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this fanfic is so good! i get that it might not be the most unique plot out there but it's honestly so much better than most fanfics! plus i can really tell you've genuinely put in a lot of effort into writing
literally the most perfect tom riddle fanfiction ever! y'all have to read this! i'm not even kidding it's just sooo good! like the balance has me dead
so far i really love your fanfic! very well done! i love how cordelia isn't like a mary sue or a pushover since that's usually how ppl write tom riddle love interests she's a perfect balance of the 'perfect pureblood girl' while also being a normal teen with problems
ooooh that ending tho! like i knew Tom would obvi not just give up and stop because he lost once! i can't wait to see what you have planned in the sequel!! xx
so glad we're getting a sequel for this book! it was very well written and i loved the way you tied everything together at the end and how cordelia got her father's respect too. i will say tho i can't wait to see what more you have planned!
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this is so good??!?! omg like the TALENT i love cordelia's character so much and this deserves to be the number 1 fanfic on here! i can't believe you aren't at like 500k already
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It's really rare to find good HP stories on this website and this is probably one of the best ones. Love the writing style and quality, and the fact that its a play on Voldemort is ingenious. Great work, keep it up author!
hola, soy de argentina y un fanatico de harry potter y muchos de los fan fic que hay en esta pagina y que los chino se esfuerzan en hacer. solo eh visto 3 novelas que van a un enfoque como este de "voldemort" no existira en esta saga el villano cambiara porque siempre es una especie o suerte de AU que le da energia y gusto a la saga, la escritura como lo han mencionado antes esta muy bonita por lo menos en traduccion al español se entiende muy bien. el desarrollo de la historia tiene un enfoque no "unico" sino "singular" por la forma en la cual el autor se expresa al crear el personaje y su punto de vista. actualmente 19/11/2021 es epoca de fan-fic de one piece/marvel/ y hay uno de harry potter pero con un prota dementor (un poco loco xd) este fan-fic actual no brillara de forma increible y de manera inigualable, salvo que este sea tu primer fan-fic de harry potter. Sin embargo promete mucho que a la larga llegue a 100k o quien sabe 1 millon si pasa de los 100k de caracteres o hay 50 caps o 100
very good book, unique plot and nice MC. love the way author writes and triwizard tournament is a very good plotline. it is also displaying tom riddle realistically
It's been a while since I last left a review, and a lot has happened since then so... 1. I love the Triwizard developments! The fact that this story has such a unique plot and that you're able to write it so well is what will always amaze me. 2. The world-building is so good! Even if this is a fanfic you've opened up a new world of HP to the readers and I love that! We're actually learning realistic things about the HP and Tom Riddle universe/era rather than following a basic 'character has a sibling' plotline. 3. Cordelia is such a good OC! I love how she's not conventionally good, but she's not bad either. She's trying to find her place in the world and honestly just being a teen which I feel like everyone can relate to. 4. Overall, the development is killer, world-building is great, updates might not follow an exact schedule but you always post at least 2 chapters when you post, and the character design and world background, in general, are spot on. As always, I love this fanfic!
This fanfic displays Tom Riddle in such a realistic way! I want to read more of it and cannot wait to find out more about what happens next with him and Lia :)
Just want to say thank you so much to everyone who's supporting this fanfic! I never thought it would do well on here but now it's surpassed 10k reads!! I am honoured that people like Cordelia's story so much!
I love this fanfic! Honestly, it's doing so well and the mystery is great! I can't wait to find out what happens with Cordelia and her friends, and how she ends up with Tom
I can't wait to read more about Cordelia and Tom's story! This fanfic is great and is probably the most original Tom Riddle fanfic I've ever read!
:D Writing Quality: 5 Stars -Great use of vocabulary and creates immersion through wirds Character Design: 5 Stars -I haven’t seen a personality that is bland or questionably unrelatable
I love the fact that the Triwizard Tournament; the deadliest thing in the Wizarding World that students can legally do, and Tom Riddle; the deadliest teenager, and both in one fanfic! And Cordelia!!! I don't even know how to describe this amazing MC!
I genuinely don't know where to start with this fanfic! Whenever I read Tom Riddle fanfics there's always either a super weak love interest or a Mary sue, but Dark Paradise certainly broke that stigma! Cordelia Black is strong, sly and a snake; but she's also just a teenager navigating life and I love that! Can't wait to read more! And the Triwizard Tournament twist is so cool! Never seen that before!
I really love it. It's very unique and interesting to read how Cordelia will Conquer her fears. I really want to know what would happened between Cordelia and Tom.
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this fanfic is so good! i get that it might not be the most unique plot out there but it's honestly so much better than most fanfics! plus i can really tell you've genuinely put in a lot of effort into writing
literally the most perfect tom riddle fanfiction ever! y'all have to read this! i'm not even kidding it's just sooo good! like the balance has me dead
so far i really love your fanfic! very well done! i love how cordelia isn't like a mary sue or a pushover since that's usually how ppl write tom riddle love interests she's a perfect balance of the 'perfect pureblood girl' while also being a normal teen with problems
ooooh that ending tho! like i knew Tom would obvi not just give up and stop because he lost once! i can't wait to see what you have planned in the sequel!! xx
so glad we're getting a sequel for this book! it was very well written and i loved the way you tied everything together at the end and how cordelia got her father's respect too. i will say tho i can't wait to see what more you have planned!
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this is so good??!?! omg like the TALENT i love cordelia's character so much and this deserves to be the number 1 fanfic on here! i can't believe you aren't at like 500k already
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It's really rare to find good HP stories on this website and this is probably one of the best ones. Love the writing style and quality, and the fact that its a play on Voldemort is ingenious. Great work, keep it up author!
hola, soy de argentina y un fanatico de harry potter y muchos de los fan fic que hay en esta pagina y que los chino se esfuerzan en hacer. solo eh visto 3 novelas que van a un enfoque como este de "voldemort" no existira en esta saga el villano cambiara porque siempre es una especie o suerte de AU que le da energia y gusto a la saga, la escritura como lo han mencionado antes esta muy bonita por lo menos en traduccion al español se entiende muy bien. el desarrollo de la historia tiene un enfoque no "unico" sino "singular" por la forma en la cual el autor se expresa al crear el personaje y su punto de vista. actualmente 19/11/2021 es epoca de fan-fic de one piece/marvel/ y hay uno de harry potter pero con un prota dementor (un poco loco xd) este fan-fic actual no brillara de forma increible y de manera inigualable, salvo que este sea tu primer fan-fic de harry potter. Sin embargo promete mucho que a la larga llegue a 100k o quien sabe 1 millon si pasa de los 100k de caracteres o hay 50 caps o 100
very good book, unique plot and nice MC. love the way author writes and triwizard tournament is a very good plotline. it is also displaying tom riddle realistically
It's been a while since I last left a review, and a lot has happened since then so... 1. I love the Triwizard developments! The fact that this story has such a unique plot and that you're able to write it so well is what will always amaze me. 2. The world-building is so good! Even if this is a fanfic you've opened up a new world of HP to the readers and I love that! We're actually learning realistic things about the HP and Tom Riddle universe/era rather than following a basic 'character has a sibling' plotline. 3. Cordelia is such a good OC! I love how she's not conventionally good, but she's not bad either. She's trying to find her place in the world and honestly just being a teen which I feel like everyone can relate to. 4. Overall, the development is killer, world-building is great, updates might not follow an exact schedule but you always post at least 2 chapters when you post, and the character design and world background, in general, are spot on. As always, I love this fanfic!
This fanfic displays Tom Riddle in such a realistic way! I want to read more of it and cannot wait to find out more about what happens next with him and Lia :)
Just want to say thank you so much to everyone who's supporting this fanfic! I never thought it would do well on here but now it's surpassed 10k reads!! I am honoured that people like Cordelia's story so much!
I love this fanfic! Honestly, it's doing so well and the mystery is great! I can't wait to find out what happens with Cordelia and her friends, and how she ends up with Tom
I can't wait to read more about Cordelia and Tom's story! This fanfic is great and is probably the most original Tom Riddle fanfic I've ever read!
:D Writing Quality: 5 Stars -Great use of vocabulary and creates immersion through wirds Character Design: 5 Stars -I haven’t seen a personality that is bland or questionably unrelatable
I love the fact that the Triwizard Tournament; the deadliest thing in the Wizarding World that students can legally do, and Tom Riddle; the deadliest teenager, and both in one fanfic! And Cordelia!!! I don't even know how to describe this amazing MC!
I genuinely don't know where to start with this fanfic! Whenever I read Tom Riddle fanfics there's always either a super weak love interest or a Mary sue, but Dark Paradise certainly broke that stigma! Cordelia Black is strong, sly and a snake; but she's also just a teenager navigating life and I love that! Can't wait to read more! And the Triwizard Tournament twist is so cool! Never seen that before!
I really love it. It's very unique and interesting to read how Cordelia will Conquer her fears. I really want to know what would happened between Cordelia and Tom.