Empress of the World

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Gool_Tv

NobleQueenBee is a master storyteller. I've read alot of titles on WebNovel some good some bad. This novel falls well into the former category. It's a perfect blend of charachters, world building,plot, and magic that keeps me reading to see what happens next. If I take each individual category (character s, world building,plot) by themselves. They are solid, but not the best I've seen. It's the pace, presentaion, and story telling that really makes this a good novel. While the novel has humor and is on the lighter side of the spectrum. It has its darker undertones especially in the begining of the novel (Aurora's back story). All in all Its a great novel. I don't really like FL but this is an exception. I recommend you take a look. Now as a side note. When and if you take the plunge, there will be a character named Renat. I won't spoil but I recommend that we petition to get him killed off or maimed. you'll understand when you get there. he's a really a despicable and vile creature, an antagonist through and through. I personally prefer him crippled. He must suffer for his crimes & future crimes can't let him off to easily...

LV 15

Dauphne_Maples

I love this story! It is well-written. The characters are relateable and well-deVeloped. There are gray characters as well aS "good" and "bad" - true to life not shallow - except for the ones that are! The world development is alSo good, interesting, and easy to imaigine. My only complaint is that I can't send gifts to the author or golden tickets for the story!

LV 5

NobleQueenBee

Shameless author plug: This book has been in the works for a long time. I’m so excited to share it with the world! There’s adventure, love, romance, betrayal, restoration and a hopefully a laugh or two along the way. I’d love to know what you think!

LV 13

kizitomayanja

I have found this book to be really... what's the word, amazing(feels like an understatement) The characters grow on you and I mean each one of them... The book's amazing, descriptions leave you hanging on every word and story flow is just right... You'll notice from the start that the story is well-laid out and will even be surprised that each chapter will have something to make you scroll to the next... I love this book... Great Job to the author... Just wonderful work...#fivestar🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

LV 14

wolfcubb

over all an amazing story so far, great writing. I went into a trans-like state and read the first 10 chapter and up to this point I have only seen 4 spelling mistakes, 1 misgramer (I might be wrong) but nothing else.. only thing is, if you want to know more about the world itself you'll have to ask the author or read their notes at the end of each chapter (which I like but some might not) All in all, it's it's hidden gem and I love it

LV 14

Little_North_Star

Its definitely worth it reviews, our fl and ml are just🤗, this is one of the best novel ive read..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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DMC_MAX

Good plot and story concept with an amazing character design. Good story premise, with a good writing quality. Although I haven't read to the end, I can feel that this book is worth reading.

LV 13

Photosphere

Been a long time since I had such a good read. *Writing Quality: Excellent Delivery, although a little long, paragraphs are well structured, I'd usually not put myself more than a single dialogue per paragraph unless a dialogue it's accompanied by an inner monologue, but that's a personal preference, everything else is genuine, the story is easy to follow, there are no flamboyant terminologies that someone with average English can understand, 10/10. *Stability of Updates: It has a firm schedule, hence, 10/10. *Story Development: Surreal, it gives an accurate description of the background of the world, the royal court, the MC's status, how she lives and her feelings, it develops slowly into the promised premise (Become a fitting Queen) while giving it the surrealism of how actual monarchy would work, it's marvellous, 10/10. *Character Design: I have to say I was flabbergasted with the relationship between the family trio at the start of the series, never expected to identify myself with the FL to the point that I felt bad for her, after reading so much, such self-identification substance is lost, but I truly felt bad for her and hated the Empress to the core, in mere chapters, that speaks a lot of how characters are portrayed, their dialogues and the subtle details that speak louder than words and insults, still... here is where I find the only flaw in this novel, Devrim. His inclusion was too abrupt to the point it felt heterogeneous to the entire development prior, Aurora's reaction shouldn't have been to readily accept a candidate (even if she's choosing him herself) after having her mother reject her in such a way her entire life while her father was hopeless to protect her, she'd have trust issues. After her father, the only person that could salvage her, moved on, she'd enclose herself and trust no one, she'd eventually open her heart to Devrim and call him a friend, but perhaps after several tests acknowledge friendship, this is the only matter that ended up being 'surrealist' to me, compared to the rest of what I read. *World Background: Accurately described, the only thing I'd probably improve is to use the scenery description to boost the relevance of a scene, if a meeting is casual like spring and floating grass or as torrential as the rain which thunderstrikes, a dusty meeting with feelings in between, the atmosphere description will always enhance the perception of a scene, among other description such as geography and etc... which I can't touch upon as those depend of the scope of your novel. Overall, one of the best stories I have read on this site gave me a vibe of Les Miserables for some reason with the father being Jean Valjean, but that's my opinion. Best Regards!

LV 12

ThirdNobleGirl

It’s five stars. It creates a world that is both fanciful and relatable. It doesn’t pull punches or rely on cliffhangers. The plot drives the reader to the next chapter and the next. Enjoy!!

LV 15

Dauphne_Maples

This book is very interesting and well-written. I Really like many of the well-developed lead characters. Even the unlikable characters Easily come to life while reading the book. The plot doesn't drag, and there are not 'filler chapters' that prolong the main story or deviate into side tangents like some I have read in WN. I will definitely read other books by this author in the future! 😃

LV 12

OGPROWillie

Not bad tbh i like it ..........................................................................................................

LV 4

DamnedChicken

Impeccable writing is a rarity in a web novel. But this story right here got that covered for you. The flow of sentences is natural, and the vocabulary is rich enough for the readers to enjoy it thoroughly, without being irritated by the unwanted repetitions. Though I haven't caught up to the latest chapters just yet. I think I have read enough to leave a review. I am a wandering reader, I don't care about genre or lead as long as the story is good. As such, I have to say, this story has one of the most interesting hooks In all of the novels I have ever read. Without a doubt, it easily comes into my top 5 FL stories. It is a melodramatic slice of life, a little serious at times with unforeseen twists and turns waiting at every corner. It was a treat to read for me from the very first chapter to the current 158th one. At last, I just want to thank the author for keeping this free. Now I want to catch up on this story as soon as possible.

LV 14

Ash_Monarch

Alright fellow readers, the time has come for another Ash review! Let me start off by saying this review is totally not aimed at promoting the author's other novel called The Guardian of Rynlee cough cough. If you haven't read it already, then what are you waiting for? Otherwise I will hunt you to the very ends of the earth- ahem I mean I will kindly recommend you to read the book cough (whistles cheerfully). Now onto the actual review! Having already come in to this novel with the experience of reading one of the Author's work, I was excited, expecting great things and looking forward to what would happen. And boy was I proved right! I don't want to spoil anything really but let me dive into a few key things I would like to say. (Clears throat and taps the microphone) The writing quality is superb (if there was a word for the very best I would have used it). Next the MC Aurora is a bright ray of sunshine even though the earlier chaps are not the happiest for her. She is a relatable character (which I as male btw 👀) was able to emphasise with. The author added a bigger twist when she was suddenly thrust into the deep end at such a young age. Alright time for the sidecharacters! What can I say really that hasn't already been said? As with all the sidecharacters across the author's two works, the ones in this book are not one dimensional. They each have their own personality (whether good or bad) and have a clear motive as to why they did certain things. From what I have read so far the plot progresses smoothly and the mysteries surrounding everything slowly get revealed the deeper you tread into this work of art. Although I haven't read that much, I felt that a review was due. So for any of u readers seeing my comment and hesitating whether to read the novel, I say go for it and you will not be disappointed. Instead you will be in for a captivating ride with the author's amazing storytelling. Finally this is a note to the author herself: Keep up the amazing work! I'm rooting for you! P.s. this novel is definitely a 10/10 :)

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FinnBlue

I have read so far only a portion of the story but i may say that this series is for sure good! I have highly enjoyed reading the story (although i might need to call he fbi soon xD) and cant wait to read further. More extra points Bee gets for making it fully free, which is amazing in my opnion I highly suggest reading and giving the book a chance to shine, because it for sire deserves it.

LV 12

ThirdNobleGirl

Perfection. Looking for adventure? You got it. Romance? Check. Strong women and clever men? Yup. Magic, mystery, heart, laughter and far off lands? Look no further. You’ve found a winner!

LV 10

f0011

I am a fairly new webnovel user, but i think i am at a point where i can distinguish between a novel that is good and captivating, and a novel that is a little less. This novel is literally great. I loved reading the first few chapters, it was kinda dark, but that's what i like! I would love to see the future of the new World Empress.

LV 3

1Sword2Peaks

This is a beautifully written story. It's easy to tell that the elements have been thought out well and the way the words flow from sentence to sentence is like a cup of fragrant coffee: it hard to not finish once you take the first sip. The story always paints a vibrant picture of the world and the characters living within it and there is a cohesion in the way the events progress. I feel like this is a book that is not lacking in any aspects a story should have. The way Aurora is written is beautiful and yet fills my heart with pain. I hope that she will find all the happiness in the world, eventually. Tl;dr, I highly recommend this book. Keep up the good work, author!

LV 2

CYPHER_OCTAGON

Everyone loves a well told story. There are fairly few authors who could make this wish come true. the author has rather vivid imagination. this is a well told story. The characters have real depth to them, even in the first few chapters. This is simply amazing. Thank you and good luck miss author

LV 4

The_Celestial_King

The first chapter was mind blowing one can feel the tension the young empress was in at a young age she inherit a world. Then, in the next chapter, we dive into the past where you will be rolled into the emotional situation of the Aurora. This story is just magnificent I hope it gets the attention it deserves