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the story is good and have high quality just wondering if you will update more of this fan-fic ????????????????????????????????????????????
overall the fanfic is a very enjoyable to read and I recommend this to those are looking for Op Mc with No harem ....so yeah this fanfic is amazing, this is my first time writing a review ... hope the author updates it been a months 🤕😭🥰
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Please good sir please don't stop writing this this is one of my favorite world traveling novels please (fillers.....up to 140 characters)
im dying from first chap, not to be rude or anything but it was just stupidly funny, but still good first chap imma not lie. Also good wishes
Im glad i gave this story a chance, i almost didnt becAuse Ive seen cultivation in your tags, so keep iT up author!
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Your pfp is so intimidating that without even reading the story I gave you a 5-star review. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .
funny and chill MC. He's OP but doesn't let the power get to his head. Do far I've liked everything in this fic.🖤💙💜🧡💛💚🖤💙💜🧡💛💚🖤💙💜🧡❤💛💚
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Starts off as a crack fic but gets serious later on in the story. Added to my library, keep up the good work author san.
I love everything about this book and I mean everything especially the comedy even made me lightheaded sometimes from all the laughing 👍👍😃😃😃😃😂😂👍👍👍👍👍
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Honestly, entered with no expectations, but was surprised that the mc is not a SIMP/DÛMBÂSS/DOESNTKNOW HOWTHEWORLDWORKS/SOMUCHPLOTARMORITHURTS. This is good, give it a read, it seems like absolute shâite when you read the title, but it isnt, this mc feels unique. Please don't drop please.don't drop please don't drop please don't rdspskjdrop. Guuto
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will there be future romance??? ................................................................................................................................
the grsmmar is amazing in this one and the potential if written properly is great too So please continue! So please continue! So please continue! So please continue!
Shameless writer/reviewer here! Its my first time writing as Im just a victim of boredom during these times... After every chapter I hope you guys can give critique on grammar and my vocabulary For example, if I used a word too often or a phrase perhaps? Anyway, hoping for the support!
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Man… it’s so cringe when people actually refer to a truck as “Truck-kun.” Just say truck normally. It’s fine the first time, but it’s dumb after you repeatedly say it.
the story is good and have high quality just wondering if you will update more of this fan-fic ????????????????????????????????????????????
overall the fanfic is a very enjoyable to read and I recommend this to those are looking for Op Mc with No harem ....so yeah this fanfic is amazing, this is my first time writing a review ... hope the author updates it been a months 🤕😭🥰
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Please good sir please don't stop writing this this is one of my favorite world traveling novels please (fillers.....up to 140 characters)
im dying from first chap, not to be rude or anything but it was just stupidly funny, but still good first chap imma not lie. Also good wishes
Im glad i gave this story a chance, i almost didnt becAuse Ive seen cultivation in your tags, so keep iT up author!
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Your pfp is so intimidating that without even reading the story I gave you a 5-star review. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .
funny and chill MC. He's OP but doesn't let the power get to his head. Do far I've liked everything in this fic.🖤💙💜🧡💛💚🖤💙💜🧡💛💚🖤💙💜🧡❤💛💚
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Starts off as a crack fic but gets serious later on in the story. Added to my library, keep up the good work author san.
I love everything about this book and I mean everything especially the comedy even made me lightheaded sometimes from all the laughing 👍👍😃😃😃😃😂😂👍👍👍👍👍
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Honestly, entered with no expectations, but was surprised that the mc is not a SIMP/DÛMBÂSS/DOESNTKNOW HOWTHEWORLDWORKS/SOMUCHPLOTARMORITHURTS. This is good, give it a read, it seems like absolute shâite when you read the title, but it isnt, this mc feels unique. Please don't drop please.don't drop please don't drop please don't rdspskjdrop. Guuto
wowwwwww im new to this app but i already found a gem to wait for 👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
it is amazing in the simplest of words! please continue! Please continue! please continue! Please continue! please continue! Please continue!
Any fanfic with good grammar is great for me, it saves the deciphering part of it 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
will there be future romance??? ................................................................................................................................
the grsmmar is amazing in this one and the potential if written properly is great too So please continue! So please continue! So please continue! So please continue!
Shameless writer/reviewer here! Its my first time writing as Im just a victim of boredom during these times... After every chapter I hope you guys can give critique on grammar and my vocabulary For example, if I used a word too often or a phrase perhaps? Anyway, hoping for the support!
well im bored so.. jsisjakskaplsskapwpdiuabskajdisndidisjdndosjddusijddj iosiensoshdwqswoskoandhsisgdkeosjaiskahosndoahsiahiabdiwhwpslaksna
aaaaaaaaabstdbsubsufndbsisme. w. js. eje. susb wuwba8ehwb7wbejeei. wusbsunaejeinsms. enemsmskjwkenwjjwjwjwjwjjswbwbwhhshshsshhshshs succinct why's duct
Man… it’s so cringe when people actually refer to a truck as “Truck-kun.” Just say truck normally. It’s fine the first time, but it’s dumb after you repeatedly say it.