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Notice to new readers

This story is merely a draft and because it is a draft, there are many grammatical errors and inconsistencies, both in the characters' behavior and powers.

I started writing this story with my friend just to distract us from our day to tumultuous day, however, even our intention to write this story being just for our own entertainment, this was the first story we decided to go to the end with.

Therefore, the definitive version will come more balanced in a matter of power, more "human" in matter of feelings and behaviors and, more importantly, with fewer grammatical errors. At least that's what we expect... I can't promise to not have grammatical errors, I'm still studying.

We know the potential of this story, and we know it is in a deplorable state. So we thank those who continued to read our story and for those, we are writing the definitive version that will be much better than this one. This I guarantee.

The definitive version will be out to you all read shortly after the end of the draft.

See ya — All J.


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