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Very Interesting, I want to see the Romance part ASAP!!!!! Please speed up the update of the chapter! . . .
The synopsis is too long, but I understand why you made it so long, in order to quickly introduce Latina's past, and take her to a new world, but actually, the synopsis can still be shortened, like Latina finding a book that can speak and grant wishes, and long story short Latina has become very strong and successful managed to avenge him but he died, well but that's up to you anyway. But a long synopsis doesn't mean it's a bad thing. I think that's better.
So far so good, I like how you explain a skill. I've bookmarked and I hope you update every day, if the next chapter is not good, I will reduce the stars.
Even though it's only chapter 4 but there are also many who have given reviews, So I joined in too, my initial impression was "Hmm, why is the synopsis long? Chapter 1 is also not explained in detail, like rushing to finish the plot in the world of Murim. why not make it a prologue? I guess it's fine even if it's that long, but it's all up to you. that's just my initial impression even though it's only chapter 5. The story is interesting, more of a slow life I guess, or maybe it's just the beginning. Keep going, actually the explanation of the power is very interesting.
Very Interesting, I want to see the Romance part ASAP!!!!! Please speed up the update of the chapter! . . .
The synopsis is too long, but I understand why you made it so long, in order to quickly introduce Latina's past, and take her to a new world, but actually, the synopsis can still be shortened, like Latina finding a book that can speak and grant wishes, and long story short Latina has become very strong and successful managed to avenge him but he died, well but that's up to you anyway. But a long synopsis doesn't mean it's a bad thing. I think that's better.
So far so good, I like how you explain a skill. I've bookmarked and I hope you update every day, if the next chapter is not good, I will reduce the stars.
Even though it's only chapter 4 but there are also many who have given reviews, So I joined in too, my initial impression was "Hmm, why is the synopsis long? Chapter 1 is also not explained in detail, like rushing to finish the plot in the world of Murim. why not make it a prologue? I guess it's fine even if it's that long, but it's all up to you. that's just my initial impression even though it's only chapter 5. The story is interesting, more of a slow life I guess, or maybe it's just the beginning. Keep going, actually the explanation of the power is very interesting.