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this so slow paced. so much unwanted chats and internal thoughts that it will bore you out
bisakah kamu berhenti menulis. kamu hanya membuang buang waktu pembaca. setidaknya sebelum mau menjadi penulis banykan baca novel China.hanya 10 bab pertama yang bagus. banyak percakapan yang tidak penting.fokus kekuatan tidak jelas. MC bahkn belum menguasai sesuatu dengan baik tapi sudah lansung berpikir untuk menguasai yang lain. MC yang sering di dintmidasi tetapi masih sangat naif.. sampah
Not sure why this is in anti-hero genre, even without the mismatch genre the MC is a disappointment and the story has way too much plot armor.
Hey guys I am not a pro at giving reviews. I mostly like weak to strong stories and this is one of my favourite stories because of the character development and how the first few chapters were really very interesting for me. Note for Author : Hey Author san, hope you are healthy now and of you ar not please get better soon and be back to your 100%, from one of your fans. I want to read this story and never wanna stop. So I genuinely hope you get better and write many more chaps ❤️ Thank you for your hard work. Your stories do make a difference and help me stop being anxious ❤️ All the best !
So, first, thank you author for your efforts. Keep trying. There are some serious issues with this. #1 Everyone hating him, this is irrational. #2 Unrealistic scenarios (Burglar and police) #3 Plot armor, seriously there's enough for a battleship. #4 Senseless powerups. People like to read these for enjoyment. One of the basics of it all is suspension of dis-belief. That means they have to accept certain things as being 'fact' in the story setting. But if those things you are trying to do are irrational then it becomes a lot of work to accept it, which is not enjoyable at all. If you want your protagonist to be strong from the start, you need to make it logical and rational. In less than 2 days you had him doing that many powerups, and by the way, police wouldn't just walk away and let him go like that. He was literally found with all the loot around him. So what if he knocked the burglar out, they would take him to the station for a 'statement' while they checked the evidence. Especially since it was such a big heist. Then letting him get such nonsensical powerups from that loot. You are basically writing yourself into a corner since the more you give him the more difficult it is to come up with a scenario to challenge him. This is why so many 'weak to strong' stories are done gradually.
Revelar spoiler
Character does illogical things constantly. Plot holes everywhere. Bad dialogue and long winded paragraphs that are enough to make you cringe. Have to constantly fight the urge to skip over content. Characters constantly fall for obvious lies. There is no accountability. If I had any hair left I would pull it out in frustration.
Nice novel but too many unnecessary descriptions and explanations. Stopped reading cos it made me so bored
i'm sorry but it's one of the most bad novel i have ever read. _To much word for no reason. _exagerated bullying. _got power but still no good use of it.
good work it would be better if it wasn't your tepical startup of story , i mean the story is not going to be interesting Just because of some OP power anyone can figure out atleast half of the story if you read atleast 20 chapters except some action, adventure well keep improving that's all
Revelar spoiler
Story is well written and is event overall. My biggest complaint would be that the story jumps arounds too much. Thought I think this is the author just being inexperienced. Or maybe there’s a grand plan that just couldn’t be connected fast enough. I dont like how the story painted a terrible situation due to being powerless & then just ingores it like. The kid gets beat up on a regular basis so why doesn’t it warp his character?
Don't read the first 8 chapters!!! The problem isn't just the negativity but the dissonance you would feel afterwards I have read until chapter 15. The atmostsphere the 8 chapters made was broken. The 8 chapters shouldn't have even been made in the first place or edit it so it isn't so dark because even if you could stomach the dark part, the story would feel jarring after. The author tries to salvage the family from being very cold but it doesn't work and only makes the mc look bad and stupid or makes the mother look super stupid. Chapter 15 especially, the beginning of the story made him look stupid just because (this one has no excuse unlike the earlier chapter where he didn't reveal his power [emotions]). He couldn't just lock the door and you tell me this situation has been repeating!? It made him look like a "oh woes me!" character rather than someone we should feel sad for the rest of the chapter. I suggest to edit the 8 chapters or delete it as it just doesn't fit the story.
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Don't stop please you're the best and these novel is very good ☺️😊♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💟♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Hey, guys y menya vse nice Ia chestno ne chital its proizvedenie no zayvlay chto its bozestvenoe proizvedenie Povesti Dostoevskogo rydom ne stoyat no samoe lychee proizvedenie its Kishki Vsem sovetuy
the book is good I like story I think it has too much explaining about few things can be shortened at few places like the mc but I hate the chapter unlock thing why can't everything be unlocked
Great story and world building but the main is way to naive considering what happened to him. It's somewhat irritating and seems to be getting worse
I have given this book a try, I honest have. I read all the way up to chapter one hundred and eight, and could not take the torture anymore. The story line, had everything it needed to be great, and that’s why I kept reading; hoping it would get better. Yet, I was met with a bunch of inner thoughts, and long explanations, over every single thing. I understanding the need to explain, but should it take two to four chapters, just to get a single thought out ? Randy, spent more time pondering, and thinking of every single thing that it becomes dumb and dry super fast. Not to mention that he has to be one of the dummest, if not most naive, Mc’s out there. Once again, I really think the book has what it needs to be great. Only, if you focus more on depth and not unnecessary filter to fill the pages. Example, Hey randy, you’re eating breakfast ? Hey randy, I didn’t expect to see you today? Hey randy, you can now assimilate this crystal core? two to four pages later of randy thinking of how to respond, rambling in his inner thoughts, or trying to make any decision”.
So far I am loving it I think it has a lot of potential! I think that if the novel gets a better release schedule like 6 a week and we break through chapter 350-400 this novels popularity will soar because it will get the nervous readers to start putting coins and golden tickets into the novel because nobody likes supporting a novel they love and then it gets cancelled. And from what I have seen usually about 350-400 is the usual amount in which people gain confidence especially the binge readers lol. Keep up the good work And I think we can gradually break into the low 200’s in the ranking and then keep going!❤️
I’ve only just began this book up to ch 37. The world building is very interesting 5/5 and the first chapters are great but the more you read the worst it gets everything seems very forced and the author doent know when to stop the internal monilog and explain the subject form a 3rd person pov. The parents starts off has being very bad parents and neglecting the mc but it seems the author suddenly changes his mind. I do think this story has potential if the author starts fixing his mistakes and stop making everything sounding so forced. Not worth coins but I do think you should read this on a free website.
The first 10 chapters were good but it goes downhill after that The pace is too slow The characters lack substance The Mc character is unauthentic Many supporting characters that are irrelevant to the story
not once the character did something that makes sense he endured all those I thought he will become more cold but instead of that he became a virjin Mary also the tags you had put has no meaning to it just say that he is an idiot with so much potential also what's with that idiots parents they literally are so cruel to him but he still couldn't leave that abusive home they thought it was for his best i just have to say author you took anti hero tag to whole another level instead you must have wrote emotional fool
Very interesting character design and nice story development but slow in updating chapters. So if the author can update more chapters frequently then I can guess this will be bestest book I have ever read and also I want to thank author for publishing such a good book. Keep it up!!!!
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The synopsis feels like it is creating hype. The MC is more like a Naruto who doesn't seem to have any kind of negative emotion (even towards enemies who have literally tortured him). It kind of creates a misalignment between the MC's past and the rest of the story. Would have been better if it was one or the other - a lighter past or a darker protagonist. Still great work on the writing quality. Grammar is good enough and it's a fun read if you are willing to skip through a few chapters that feel a lot more like fillers.
This book is pretty awesome, I started reading it and the world development along with the character starting point was incredible! This is a really good storyline and has a ton of potential, however this author is obviously very new, he over explains everything. The progress is infuriatingly slow and it takes forever for anything to happen. I’m sure as the book goes on till get better but for now it’s kinda hard to read.
The MC is too dumb and makes a ton of stupid decisions. His parents are powerful but he still doesn't tell them that the Silvermoon family repeatedly tried to assassinate him. Half the novel he spends talking to the system rather than real people
Revelar spoiler
Hey guys! This BMDR here, the author of this book. This is my second novel and so far, I have managed to write 40 chapters with 68,263 words at the moment. My dear readers, I would like to know how you feel about this novel overall. Is it a good read or not? Is the pace too slow or too fast? Is this worth your power stones and such? However, I mostly care about the reviews of my novel(s) as without it, I will not know how to improve the book, so do tell me what you think about my book: [Blood Assimilation] through your honest reviews. "Bang!" Please, I am kowtowing and begging you to do me this favor; if not for me, at least for other new readers of my book. Other than that, you can also check out my other and first novel, [Two Worlds: Same But Different]. Thank you for your time and have good reading experience.
this so slow paced. so much unwanted chats and internal thoughts that it will bore you out
bisakah kamu berhenti menulis. kamu hanya membuang buang waktu pembaca. setidaknya sebelum mau menjadi penulis banykan baca novel China.hanya 10 bab pertama yang bagus. banyak percakapan yang tidak penting.fokus kekuatan tidak jelas. MC bahkn belum menguasai sesuatu dengan baik tapi sudah lansung berpikir untuk menguasai yang lain. MC yang sering di dintmidasi tetapi masih sangat naif.. sampah
Not sure why this is in anti-hero genre, even without the mismatch genre the MC is a disappointment and the story has way too much plot armor.
Hey guys I am not a pro at giving reviews. I mostly like weak to strong stories and this is one of my favourite stories because of the character development and how the first few chapters were really very interesting for me. Note for Author : Hey Author san, hope you are healthy now and of you ar not please get better soon and be back to your 100%, from one of your fans. I want to read this story and never wanna stop. So I genuinely hope you get better and write many more chaps ❤️ Thank you for your hard work. Your stories do make a difference and help me stop being anxious ❤️ All the best !
So, first, thank you author for your efforts. Keep trying. There are some serious issues with this. #1 Everyone hating him, this is irrational. #2 Unrealistic scenarios (Burglar and police) #3 Plot armor, seriously there's enough for a battleship. #4 Senseless powerups. People like to read these for enjoyment. One of the basics of it all is suspension of dis-belief. That means they have to accept certain things as being 'fact' in the story setting. But if those things you are trying to do are irrational then it becomes a lot of work to accept it, which is not enjoyable at all. If you want your protagonist to be strong from the start, you need to make it logical and rational. In less than 2 days you had him doing that many powerups, and by the way, police wouldn't just walk away and let him go like that. He was literally found with all the loot around him. So what if he knocked the burglar out, they would take him to the station for a 'statement' while they checked the evidence. Especially since it was such a big heist. Then letting him get such nonsensical powerups from that loot. You are basically writing yourself into a corner since the more you give him the more difficult it is to come up with a scenario to challenge him. This is why so many 'weak to strong' stories are done gradually.
Revelar spoiler Character does illogical things constantly. Plot holes everywhere. Bad dialogue and long winded paragraphs that are enough to make you cringe. Have to constantly fight the urge to skip over content. Characters constantly fall for obvious lies. There is no accountability. If I had any hair left I would pull it out in frustration.
Nice novel but too many unnecessary descriptions and explanations. Stopped reading cos it made me so bored
i'm sorry but it's one of the most bad novel i have ever read. _To much word for no reason. _exagerated bullying. _got power but still no good use of it.
good work it would be better if it wasn't your tepical startup of story , i mean the story is not going to be interesting Just because of some OP power anyone can figure out atleast half of the story if you read atleast 20 chapters except some action, adventure well keep improving that's all
Revelar spoiler Story is well written and is event overall. My biggest complaint would be that the story jumps arounds too much. Thought I think this is the author just being inexperienced. Or maybe there’s a grand plan that just couldn’t be connected fast enough. I dont like how the story painted a terrible situation due to being powerless & then just ingores it like. The kid gets beat up on a regular basis so why doesn’t it warp his character?
Don't read the first 8 chapters!!! The problem isn't just the negativity but the dissonance you would feel afterwards I have read until chapter 15. The atmostsphere the 8 chapters made was broken. The 8 chapters shouldn't have even been made in the first place or edit it so it isn't so dark because even if you could stomach the dark part, the story would feel jarring after. The author tries to salvage the family from being very cold but it doesn't work and only makes the mc look bad and stupid or makes the mother look super stupid. Chapter 15 especially, the beginning of the story made him look stupid just because (this one has no excuse unlike the earlier chapter where he didn't reveal his power [emotions]). He couldn't just lock the door and you tell me this situation has been repeating!? It made him look like a "oh woes me!" character rather than someone we should feel sad for the rest of the chapter. I suggest to edit the 8 chapters or delete it as it just doesn't fit the story.
Good d ++++++++++++++++±++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++±++++++++++++++++++++
Don't stop please you're the best and these novel is very good ☺️😊♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💟♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Hey, guys y menya vse nice Ia chestno ne chital its proizvedenie no zayvlay chto its bozestvenoe proizvedenie Povesti Dostoevskogo rydom ne stoyat no samoe lychee proizvedenie its Kishki Vsem sovetuy
the book is good I like story I think it has too much explaining about few things can be shortened at few places like the mc but I hate the chapter unlock thing why can't everything be unlocked
Great story and world building but the main is way to naive considering what happened to him. It's somewhat irritating and seems to be getting worse
I have given this book a try, I honest have. I read all the way up to chapter one hundred and eight, and could not take the torture anymore. The story line, had everything it needed to be great, and that’s why I kept reading; hoping it would get better. Yet, I was met with a bunch of inner thoughts, and long explanations, over every single thing. I understanding the need to explain, but should it take two to four chapters, just to get a single thought out ? Randy, spent more time pondering, and thinking of every single thing that it becomes dumb and dry super fast. Not to mention that he has to be one of the dummest, if not most naive, Mc’s out there. Once again, I really think the book has what it needs to be great. Only, if you focus more on depth and not unnecessary filter to fill the pages. Example, Hey randy, you’re eating breakfast ? Hey randy, I didn’t expect to see you today? Hey randy, you can now assimilate this crystal core? two to four pages later of randy thinking of how to respond, rambling in his inner thoughts, or trying to make any decision”.
So far I am loving it I think it has a lot of potential! I think that if the novel gets a better release schedule like 6 a week and we break through chapter 350-400 this novels popularity will soar because it will get the nervous readers to start putting coins and golden tickets into the novel because nobody likes supporting a novel they love and then it gets cancelled. And from what I have seen usually about 350-400 is the usual amount in which people gain confidence especially the binge readers lol. Keep up the good work And I think we can gradually break into the low 200’s in the ranking and then keep going!❤️
I’ve only just began this book up to ch 37. The world building is very interesting 5/5 and the first chapters are great but the more you read the worst it gets everything seems very forced and the author doent know when to stop the internal monilog and explain the subject form a 3rd person pov. The parents starts off has being very bad parents and neglecting the mc but it seems the author suddenly changes his mind. I do think this story has potential if the author starts fixing his mistakes and stop making everything sounding so forced. Not worth coins but I do think you should read this on a free website.
The first 10 chapters were good but it goes downhill after that The pace is too slow The characters lack substance The Mc character is unauthentic Many supporting characters that are irrelevant to the story
not once the character did something that makes sense he endured all those I thought he will become more cold but instead of that he became a virjin Mary also the tags you had put has no meaning to it just say that he is an idiot with so much potential also what's with that idiots parents they literally are so cruel to him but he still couldn't leave that abusive home they thought it was for his best i just have to say author you took anti hero tag to whole another level instead you must have wrote emotional fool
Very interesting character design and nice story development but slow in updating chapters. So if the author can update more chapters frequently then I can guess this will be bestest book I have ever read and also I want to thank author for publishing such a good book. Keep it up!!!!
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The synopsis feels like it is creating hype. The MC is more like a Naruto who doesn't seem to have any kind of negative emotion (even towards enemies who have literally tortured him). It kind of creates a misalignment between the MC's past and the rest of the story. Would have been better if it was one or the other - a lighter past or a darker protagonist. Still great work on the writing quality. Grammar is good enough and it's a fun read if you are willing to skip through a few chapters that feel a lot more like fillers.
This book is pretty awesome, I started reading it and the world development along with the character starting point was incredible! This is a really good storyline and has a ton of potential, however this author is obviously very new, he over explains everything. The progress is infuriatingly slow and it takes forever for anything to happen. I’m sure as the book goes on till get better but for now it’s kinda hard to read.
The MC is too dumb and makes a ton of stupid decisions. His parents are powerful but he still doesn't tell them that the Silvermoon family repeatedly tried to assassinate him. Half the novel he spends talking to the system rather than real people
Revelar spoiler
Hey guys! This BMDR here, the author of this book. This is my second novel and so far, I have managed to write 40 chapters with 68,263 words at the moment. My dear readers, I would like to know how you feel about this novel overall. Is it a good read or not? Is the pace too slow or too fast? Is this worth your power stones and such? However, I mostly care about the reviews of my novel(s) as without it, I will not know how to improve the book, so do tell me what you think about my book: [Blood Assimilation] through your honest reviews. "Bang!" Please, I am kowtowing and begging you to do me this favor; if not for me, at least for other new readers of my book. Other than that, you can also check out my other and first novel, [Two Worlds: Same But Different]. Thank you for your time and have good reading experience.