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if the author reads this please let me know if there is a part of the story missing or what how did the girl end up with him please fix and it would flow better thanks.
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This book starts out pretty well but , just as as mc starts to become strong it finishes like the author is riding in a vehicle with no driver and is about to go off a cliff .
I tried to give this story a chance. I really did. However, the author introduces concepts without much thought. He says one thing when he means another. At a certain point, it looks like there are just missing chapters. He introduces a character, Irene, but never explains how she meets up with the MC. For a number of chapters, the author refers to a chicken seller. No idea if this is slang for something or if it means exactly what it says. The reason for my confusion, is that the MC doesn't have any chickens. At least none were introduced. I will have to stop reading the story at this point. The MC has started making plans, and is thinking to himself, but it is not done in a logical or coherent manner causing the reader to have difficulty understanding the thought process of what is going on.
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There is no consistency, none, 0. None in the story and none in the words used, its always changing. he will say one thing like somthing being over and then later he writes its still going on when he said before it wasnt?? The name of somthing? well now its randomly called something else. No consistency in numbers, always a random amount and does not match the actions made. Even the MC's personality is very unlikeable, people are dying of hunger and he is showing off pics of his food. The story is still a little enjoyable to read but these problems do make it annoying at times, I like the idea of the story but not all the mistakes and MC's bad personality. It could have been really good without all the mistakes with consistency and numbers. I'd use a fastpass to read it but I would not pay for this.
Its ok i like reading this kind of stuff but missing storyline, author forgets what happened from the previous chapter like skills and items he has. Its just annoying theres no continuity in the story it jump chapters wish the author could fix the missing storyline and rewrite whats needed to be rewritten.
It's okay. It's similar to Digging to Survive and it does suffer from the same problems as it. Author tries to world build a bit too much and ends up ruining a fairly simple premise in attempts to make action. Also lots of plot skips. Some stuff is skipped over and stuff appears out of nowhere like Irene who gets saved from an attack but the plot skips the part where they get her on their boat. Also lots of grammar mistakes with commas.
OK now it´s official, the Story is f.... up .... random jumps, sometimes buy thing then don´t have them, charactors appears randomly (no story when joining) autor must be drunk or smoke all day..... rly.... good story potential but that crashed it Look ch 73: before Irene (Nun) wasn´t in the team, now she is it, Q: when did she join and how?!!!!! CH 68: buy Elementary swimming skill books 500. Intermediate swimming skill books 1000. -> CH 71 gets swimming skill book that he needs the most -.-
Great novel one of the best on trial reads. ….,,.,,,…. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .......
The overall story is really good and I would recommend people to start reading this BUT I sincerely request people not to read it unless you are made of stronger stuff so as to cope with the plot holes and the machine translation.
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wanted to like it but the math was off, details changed randomly, and then it got racist. so I'm okay, thanks. maybe without the "stereotypes" scattered throughout i would stuck with it.
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Like every other chinese*****... Guess that explain it...............................................................................................
ok i know im not the sharpest toll in the shed but when did the nun meet up with mc it went from her drowning in a cave then she was on the boat did i miss something
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From the name it seems to be a similar kinda world like all other beast taming novel. But believe me you will be pleasantly surprised. I liked the overall plot of this novel would recommend it.
I highly recommend this novel!! i need more chapters im hooked! take my money so i can enjoy more of this please big boss! I highly look forward to seeing the future of this novel!
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if there is an unfair transaction, I don't follow it, because xianxia garbage NPC xianxia.....................................................
honestly this book is very mediocre. it's an ok read if ur bored. it does contradict itself in some chapter..................................
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It is a good story, not the best, but good, the mc has a cheat ability, & he has some helpers & a Antagonist, but the spelling is off at times, & Most importantly they don't know how to count, for instance at one point it said he planted 100 Crops when he only used 20 meters of farmland, or randomly his resources dissappear, or for making a knife he had to use 3,000 wood, which makes no sence. Basically it's a OK book, wouldn't recommend it, but wouldn't go out of my way to say it's terrible. Except for their math.
Revelar spoiler if the author reads this please let me know if there is a part of the story missing or what how did the girl end up with him please fix and it would flow better thanks.
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This book starts out pretty well but , just as as mc starts to become strong it finishes like the author is riding in a vehicle with no driver and is about to go off a cliff .
I tried to give this story a chance. I really did. However, the author introduces concepts without much thought. He says one thing when he means another. At a certain point, it looks like there are just missing chapters. He introduces a character, Irene, but never explains how she meets up with the MC. For a number of chapters, the author refers to a chicken seller. No idea if this is slang for something or if it means exactly what it says. The reason for my confusion, is that the MC doesn't have any chickens. At least none were introduced. I will have to stop reading the story at this point. The MC has started making plans, and is thinking to himself, but it is not done in a logical or coherent manner causing the reader to have difficulty understanding the thought process of what is going on.
Revelar spoiler There is no consistency, none, 0. None in the story and none in the words used, its always changing. he will say one thing like somthing being over and then later he writes its still going on when he said before it wasnt?? The name of somthing? well now its randomly called something else. No consistency in numbers, always a random amount and does not match the actions made. Even the MC's personality is very unlikeable, people are dying of hunger and he is showing off pics of his food. The story is still a little enjoyable to read but these problems do make it annoying at times, I like the idea of the story but not all the mistakes and MC's bad personality. It could have been really good without all the mistakes with consistency and numbers. I'd use a fastpass to read it but I would not pay for this.
Its ok i like reading this kind of stuff but missing storyline, author forgets what happened from the previous chapter like skills and items he has. Its just annoying theres no continuity in the story it jump chapters wish the author could fix the missing storyline and rewrite whats needed to be rewritten.
It's okay. It's similar to Digging to Survive and it does suffer from the same problems as it. Author tries to world build a bit too much and ends up ruining a fairly simple premise in attempts to make action. Also lots of plot skips. Some stuff is skipped over and stuff appears out of nowhere like Irene who gets saved from an attack but the plot skips the part where they get her on their boat. Also lots of grammar mistakes with commas.
OK now it´s official, the Story is f.... up .... random jumps, sometimes buy thing then don´t have them, charactors appears randomly (no story when joining) autor must be drunk or smoke all day..... rly.... good story potential but that crashed it Look ch 73: before Irene (Nun) wasn´t in the team, now she is it, Q: when did she join and how?!!!!! CH 68: buy Elementary swimming skill books 500. Intermediate swimming skill books 1000. -> CH 71 gets swimming skill book that he needs the most -.-
Great novel one of the best on trial reads. ….,,.,,,…. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .......
The overall story is really good and I would recommend people to start reading this BUT I sincerely request people not to read it unless you are made of stronger stuff so as to cope with the plot holes and the machine translation.
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wanted to like it but the math was off, details changed randomly, and then it got racist. so I'm okay, thanks. maybe without the "stereotypes" scattered throughout i would stuck with it.
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Like every other chinese*****... Guess that explain it...............................................................................................
ok i know im not the sharpest toll in the shed but when did the nun meet up with mc it went from her drowning in a cave then she was on the boat did i miss something
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From the name it seems to be a similar kinda world like all other beast taming novel. But believe me you will be pleasantly surprised. I liked the overall plot of this novel would recommend it.
I highly recommend this novel!! i need more chapters im hooked! take my money so i can enjoy more of this please big boss! I highly look forward to seeing the future of this novel!
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if there is an unfair transaction, I don't follow it, because xianxia garbage NPC xianxia.....................................................
honestly this book is very mediocre. it's an ok read if ur bored. it does contradict itself in some chapter..................................
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It is a good story, not the best, but good, the mc has a cheat ability, & he has some helpers & a Antagonist, but the spelling is off at times, & Most importantly they don't know how to count, for instance at one point it said he planted 100 Crops when he only used 20 meters of farmland, or randomly his resources dissappear, or for making a knife he had to use 3,000 wood, which makes no sence. Basically it's a OK book, wouldn't recommend it, but wouldn't go out of my way to say it's terrible. Except for their math.
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