like it.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Great story love it. But if you find the time can you create a Shadow Slave fan fic ,l just love your writing style and l think it's perfect for a world like Shadow Slave.