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You know when something's not good when a 9 year old boy becomes commander in a war, and that's without any real justification, the mc is weird and acts like he's ten years older, and people just accept that. The author writes well, despite seeming to lack paragraphs and the interaction between people being robotic.
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The plots very good and I can surely tell you won't be wasting your time reading this fic because this thang is legit good. GOOD JOB GOOD JOB GOOD JOB GOOD !
i wanna be blunt to you, the pacing of the story is too short and fast, because of such a short and fast pacing it always caught me off guard, like for example at one point im reading jon pov but somehow the POV changes to other person without me realising it Or like how i thought jon was in winterfell but out of no where or without warning he already arrive in riverlands without me realising that the events happening is in the other place.
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This Fanfic really be hitting different, no 🧢 I'd recommend it to any one who's interested in for honor or CK3. It's something new and that hasn't been seen before. To be trueful, I see this as the only CK3 fanfic to be ever made. Love it! Nothing but love ❤️❤️❤️
I seriously can't understand all those 4 or 5 Star Reviews. I know this is a fanfiction and as such logic isn't absolutly requiered, but come on: A 5-9 year old creating a trading empire? Right under the nose of the warden of the north with him not noticing? And then Lord Bolton openly attacks the son of the warden of the North with men in Bolton coat of arms? That's a total joke. The grammar on the other hand is decent, but sometimes it seems like paragraphs are missing or it#s too rushed. e.g. after the Battle of Seaguard and when Jon throws the head of Rodrik to his father.
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Gracias por su trabajo y por favor más capitulos. .............................. .............................. .............................. ..............................
pretty good asoiaf fanfic. some small problems if you like to nit-pick but 5 stars all in all.
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A really well thought out novel as well as a very receptive author if you have the chance you should definitely give this a read because the main character is awesome
After reading so many sub-par fanfictions,this finally hit the spot. for a fanfic reader like me this is like a oasis in the desert. kudos to the author and hope you keep churning out chapters one after the other.
You know when something's not good when a 9 year old boy becomes commander in a war, and that's without any real justification, the mc is weird and acts like he's ten years older, and people just accept that. The author writes well, despite seeming to lack paragraphs and the interaction between people being robotic.
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Continue, muito boa história estou adorando. Maisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
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The plots very good and I can surely tell you won't be wasting your time reading this fic because this thang is legit good. GOOD JOB GOOD JOB GOOD JOB GOOD !
i wanna be blunt to you, the pacing of the story is too short and fast, because of such a short and fast pacing it always caught me off guard, like for example at one point im reading jon pov but somehow the POV changes to other person without me realising it Or like how i thought jon was in winterfell but out of no where or without warning he already arrive in riverlands without me realising that the events happening is in the other place.
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This Fanfic really be hitting different, no 🧢 I'd recommend it to any one who's interested in for honor or CK3. It's something new and that hasn't been seen before. To be trueful, I see this as the only CK3 fanfic to be ever made. Love it! Nothing but love ❤️❤️❤️
I seriously can't understand all those 4 or 5 Star Reviews. I know this is a fanfiction and as such logic isn't absolutly requiered, but come on: A 5-9 year old creating a trading empire? Right under the nose of the warden of the north with him not noticing? And then Lord Bolton openly attacks the son of the warden of the North with men in Bolton coat of arms? That's a total joke. The grammar on the other hand is decent, but sometimes it seems like paragraphs are missing or it#s too rushed. e.g. after the Battle of Seaguard and when Jon throws the head of Rodrik to his father.
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Gracias por su trabajo y por favor más capitulos. .............................. .............................. .............................. ..............................
pretty good asoiaf fanfic. some small problems if you like to nit-pick but 5 stars all in all.
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A really well thought out novel as well as a very receptive author if you have the chance you should definitely give this a read because the main character is awesome
After reading so many sub-par fanfictions,this finally hit the spot. for a fanfic reader like me this is like a oasis in the desert. kudos to the author and hope you keep churning out chapters one after the other.
SOme guy has posted like 7 five star reviews so this is for balance