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too much useless filler between mc and the system . the story is very excellent except the useless titles that I don't even know where he got even in the prologue doesn't says . the mc is ok I guess depend on the author what kind of character he/she makes meh its not fanfic to judge for very early mc for 11 chapters . updates . meh write 9 chapters then disappear for 10days. too slow world background is meh not even explainable it is it . the world is mystery that doesn't explain . why the world have a dungeon . why there is so much danger to the easiest dungeon why the world exist . why there so many dimensions . why there so there someone who can seal the power or mc if he so much powerful etc . but it depend on you if you want to read this novel but for me as scale 1-10 . I rate it 4 .
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
too much useless filler between mc and the system . the story is very excellent except the useless titles that I don't even know where he got even in the prologue doesn't says . the mc is ok I guess depend on the author what kind of character he/she makes meh its not fanfic to judge for very early mc for 11 chapters . updates . meh write 9 chapters then disappear for 10days. too slow world background is meh not even explainable it is it . the world is mystery that doesn't explain . why the world have a dungeon . why there is so much danger to the easiest dungeon why the world exist . why there so many dimensions . why there so there someone who can seal the power or mc if he so much powerful etc . but it depend on you if you want to read this novel but for me as scale 1-10 . I rate it 4 .