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You know just warning i’ve never read this story i just made my decision to give this 1 star because i read the harem list. 20 FKING WOMAN DAWG?
First couple chapters was okay. Then turned into a Japanese Ero Light Novel. The story is a harem that uses DC names. That's probably the only way for it to get some initial attention.
I don't know much as I have only read up to 17ch's. the story line is good but, the authors skills aren't good enough is make it happen, it may improve further into the story. and another thing is harem, it is forced and the women do not have enough character development, the author time skiped the place where there should have been development and, I think there are too much women in harem, It should be at most 5 or 6 but there are already 4 women by the 17th chapter.
Ignoring the hate, ignoring the minor mistakes made by the human author, I liked it but the problem is...the fact he became so strong, so fast as if he needed to, and then the many powers didn't make sense because DC has WAYY too many things that can give Superpowers or buff simply put for example...*insert meme here*, just like the Flash, and have it, really try and capture the characters more like them, Bruce's "I can't trust anyone" but with his Brother still left, he might become "I'll do anything it takes, ANYTHING" just food for thought. Continue being great!!! P.S. Particle Accelerator.
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Reading Status: C10 Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 1/5 World Background 1/5 Using Boa Hancock ruined it for me...i can deal with OP/cheat main characters but not destroying the world just to add author's anime waifus -_-
I liked this FF, because of the construction of the world, the progress of the plot, and several characters are nice, the 2nd novel that I read by this author and I am not disappointed.
Seriously, Why when given the chance for one of their wishes to come true they always choose to build a harem of beautiful women instead of wishing to become a beautiful woman themselves? Why? I don't understand.
Muy buena historia pero sinceramente incluso si me esforcé por leerla a pesar de tener la cosa esa de JoJo, no pude porque sinceramente ODIO TOTALMENTE a JoJo y sinceramente no puedo leer ninguna historia que lo contenga pero tu historia es realmente buena al punto que lei mas que cualquier otra
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Cette fic ne mérite pas 4 étoiles tout ce que l'on voit c un mc qui cours après les femmes mais on voit pas de développement relationnel c'est à dire que au moment on nous présente la fille elle est déjà amoureuse du mc et ils ce connaissent mais tout ce développement est skip
Love harem and op MC. But this story is so shallow: -weird skips -edgy to the bones, author cant decide the mc personality. -someone living a second live that get emotional at any moment. -grammar mistakes -dude cant decide the power level -the Amazon island part was dreadful, 0 climax In a nutshell, seems like the author/mc is 18 with a mind of a 13 year old an an emotional stability of a 5.
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The MC started off active then went passive really HARD. Man was getting dragged by the plot until his fight with Doomsday where he realized a higher power was at play (later on revealed to be Dr. Manhattan). Then he became really active, with a few sudden events happening here and there (Crisis on Infinite Earths, Flashpoint, etc.) but he wasn’t being dragged by the plot as much. Epilogue was pretty much a post-credit scene so that’s nice but it was a pretty good ending. Writing Quality 3/5 Updating Stability 5/5 (cuz it’s finished as I’m reading this) Story Development 3/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 5/5
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For Now its just bad, i will continue reading and suffering for now, if i see more action and dont just romance and romance and romance and harém and romance and harém i will try give a better score.
Great Novel for me, I like the plot and story but i would have like it more if u have given proper time to Alex other girlfriends who came late in novel.
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average writing, but too forced development... of course the waynes would have to die for batman to be batman, and the author forces the MC to be their son just for a nasty personality change... that's just bad, too bad
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Not that amazing a novel but it is readable and that gets some points but not so much since I don't wanna lower my standards. The MC is too OP, and the harem is forced. If you want to write a good harem novel, it is important never to force the relationship, make each person earn the relationship... And the next thing is to never neglect the girls. From experience, I can say that four girls are the maximum an author can juggle and give them enough chapters to feel like a real person. This novel doesn't do that, the girls feel a bit too thin. This is a novel that has an OP mc, and this is my bias, but I don't particularly enjoy OP MC, but my novel gets a lot of complaints about me nerfing mc's power so I won't be picky about that detail... Anyways, worth a read if you're really bored,
either author deleted the real reviews or people shockingly find this interesting. after the whole parents thing the whole book went downhill. extremely boring.
A Great read indeed.I like the ruthlessness of the mc. Although the harem thing is bad because the mc cannot love the all equally thereby why its an impossible thing in reality. What i hate the most is that you have a mc who says prostitution can be forgotten. .. really? Thats messed up!
Its trAsh, No story aT all,everY chapters only disgUsting harem happens 18+ , 80+ chApters diDnt finish reading it ,its basically gaRbage ,Dont waste your time
Ho ho.... A Jojo fanfic you have my attention. looking forward for this fanfic I hope it won't disappoint. Dio-Sama is pleased. Don't drop please......
La verdad me encantó tu historia que nadie te desanime Bro, eres una gran escritor a mi me encanto tu historia y la verdad es que siempre estoy al pendiente de cada actualización que subes la verdad es que eres una polla grande y venuda haciendo esta historia 😎👌 sigue así
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I think the story was pretty good. The story was unique enough to enjoy reading it. Some criticism: 1. Spelling mistakes and/or missing words were fairly common in the novel. It wasn't enough to make stuff unreadable, but it was extremely common and noticeable. 2. The story was somewhat rushed, which isn't bad it just felt that what we saw from relationships with the MC and other characters was different than what it seemed like. For example, he seemed to be widely known as a powerful hero that everyone knew, and yet we never saw any of the interactions between them. 3. The power description was very inference based. I think the author should have taken some time to explain what his powers were, because several times I was like 'oh. He can do that?' Explaining what the powers were would have been nucer earlier on. Overall the story had a good plot and was well designed. The main point that could improve this story would be to slow it down and explain the background information and interactions instead of skimming them.
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Revelar spoiler You know just warning i’ve never read this story i just made my decision to give this 1 star because i read the harem list. 20 FKING WOMAN DAWG?
First couple chapters was okay. Then turned into a Japanese Ero Light Novel. The story is a harem that uses DC names. That's probably the only way for it to get some initial attention.
I don't know much as I have only read up to 17ch's. the story line is good but, the authors skills aren't good enough is make it happen, it may improve further into the story. and another thing is harem, it is forced and the women do not have enough character development, the author time skiped the place where there should have been development and, I think there are too much women in harem, It should be at most 5 or 6 but there are already 4 women by the 17th chapter.
Ignoring the hate, ignoring the minor mistakes made by the human author, I liked it but the problem is...the fact he became so strong, so fast as if he needed to, and then the many powers didn't make sense because DC has WAYY too many things that can give Superpowers or buff simply put for example...*insert meme here*, just like the Flash, and have it, really try and capture the characters more like them, Bruce's "I can't trust anyone" but with his Brother still left, he might become "I'll do anything it takes, ANYTHING" just food for thought. Continue being great!!! P.S. Particle Accelerator.
Revelar spoiler Reading Status: C10 Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 4/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 1/5 World Background 1/5 Using Boa Hancock ruined it for me...i can deal with OP/cheat main characters but not destroying the world just to add author's anime waifus -_-
I liked this FF, because of the construction of the world, the progress of the plot, and several characters are nice, the 2nd novel that I read by this author and I am not disappointed.
Seriously, Why when given the chance for one of their wishes to come true they always choose to build a harem of beautiful women instead of wishing to become a beautiful woman themselves? Why? I don't understand.
Muy buena historia pero sinceramente incluso si me esforcé por leerla a pesar de tener la cosa esa de JoJo, no pude porque sinceramente ODIO TOTALMENTE a JoJo y sinceramente no puedo leer ninguna historia que lo contenga pero tu historia es realmente buena al punto que lei mas que cualquier otra
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Cette fic ne mérite pas 4 étoiles tout ce que l'on voit c un mc qui cours après les femmes mais on voit pas de développement relationnel c'est à dire que au moment on nous présente la fille elle est déjà amoureuse du mc et ils ce connaissent mais tout ce développement est skip
Love harem and op MC. But this story is so shallow: -weird skips -edgy to the bones, author cant decide the mc personality. -someone living a second live that get emotional at any moment. -grammar mistakes -dude cant decide the power level -the Amazon island part was dreadful, 0 climax In a nutshell, seems like the author/mc is 18 with a mind of a 13 year old an an emotional stability of a 5.
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The MC started off active then went passive really HARD. Man was getting dragged by the plot until his fight with Doomsday where he realized a higher power was at play (later on revealed to be Dr. Manhattan). Then he became really active, with a few sudden events happening here and there (Crisis on Infinite Earths, Flashpoint, etc.) but he wasn’t being dragged by the plot as much. Epilogue was pretty much a post-credit scene so that’s nice but it was a pretty good ending. Writing Quality 3/5 Updating Stability 5/5 (cuz it’s finished as I’m reading this) Story Development 3/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 5/5
Revelar spoiler For Now its just bad, i will continue reading and suffering for now, if i see more action and dont just romance and romance and romance and harém and romance and harém i will try give a better score.
Great Novel for me, I like the plot and story but i would have like it more if u have given proper time to Alex other girlfriends who came late in novel.
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average writing, but too forced development... of course the waynes would have to die for batman to be batman, and the author forces the MC to be their son just for a nasty personality change... that's just bad, too bad
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Not that amazing a novel but it is readable and that gets some points but not so much since I don't wanna lower my standards. The MC is too OP, and the harem is forced. If you want to write a good harem novel, it is important never to force the relationship, make each person earn the relationship... And the next thing is to never neglect the girls. From experience, I can say that four girls are the maximum an author can juggle and give them enough chapters to feel like a real person. This novel doesn't do that, the girls feel a bit too thin. This is a novel that has an OP mc, and this is my bias, but I don't particularly enjoy OP MC, but my novel gets a lot of complaints about me nerfing mc's power so I won't be picky about that detail... Anyways, worth a read if you're really bored,
either author deleted the real reviews or people shockingly find this interesting. after the whole parents thing the whole book went downhill. extremely boring.
A Great read indeed.I like the ruthlessness of the mc. Although the harem thing is bad because the mc cannot love the all equally thereby why its an impossible thing in reality. What i hate the most is that you have a mc who says prostitution can be forgotten. .. really? Thats messed up!
Its trAsh, No story aT all,everY chapters only disgUsting harem happens 18+ , 80+ chApters diDnt finish reading it ,its basically gaRbage ,Dont waste your time
Ho ho.... A Jojo fanfic you have my attention. looking forward for this fanfic I hope it won't disappoint. Dio-Sama is pleased. Don't drop please......
La verdad me encantó tu historia que nadie te desanime Bro, eres una gran escritor a mi me encanto tu historia y la verdad es que siempre estoy al pendiente de cada actualización que subes la verdad es que eres una polla grande y venuda haciendo esta historia 😎👌 sigue así
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I think the story was pretty good. The story was unique enough to enjoy reading it. Some criticism: 1. Spelling mistakes and/or missing words were fairly common in the novel. It wasn't enough to make stuff unreadable, but it was extremely common and noticeable. 2. The story was somewhat rushed, which isn't bad it just felt that what we saw from relationships with the MC and other characters was different than what it seemed like. For example, he seemed to be widely known as a powerful hero that everyone knew, and yet we never saw any of the interactions between them. 3. The power description was very inference based. I think the author should have taken some time to explain what his powers were, because several times I was like 'oh. He can do that?' Explaining what the powers were would have been nucer earlier on. Overall the story had a good plot and was well designed. The main point that could improve this story would be to slow it down and explain the background information and interactions instead of skimming them.