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Douluo Dalu 1 : Fire And Lightning

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Autor: Enryu_2322

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Shirou is a teenager who lives in loneliness and emptiness.

When he was asleep in his small house, Shirou suddenly woke up in a very wide expanse of meadow with a light that said that he had good news.

What's the next story? Please read directly

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Enryu_2322

I wrote this fanfiction for fun. If you don't like the story, please don't read it. There are many other Douluo Dalu fanfiction stories that you can read on webnovels. Dear readers, thank you for coming and reading my story.

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Matthew_Cantaros

The story started out good. With a reasonable mc. Then comes the time for training, oh boy, I can understand that the character is supposed to be op, but does he have to be so op that a 5 year old can handle that much gravitational force even if he consumed the herbs, I mean give him at least 2 years to adapt and absorb the medicinal value of those two 10,000 year old plants. For me it would've been a great story if you'd have him grow a bit more older, maybe 10 to 13 and from 5 till then he will have to work hard to control his two powerful martial spirits. I mean he basically went from zero to lvl30 in what, 4 months?. Even with the increase in physiology a 5year old's body is still a child's body. I get that he is supposed to be OP but common man, you expect me to believe that he did all that in just 4 months with a child's body with a stronger physique? And then there comes the new arc after the time skip. You expect me to believe that a grown person managing a bank would not at least be a little suspicious that an 8 year old child just walked in and deposit to what amounted to at least be considered rich in that time period? It would have been okay if he'd have been at least a teenager, that would have been believable for he could have gotten it in a reasonable way. I mean who would believe that an 8 year old child can get that amount of money? Not only that but after that he manage to convince two, (from what I know) at least at a spirit master individual to have a discussion with him? an 8 year old child albeit an OP 8 year old, but nonetheless an 8 year old child in the two's eyes. Even if he acted more matured than other 8 year old, they still dont know that he is powerful. So why? I can understand if he is a little bit older but an 8 year old? After that I just stopped if I missed some details, I'm sorry but at that point I'm just at the point of just skimming the chapters. I know its not for me, maybe others may like it but not me. Anyways now that I expressed it all out it still has a great writing quality. At the end of the day its your fanfic so do what you like to do

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MrSheta
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Well, this is to qualify the story and well I will say that it is good, since I had read its previous version and I will say that the author will know how to handle the story well, but I will leave my vote at 3 because I actually liked the previous version much more, MC's wife disappeared or at least I didn't see her appear when they deverian in the previous version and honestly only that change made it impossible for me to continue reading, I take away something that I liked to read previously, so in summary, it is a good story if You didn't read the previous version, but for me, I won't start reading it.

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AscheCWPM

There's a few things I can say about this story but overall, I would recommend it. The grammar could use some work as the author has spelling mistakes, uses commas instead of periods, and they often use the wrong form when using gender words (uses grandson when describing a female or using him/his when talking about a female character) The rankings can also get confusing because it's not the rankings used in the novel/manhua (Spirit Saint = Soul Sect?) Story development is very copy paste in the first few chapters when the MC is training and he does get OP within those chapters but it's with DD4 in mind. Stability is great! As is story development and character design. Not much world building done yet though but I look forward to it.

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Dio_The_Sage

This is a good story to read, just a bit of a warning, this fic is following the naming of the animated version, so it may be a little bit confusing for manhua readers.

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ReaderKei

Please the don’t Drop the story just got up to the latest chapter hope for more to come 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

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I’m reluctant to write anything, but the story is good........................................................................................................................

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bro its been a year and please comeback 🙏

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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: Goodbye World. 3 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: Welcome to the New World 3 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: Starting the Training 3 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: Awakening the Martial Soul 3 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: Absorbing Soul Rings and Immortal Plants 1 3 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Absorbing Soul Rings and Immortal Plants 2 3 years ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: Absorbing Soul Rings And Immortal Plants 3 3 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Shirou's Enhancement of Strength 3 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: 100,000 Year Soul Ring 3 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Tian Dou City (Re-edit) 3 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: First Encounter With Ning Fenzhi 3 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12: Discussion With Ning Fenzhi and Sword Douluo 3 years ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Invitation to Join Seven Treasure Title Glazed Clan 3 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14 : Embarrassed Chen Xin 3 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: Talking Business with Sect Master Tai Tan 3 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: Gu Rong's Shocking Information. 3 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: That kid named Shirou 3 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Tian Dou Great Battle Arena 3 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: Shirou's First Match in the Battle Arena 3 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: You Talk Too Much! 3 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: Buying Slaves 3 years ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: Memories That Doesn't Want To Remember 3 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: Raise Disciples 3 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Ciel and Lily's First Meeting 3 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: Starting to Train Ciel 3 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: A Gift For Ciel 3 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27 : Shocking Information (Re-edit) 3 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: Venerable Poison Douluo Dugu Bo 3 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: Dugu Bo's Surprise 3 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: Soul Power Advanced Control Ability 3 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: Extremely Strong Martial Soul 3 years ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: Dugu Bo's Thoughts 3 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: The Hot Yang Spring and the Cold Yin 3 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: Dugu Bo's Hope 3 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Before the Third-Party Meeting 3 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Gathering All Parties 3 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: Dugu Yan's Curiosity 3 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: Starting the Process. 3 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: Secret Revealed 3 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: Nine Treasure Title Glazed 3 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: Shirou's Power 3 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: Refining Pill and Evolution Pill 1 3 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: Refining Pill and Evolution Pill 2 3 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: Refining Pill and Evolution Pill (end) (Re-Editing) 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45: The Rise of Ciel's Martial Soul 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46: Disappearance of the Poison In Dugu Yan's Body 3 years ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47: The Birth of the Jade Phosphorus Martial Soul 3 years ago

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