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Too lazy to make a review however i'm really enjoying it and hope it continues, here's somebody's review that I agree with. "so I read 12 chapters and I can say that this story has potential, I hope you will stick to logic and not invent a weapon from outer space but it will be based on logic "
so I read 12 chapters and I can say that this story has potential, I hope you will stick to logic and not invent a weapon from outer space but it will be based on logic 😀 for 1 chapter a day you will get my power stone 😀 if you have more chapters and regularly added it could be a hit good 😀luck 😜[img=update][img=update]
The story is short af. I am interested at the development of the story but i have to wait for a while to see what's next. So please update more.
The perks of being an author most of time is leaving the first comment behind. Hello readers, for the people who are wondering whether they should read this book, I commend you highly to read it. The story is largely focused on the aspects of developing Hestanar into a better city/kingdom. Unlike most other authors, I appreciate the essence of building a world setting that feels alive; the economy, the geopolitical situation, technological evolution... these aspects will all be carefully considered in this story. Also, the plot of the story isn't set in stone. Meaning anything could happen further down the line. If you have any fantastic ideas, inventions, or side stories you want to include. Please, I beg you to write down it down in the comment section. Also, this is the very first book I have written. Grammar, sentence structure and plot writing is still a bit weird to me. So if you spot anything that feels weird of out of place, feel free to let me know. Happy to hear your opinions. English is also not my native language. But I am willing to improve. I'm still an amateur author, but I welcome everyone's guidance. Let's build a new world together!
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Too lazy to make a review however i'm really enjoying it and hope it continues, here's somebody's review that I agree with. "so I read 12 chapters and I can say that this story has potential, I hope you will stick to logic and not invent a weapon from outer space but it will be based on logic "
so I read 12 chapters and I can say that this story has potential, I hope you will stick to logic and not invent a weapon from outer space but it will be based on logic 😀 for 1 chapter a day you will get my power stone 😀 if you have more chapters and regularly added it could be a hit good 😀luck 😜[img=update][img=update]
The story is short af. I am interested at the development of the story but i have to wait for a while to see what's next. So please update more.
The perks of being an author most of time is leaving the first comment behind. Hello readers, for the people who are wondering whether they should read this book, I commend you highly to read it. The story is largely focused on the aspects of developing Hestanar into a better city/kingdom. Unlike most other authors, I appreciate the essence of building a world setting that feels alive; the economy, the geopolitical situation, technological evolution... these aspects will all be carefully considered in this story. Also, the plot of the story isn't set in stone. Meaning anything could happen further down the line. If you have any fantastic ideas, inventions, or side stories you want to include. Please, I beg you to write down it down in the comment section. Also, this is the very first book I have written. Grammar, sentence structure and plot writing is still a bit weird to me. So if you spot anything that feels weird of out of place, feel free to let me know. Happy to hear your opinions. English is also not my native language. But I am willing to improve. I'm still an amateur author, but I welcome everyone's guidance. Let's build a new world together!