42Reseñas
4.63
- Calidad de escritura
- Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
- Desarrollo de la Historia
- Diseño de Personajes
- Antecedentes del mundo
Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás
Escribe una reseña
This story is very captivating and really interesting I gave the updating stability 3 stars because it has been long the story was updated. Please author don't leave us hanging 🥺
Writing quality 5/5 story development 4/5 character design 5/5 updating stability 1/5 (1y and still no update) world background 4/5 UPDATE PLSSSSSSSSSSSS
?mnbydudutjzdruztusutid6titusietututisyistisstutusyistiyisyisiysyisyidyidyisyis8etiwyisyidyeiyisykdyistusgjzgjsyjstwuruatuatuatuatjztuzgjzgjstjstisyis
its been 6 month since the last update. Did you quit or are you taking a break but i been waiting for you to get back to work but of well its well make and i like it at the end just please after your done with your break come back to the novel
What I love about this book is how different compared to most romance book in this site. This book told us the internal conflicts between Teren & Iesa, and this is the reason why I get hooked onto this book. The writing quality is pretty decent and easy to read, although there might be some grammar mistakes that you can fix it. Story development so far is like I've mentioned before. Character design kind of questionable, where the only character that are depicted in a slight detail were Teren & Iesa. While the rest were up to the readers. Updating Stability is a little bit questionable, considering this book kind of old and had a 200+ chapters, so I doubt the author was slightly burnt out to continuing this book. And the world background in this book wasn't that big of a deal, because the readers are too focused on the characters. Overall; I like the story of this book, but it can be better and re-polished if you insist. Somehow reminded me of Classroom Of The Elite. Where Teren is like Ayanokouji, and Iesa is like Horikita.
The story had an interesting premise that I was drawn to but after the first 40 chapters, it delved into utter boredom. The female Mc is so annoying gosh. The mc for all the hype of how bad he is I never really get to see him be ruthless and kill. He leaves ppl alive. I kind of understand sparing the female Mc but why the guy who reported him. I tried to continue after those chapters but I can't subject myself to that torture. All in all, it was an ok read up to 40.
the world that the Author created is one that is wonderful and well written. every character even the smallest ones have an unique personality.
Really good novel. Thought you should use GRAMMARLY to correct some of your errors. They are mostly missing words and confusion like between It's, it is
exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good
Amazing story.It really is quite relatable I.I kinda like the mc.After you finish reading one chapter,you hold yourself to read another.The narration style is also satisfying,you don't have to fry your brain cells.
I found this when I searched up phyco to see if their were any good evil character stories. Here I find this gem, great for me. So far I am loving it and expect even more even if I am ou on the first 30 chapters.
Great novel! I love the charcters development, especially Terek, and the world background and power system is fantastic also. though I still dont fully understand how spirits work I like the concept a lot. the only downside is that from time to time grammer and writing is a bit confusing, but its only occasionally, so its not a big deal.[img=recommend]
well it's pretty good and the character development is quite smooth if you're a fan of romance that doesn't get too much in the way of the story the this is for you buh tbh I don't like romance themed books so am off but I have to say this was a good read
I truly hope that you, Author, finish this story or else... 😊🔪. Also, i really like the complexiy of the characters like Teren, Iesa and Trisha.
expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp expexpexpexp expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
It’s definitely a very unique and interesting story! The characters are all very diverse and contributes in some way, and there’s also a good balance of many elements - the only thing, in my own complete opinion, is that I think the tempo of the story gets a bit uneven in later chapters. It’s definitely worth reading though, and I’m excited for future chapter!
This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i love this book [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp
Really enjoyable. Do you have illustrations? if so please post them. Characters are good, waiting for more fast pass to binge. keep up the good work
........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Plot 4/5 Character Development 5/5 Romance 4/5 (Hated the point where he changed her memories) Comedy 5/5 (It's perfect, not too much) Action Scenes 3/5 (Need more improvement) It's a soild 4. There are a few things that author should work one but still I'm really loving it so far. Author did said it's a HAREM and as a fan of decent harem novels. I think it'll be a good one since author is very skilled in explaining characters.. sigh idk why It's so underrated smh.
More More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Interesting but left a lot to be desired. Inwas intrigued by the synopsis of a psychopathic MC but left with a typical Japanese MC with a slight twist of psycho. Of course, he has a quirk of being overly bashful and shy that is typical of Japanese MCs to the point I just roll my eyes. Before the novel starts to charge for the chapters, the MC leaves someone alive for an unknown reason - which I assume it will be “answered away” later- but I found it to be completely unreasonable and frankly just a way for the author to push the plot forward. Pretty weak, imo. Now that is out of the way, I do like the MC and female lead relationship, especially how he helps her with her problem at home. The comedy is pretty good, the other characters have a lot of potential as well. The story seems to have a lot of depth to it possibly, so that is a plus as well. Overall, enjoyed a lot of the novel but annoyed with some other parts of the novel. The writing quality was decent for the most part but there were times of wrong verb usage, funny sentence structure, etc but it did not cause too much of an issue.
Revelar spoiler
Very interesting storyline! Love the inner thoughts of both characters. It's amazing how both characters are acting as the lead instead of only one. Very excited to see what happens next, I couldn't put it down! 2mth
this book is really good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
This book is awesome the mc teren is a Psychopath andis havIng character development witch is difficult to do without it making sense hes is one anf furthere more he is op but not to the points hes god yet for noe
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello, readers. This is an entry for WPC #194 themed Superhumans. I hope you can support it. There are some dark tones but not too dark - also, no NTR... just saying. Thanks!
This story is very captivating and really interesting I gave the updating stability 3 stars because it has been long the story was updated. Please author don't leave us hanging 🥺
Writing quality 5/5 story development 4/5 character design 5/5 updating stability 1/5 (1y and still no update) world background 4/5 UPDATE PLSSSSSSSSSSSS
?mnbydudutjzdruztusutid6titusietututisyistisstutusyistiyisyisiysyisyidyidyisyis8etiwyisyidyeiyisykdyistusgjzgjsyjstwuruatuatuatuatjztuzgjzgjstjstisyis
its been 6 month since the last update. Did you quit or are you taking a break but i been waiting for you to get back to work but of well its well make and i like it at the end just please after your done with your break come back to the novel
What I love about this book is how different compared to most romance book in this site. This book told us the internal conflicts between Teren & Iesa, and this is the reason why I get hooked onto this book. The writing quality is pretty decent and easy to read, although there might be some grammar mistakes that you can fix it. Story development so far is like I've mentioned before. Character design kind of questionable, where the only character that are depicted in a slight detail were Teren & Iesa. While the rest were up to the readers. Updating Stability is a little bit questionable, considering this book kind of old and had a 200+ chapters, so I doubt the author was slightly burnt out to continuing this book. And the world background in this book wasn't that big of a deal, because the readers are too focused on the characters. Overall; I like the story of this book, but it can be better and re-polished if you insist. Somehow reminded me of Classroom Of The Elite. Where Teren is like Ayanokouji, and Iesa is like Horikita.
The story had an interesting premise that I was drawn to but after the first 40 chapters, it delved into utter boredom. The female Mc is so annoying gosh. The mc for all the hype of how bad he is I never really get to see him be ruthless and kill. He leaves ppl alive. I kind of understand sparing the female Mc but why the guy who reported him. I tried to continue after those chapters but I can't subject myself to that torture. All in all, it was an ok read up to 40.
the world that the Author created is one that is wonderful and well written. every character even the smallest ones have an unique personality.
Really good novel. Thought you should use GRAMMARLY to correct some of your errors. They are mostly missing words and confusion like between It's, it is
exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good Good good good Good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good Good good good good
Amazing story.It really is quite relatable I.I kinda like the mc.After you finish reading one chapter,you hold yourself to read another.The narration style is also satisfying,you don't have to fry your brain cells.
I found this when I searched up phyco to see if their were any good evil character stories. Here I find this gem, great for me. So far I am loving it and expect even more even if I am ou on the first 30 chapters.
Great novel! I love the charcters development, especially Terek, and the world background and power system is fantastic also. though I still dont fully understand how spirits work I like the concept a lot. the only downside is that from time to time grammer and writing is a bit confusing, but its only occasionally, so its not a big deal.[img=recommend]
well it's pretty good and the character development is quite smooth if you're a fan of romance that doesn't get too much in the way of the story the this is for you buh tbh I don't like romance themed books so am off but I have to say this was a good read
I truly hope that you, Author, finish this story or else... 😊🔪. Also, i really like the complexiy of the characters like Teren, Iesa and Trisha.
expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp expexpexpexp expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
It’s definitely a very unique and interesting story! The characters are all very diverse and contributes in some way, and there’s also a good balance of many elements - the only thing, in my own complete opinion, is that I think the tempo of the story gets a bit uneven in later chapters. It’s definitely worth reading though, and I’m excited for future chapter!
This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i love this book [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp
Really enjoyable. Do you have illustrations? if so please post them. Characters are good, waiting for more fast pass to binge. keep up the good work
........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Plot 4/5 Character Development 5/5 Romance 4/5 (Hated the point where he changed her memories) Comedy 5/5 (It's perfect, not too much) Action Scenes 3/5 (Need more improvement) It's a soild 4. There are a few things that author should work one but still I'm really loving it so far. Author did said it's a HAREM and as a fan of decent harem novels. I think it'll be a good one since author is very skilled in explaining characters.. sigh idk why It's so underrated smh.
More More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Interesting but left a lot to be desired. Inwas intrigued by the synopsis of a psychopathic MC but left with a typical Japanese MC with a slight twist of psycho. Of course, he has a quirk of being overly bashful and shy that is typical of Japanese MCs to the point I just roll my eyes. Before the novel starts to charge for the chapters, the MC leaves someone alive for an unknown reason - which I assume it will be “answered away” later- but I found it to be completely unreasonable and frankly just a way for the author to push the plot forward. Pretty weak, imo. Now that is out of the way, I do like the MC and female lead relationship, especially how he helps her with her problem at home. The comedy is pretty good, the other characters have a lot of potential as well. The story seems to have a lot of depth to it possibly, so that is a plus as well. Overall, enjoyed a lot of the novel but annoyed with some other parts of the novel. The writing quality was decent for the most part but there were times of wrong verb usage, funny sentence structure, etc but it did not cause too much of an issue.
Revelar spoiler Very interesting storyline! Love the inner thoughts of both characters. It's amazing how both characters are acting as the lead instead of only one. Very excited to see what happens next, I couldn't put it down! 2mth
this book is really good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
This book is awesome the mc teren is a Psychopath andis havIng character development witch is difficult to do without it making sense hes is one anf furthere more he is op but not to the points hes god yet for noe
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello, readers. This is an entry for WPC #194 themed Superhumans. I hope you can support it. There are some dark tones but not too dark - also, no NTR... just saying. Thanks!