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definitely my number 1 favourite story in terms of everything, overall 5 stars. although could you possibly put a bio page at the end as it can be a bit hard to remember what every move muyang uses is and does as there are quite a lot.
everything is perfectly done, from the main character to the side characters, everything was well thought of before having being put into the story. if possible could you add a bio section for the character as its quite difficult to remember each of his abilities and what they do, that's about the only problem I have so I won't lower the rating since its perfect. keep up the good work and i hope you make more perfect stories like this one for other series such as naruto, DBZ, One piece, etc.
was a good start but the MC suddenly snaps at two sentences when he has handle much worse from his teacher and that just made me drop this with the MC doing a 180
Revelar spoiler
Ненавижу оригинальные женские персонажи, и не логические движения главных героев. Автор испортил хорошую историю тупым главным героем что не видел дольше собственного носа
I rate this 4.6, because there are no changes from the og bleach other than the presence of 2 original characters, the author doesn't want to change anything from the original work i guess since the mc does not prevent anything like he could've stopped aizen before he was a thing but no, the mc wants to see bleach in 3d other than some minor changes i see nothing new and for your information I'm bitter they killed off yamaji again
I dropped it at chapter 30. Not because the story wasn't good, I kind of felt it was getting better and better and the story progressed and even at the start the concept was interesting and good. Also the grammar was without any problems I could spot. The reason I dropped it is because the plots were kind of forced with and without any rhythm. But mainly what annoyed me was that the MC was acting so childish it was getting ridiculous. For example someone taunts him a little and he's already getting so mad he's ready to risk his life or getting expelled after just one or two sentences like he is a third-rate villain in a movie... Or even though he is already 40+ years old (counting just the years he lived in bleach AU) he is it still blushing like a little kid after getting teased, like come on!! Writing quality - 5 stars. Updating stability - 5 stars. Story development - 1 stars. Character design - 1 stars. World background - 5 stars.
It is a fine bleach fanfic. My main issue is that the riding gets worse and worse with each chapter.
it's more like slice of life story little action. nice way to kill time. but don't expect anything....,
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A Bleach fanfic that may come off as odd at times. Some points were enjoyable while others left me scratching my head in confusion. Could definitely use some proof-reading and editing.
hey author san,this fanfic was good,its enjoyable to read. But i seem to noticed that this fanfic seemed different than the first time i read it, i mean in every chapter it always like it got skip to another event like vibe. Way different when i first read it that its more long in chapter and more complete.
Hope next time you make the mc more intelligent , no one like stupid, annoying mc in fanfiction
This story is much better than "marvel with zanpakto." or whatever. one of the worst stories ever written, hands down. like God awful bad. I didn't realize the writer of this wrote that. I must say this story is a big improvement. still its progress is very slow and a bit boring. the writing isn't great but im guessing English is at best your second language. im trying to reach canon before giving up but its a struggle. hopefully the story gets better as it progresses.
I don't know how else to explain it other than it's gotten pretty boring I'm surprised I lasted to chapter 210........................................................................
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The best bleach FF i ever read, the balance between the difference the MC make which change the plan of aizen and other charachters is good add on it the MC who adapte with the world pf bleach at the best way and the character development of his is perfect. keep it going mate[img=update][img=update]
What did I even expect from a mc Who has a chinese name? Mc gets a lot stronger after the time skip. Now it would be a good thing normally. But we didnt even see how he killed his first guy. He just got a sword and then next second he already killed 100 People because he lost himself or something. Then he gets random power up because he "refuse to die". He then sucks the c*ck of his zampaktou (figuratively) because why not, its a chinese novel and they like to over exaggerate everything.
Overall this fic is really an awesome and great one though just a question?? Is Kusu Muyang's lover? Just for clarification purposes because it seems they fell in love with each other for a long time or something not that I'm complaining but I'm curious though the fact that both muyang and kusu lost their virginity to each other really piqued my interest so when did muyang and kusu had their 'first time' I don't know but then again I'm interested and curious about their relationship which is surprisingly a good feeling.
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It’s an okay story but the grammar gets bad. It feels like a Chinese novel. Most of the time and it can be hard to read. But other than that the story is great I’m already at chapter 140
Grammer is bad The plot is the same in the way that the mc's IQ drops to 1 and he wastes 100 years each time for the plot to continue in total (till chapter 130) he wastes 200 years then remembers he needs to train (also bad timing for big time skips) very very annoying OC that clings to him Mc could literally finish everything yet his IQ dropped or he holds back or something else every time pretty much a cycle that happens every time which is very frustrating it's better to watch bleach as nothing will change anyway.
It started out good . But near 70th chapter it's as if the author had a Stroke , The grammer from then is so bad that it resembles a MTL . Can anyone tell me does the quality increase ?
hmm...how should i say i read till chapter 34 with fear for each chapter... since the author has hinted that the mc has only anime knowledge thus reading this fanfic is quite a gamble . -THE MOST DANGEROUS THING IS NOT BEING IGNORANT . -THE MOST DANGEROUS THING IS TO THINK YOU KNOW SOMETHING BUT THAT SOMETHING IS ACTUALLY WRONGBUT YOU BELIEVE YOU ARE RIGHT FROM KNOWING ONLY A SMALL PART OF THE INFORMATION OF WHICH LEADING YOU TOWARDS MORE WRONG. to note Hikifune Kirio is a big FAT glutton in the future but MC dont know this sigh makes me scared. MC doesnt know that yachiru is actually zaraki's zanpakuto. MC doesnt know who yawtch is.
i need to give this book three stars on story development because the author twnd to have time skips in the book and after the mc first meeting with stark and lily, the story development become boring because mc still following canon story
I like this, most Chinese novels use Chinese residence names, but these are just names and the rest follow the plot. love chinese novels that follow the storyline
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worth to read up to 150 chapters but beyond that it would be better to avoid, mc keeps getting nerfted, dumbo plot, lame jokes, trash, anyway if you want to enjoy reading a bleach ff especially after after watching Bleach TYBW, better avoid this for your health
definitely my number 1 favourite story in terms of everything, overall 5 stars. although could you possibly put a bio page at the end as it can be a bit hard to remember what every move muyang uses is and does as there are quite a lot.
everything is perfectly done, from the main character to the side characters, everything was well thought of before having being put into the story. if possible could you add a bio section for the character as its quite difficult to remember each of his abilities and what they do, that's about the only problem I have so I won't lower the rating since its perfect. keep up the good work and i hope you make more perfect stories like this one for other series such as naruto, DBZ, One piece, etc.
was a good start but the MC suddenly snaps at two sentences when he has handle much worse from his teacher and that just made me drop this with the MC doing a 180
Revelar spoiler Ненавижу оригинальные женские персонажи, и не логические движения главных героев. Автор испортил хорошую историю тупым главным героем что не видел дольше собственного носа
I rate this 4.6, because there are no changes from the og bleach other than the presence of 2 original characters, the author doesn't want to change anything from the original work i guess since the mc does not prevent anything like he could've stopped aizen before he was a thing but no, the mc wants to see bleach in 3d other than some minor changes i see nothing new and for your information I'm bitter they killed off yamaji again
I dropped it at chapter 30. Not because the story wasn't good, I kind of felt it was getting better and better and the story progressed and even at the start the concept was interesting and good. Also the grammar was without any problems I could spot. The reason I dropped it is because the plots were kind of forced with and without any rhythm. But mainly what annoyed me was that the MC was acting so childish it was getting ridiculous. For example someone taunts him a little and he's already getting so mad he's ready to risk his life or getting expelled after just one or two sentences like he is a third-rate villain in a movie... Or even though he is already 40+ years old (counting just the years he lived in bleach AU) he is it still blushing like a little kid after getting teased, like come on!! Writing quality - 5 stars. Updating stability - 5 stars. Story development - 1 stars. Character design - 1 stars. World background - 5 stars.
It is a fine bleach fanfic. My main issue is that the riding gets worse and worse with each chapter.
it's more like slice of life story little action. nice way to kill time. but don't expect anything....,
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A Bleach fanfic that may come off as odd at times. Some points were enjoyable while others left me scratching my head in confusion. Could definitely use some proof-reading and editing.
hey author san,this fanfic was good,its enjoyable to read. But i seem to noticed that this fanfic seemed different than the first time i read it, i mean in every chapter it always like it got skip to another event like vibe. Way different when i first read it that its more long in chapter and more complete.
Hope next time you make the mc more intelligent , no one like stupid, annoying mc in fanfiction
This story is much better than "marvel with zanpakto." or whatever. one of the worst stories ever written, hands down. like God awful bad. I didn't realize the writer of this wrote that. I must say this story is a big improvement. still its progress is very slow and a bit boring. the writing isn't great but im guessing English is at best your second language. im trying to reach canon before giving up but its a struggle. hopefully the story gets better as it progresses.
I don't know how else to explain it other than it's gotten pretty boring I'm surprised I lasted to chapter 210........................................................................
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The best bleach FF i ever read, the balance between the difference the MC make which change the plan of aizen and other charachters is good add on it the MC who adapte with the world pf bleach at the best way and the character development of his is perfect. keep it going mate[img=update][img=update]
What did I even expect from a mc Who has a chinese name? Mc gets a lot stronger after the time skip. Now it would be a good thing normally. But we didnt even see how he killed his first guy. He just got a sword and then next second he already killed 100 People because he lost himself or something. Then he gets random power up because he "refuse to die". He then sucks the c*ck of his zampaktou (figuratively) because why not, its a chinese novel and they like to over exaggerate everything.
Overall this fic is really an awesome and great one though just a question?? Is Kusu Muyang's lover? Just for clarification purposes because it seems they fell in love with each other for a long time or something not that I'm complaining but I'm curious though the fact that both muyang and kusu lost their virginity to each other really piqued my interest so when did muyang and kusu had their 'first time' I don't know but then again I'm interested and curious about their relationship which is surprisingly a good feeling.
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It’s an okay story but the grammar gets bad. It feels like a Chinese novel. Most of the time and it can be hard to read. But other than that the story is great I’m already at chapter 140
Grammer is bad The plot is the same in the way that the mc's IQ drops to 1 and he wastes 100 years each time for the plot to continue in total (till chapter 130) he wastes 200 years then remembers he needs to train (also bad timing for big time skips) very very annoying OC that clings to him Mc could literally finish everything yet his IQ dropped or he holds back or something else every time pretty much a cycle that happens every time which is very frustrating it's better to watch bleach as nothing will change anyway.
It started out good . But near 70th chapter it's as if the author had a Stroke , The grammer from then is so bad that it resembles a MTL . Can anyone tell me does the quality increase ?
hmm...how should i say i read till chapter 34 with fear for each chapter... since the author has hinted that the mc has only anime knowledge thus reading this fanfic is quite a gamble . -THE MOST DANGEROUS THING IS NOT BEING IGNORANT . -THE MOST DANGEROUS THING IS TO THINK YOU KNOW SOMETHING BUT THAT SOMETHING IS ACTUALLY WRONGBUT YOU BELIEVE YOU ARE RIGHT FROM KNOWING ONLY A SMALL PART OF THE INFORMATION OF WHICH LEADING YOU TOWARDS MORE WRONG. to note Hikifune Kirio is a big FAT glutton in the future but MC dont know this sigh makes me scared. MC doesnt know that yachiru is actually zaraki's zanpakuto. MC doesnt know who yawtch is.
i need to give this book three stars on story development because the author twnd to have time skips in the book and after the mc first meeting with stark and lily, the story development become boring because mc still following canon story
I like this, most Chinese novels use Chinese residence names, but these are just names and the rest follow the plot. love chinese novels that follow the storyline
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worth to read up to 150 chapters but beyond that it would be better to avoid, mc keeps getting nerfted, dumbo plot, lame jokes, trash, anyway if you want to enjoy reading a bleach ff especially after after watching Bleach TYBW, better avoid this for your health