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A young man with the ability of Killer Queen in the world of My hero academia (This is the first thing I´ve ever written and English isn´t my first language.)
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Honestly, my problem is that the story feels too bland. It progresses too fast. The characters really don't have that much feeling as if they're just dolls. A backstory similar to many other stories on this platform. World background is just normal My Hero Acadamia, it'd be more interesting if you added some twists to it. Only reading around 1 chapter and a half the character himself already seems edgy. Why is he always alone though? There wasn't anything that would've caused him to become a loner. As a child he would've been more social with others.
the story is too hasty, mc is devoid of any emotion, the dialogue seems to be made up of dolls and the relationship with jiro seems forced without any interest except music, the story is almost entirely a monologue is also the same as the canon, addition of the mc not even the course of history changes, I don't even understand why mc is lonely and antisocial when he is a child, the length is of the chapter is ok and one comes out a day
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The author tries to write a sort of sociopathic character, however, the story lacks all that makes such stories intresting. Character interaction is pretty much non existent, and you could cut out all the scenes with the mc and you'd pretty much have a transcript of the bnha anime for all the difference he causes to the cannon plot line. Events just sorta happen around him, you could exchange him for the literal pile of wet cardboard that happens to be his personality and the entertainment value would remain pretty much the same.
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Only read chapter 1. The writing quality is so bad that its obviously a non-native English speaker is writing it. Its different to, but as bad as a Chinese to English MTL. so... unless ur really desperate for something to read, I would avoid this.
the endig left a lot to be desired pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog pog ugty5yytuff
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Overall, a very well written novel. I also really liked the fact that Jiro was the MC's love interest. However, the story was rushed, especially in the end, and I saw absolutely no reason to add in Eren from AOT as a character. However, a good read nonetheless.
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this book I think is great because the story, the plot, the flashback, time skip and the other is really great I am happy to read this story. good luck. I will wait the other story from you. thank you for your book
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Too rushed, I can't enjoy anything. Also, it's too centered around the protagonist and too many details are left out. On the other hand, the relationship with the girl is too superficial.
Adding Eren and original characters was really bad idea in my opinion. But overall, its not that bad, i mostly liked beacause of Killer Queen being MC's main ability.
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'A' for effort, the story is very bland. it follows the story like glue and doesn't diverge greatly. the MC is a OC from the world who have no ambition.
R O B O T ... Bip Bu Bu Bap... Bi Bap... Bu Bap... Bip Bu Bu Bap.... .........................................................................
too much monologue. jsjzuzhsbsgzuzjnsjxhxuxjdjsnsbxjxkndbsjdjxjdhdhxjsbsbdidjbdhsusjwbdjxidknwhsidkfbeusicnjsiskxnskpornsidjjdisnsbdiwjsnhsjsjsnshsisjshxusjbshubnaoaiqhhaisjshsjzoakajsjsiaokaajjsjssn.comkskwowhahhajsjshhs
It's too rushed to enjoy the scene, the mc feels emotionless without a distinct characteristics, i don't really have a problem with the grammar it's just the dialogue feels dull which makes it kinda boring.......