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Author should update frequently. Otherwise this is pretty cool. Love the character designs love the world background and the progression of the story too. Pretty slick the way bonnie was introduced too
Haven't read a lot of webnovels but this is amazing! I especially like how the author gives detail to the characters appearance and the quality writing. The plot is nothing extraordinarily special but it's still unique nonetheless. And also, the fight scenes are top notch! I genuinely want to know how long it took to write them cause they are freaking awesome!!
I only read about 3 chapters and got bored I don't know why, maybe because I saw that the first chapter was too long and then expected the other to be similar, although the writing is good...because of that I might read it another time...
The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers. And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world. Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character. The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts. Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner. Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is only the second chapter but man I'm loving this. The quality of writing isn't too complex and is easy to understand, I feel like the story is progressing nicely and the character design is pretty good if you have an imaginative mind. Overall, I see a lot of potential in this book.
A beautiful mix even though I'm just on the first chapter I can see this going somewhere as that kid may grow up to avenge his father and his mom too cause the whole freaking family died lol
He’s really creative and deserves to be in a a competition Bravo mr. Karma Hhfgffghhjknvcrstugfgxbju bxhgjbkoofewfgucshcecjopkgv. The only way I wanna was a time was that the sword was in my head that was a very long and a deep dark side and the dark side of my sword is not going to be the same thing I did with my life I was told that he had to do so he did it again he said that I wanna is he was still working and I wanna is he was a good man he did a great time and I
Author should update frequently. Otherwise this is pretty cool. Love the character designs love the world background and the progression of the story too. Pretty slick the way bonnie was introduced too
Haven't read a lot of webnovels but this is amazing! I especially like how the author gives detail to the characters appearance and the quality writing. The plot is nothing extraordinarily special but it's still unique nonetheless. And also, the fight scenes are top notch! I genuinely want to know how long it took to write them cause they are freaking awesome!!
I only read about 3 chapters and got bored I don't know why, maybe because I saw that the first chapter was too long and then expected the other to be similar, although the writing is good...because of that I might read it another time...
The novels have become frivolous, boring, and perverted because of the author. He needs to read my comment just to benefit: the handsome hero with a friendly and kind family, a beautiful and warm mother, a beautiful or domineering sister, a likable and shy little brother, and a strong-hearted father, of course always the hero's family people They are good and enforce the law and love people of course they are angels, you will not find the hero's family of sadistic villains, thieves and murderers. And all the girls in the world of course only who have a dazzling beauty need his help, and those poor little girls feel the responsibility to help and save them, the hero whose biggest concern when he gets super power is to save humanity and the world. Something disgusting and vulgar all the novels have become a deviant character. The reader hates such novels because they have nothing to do with human truth, because they depict angels of peace and love. We wish the authors to change this trivial pattern and show us the true human instincts. Selfishness, anger, murder, theft, arrogance, pride, fraud, deception, impersonal, self-interested, does not care about anyone, does not interfere in the affairs of others, does not help people, this is how the novel will become interesting You will not be able to predict the actions of the characters The events will become unexpected And enthusiastic, and it will bring a new revolution in the field of novels because such a character does not exist. There is one novel that I know is Revenend insanity. I guarantee you the success of your novel even if you are a beginner. Don't make the hero crazy, don't make him stupid, make him only care about his interests
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is only the second chapter but man I'm loving this. The quality of writing isn't too complex and is easy to understand, I feel like the story is progressing nicely and the character design is pretty good if you have an imaginative mind. Overall, I see a lot of potential in this book.
A beautiful mix even though I'm just on the first chapter I can see this going somewhere as that kid may grow up to avenge his father and his mom too cause the whole freaking family died lol
He’s really creative and deserves to be in a a competition Bravo mr. Karma Hhfgffghhjknvcrstugfgxbju bxhgjbkoofewfgucshcecjopkgv. The only way I wanna was a time was that the sword was in my head that was a very long and a deep dark side and the dark side of my sword is not going to be the same thing I did with my life I was told that he had to do so he did it again he said that I wanna is he was still working and I wanna is he was a good man he did a great time and I
peak stuff tbh, just started out but it's looking good