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Good story, good kingdom-based novel. It has a lot of potential. however, the chapters are short and why does the main character retain his earth name while every other person in his family has English names.
The story was great from chapter 1 to 90s but it went downhill from there. There were so many fillers and unecessary chaps that wont disturb the story with or without it.
what can I say, in his previous life his lover was at the gun point and he really threatened the villain about calling the police, in this life he is completely dependent on some spirits for his power, and those spirits are like don't be cruel to demons or u will be like them nd spirit will not favour you. seriously.
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The plot is interesting but the time at the academy was quite boring. Other than that it was pretty good though. I am excited to see what this mysterious voice from the latest chapters is and how that's going to effect the Mc.
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I just started the book and I get that the main character is supposed to be op but you skipped over the whole development stage the best parts of a story. like when he was 5 just got magic then skipped to when his 12 and is a 5 circle magician. im still reading because It has an interesting concept but for future books dont use the word “impossible” Its way over played in fantasy novels and if you are going to skip time make sure you go over character development before hand so i dont feel like i missed all the cool struggles the mc has to go through to find depth of knowledge.
A cheap rip off of Legend of the Arch Magus. Rushed story, horrible characters with absolutely no depth. Plot armor is thicker than the actual plot.
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the novel was good until like chapter 43 where the writing dropped and it got confusing and I didn't quite understand why it got that bad bc it was pretty decent at the beginning. Anyways i expected more from this novel but then it got really bad and confusing.
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Very decent story that makes me want to read more but the writing stile is soo choppy and sentences are soo badly put together that it makes me want to blow my brains out reading this novel
good story and background but not interesting, I haven't felt any anticipation for what will happen next, I was not able to hook with this story.
This review is as of Chapter 65 - I won't spend my limited free passes on this novel nor do I wish to waste anymore time or spend money on this novel. Short summary: The novel has your classic fantasy setting with a bit of isekai/reincarnation. The MC is NOT OP, though he does have an apparently perfect memory as well as abilities and knowledge well outside anything he should have from his previous occupation that he suddenly has in this new world. He has the standard MC luck of most things working out in his favor with little to no downside. Arrogant young masters abound - they do not get face slapped, they usually just fizzle out. The chapters are written in a very rushed and disorganized manner with topics and characters being thrown around progression of the chapter. One positive thing I'll say, the world background has potential - but the earlier chapters (the author claims the later chapters are better) at least need to be rewritten or at the very least edited and then re-uploaded. Longer explanation: Writing Quality: Frequent errors abound the early chapters, its that simple. Its clear to tell the author isn't well versed in writing in English though the writing can generally be followed but you will likely scratch your head while reading more often than not. Some of the later free reading chapters (58-65) have a sudden downturn in quality that really sealed my judgement for the writing quality. Furthermore, scenes are often jumped between and time skips kind of come out of left field with no lead in like "and so (MC) settled into his new routine as time passed, with two months going by in the blink of an eye", instead events are happening when suddenly, time skip. In chapter 63 or there about, some lines are very much out of place as a scene at the beginning of the chapter suddenly has a line towards the end that clearly was meant to go with that but its not present with that scene. tl;dr: Very "buggy" (disjointed, for non-gamers) feeling and could really use an edit/re-write of the earlier chapters especially if you want to convince users to invest free passes or coins into the novel. Stability of Updates: Seems decent? all the free chapters were already released as of when I started but the table of contents shows a bit of a off-beat release schedule with some of the higher chapters so I'm only giving it a 3-star. Check other reviews of those who have read longer for more info on this. Story Developement: The novel's story feels rushed. Its that simple. There is no exposition between characters and no real world building that doesn't directly advance the plot. This might not be bad in a novel with great writing quality, but the novel's writing quality is as stated above - bad. As such I can't say the story is good at all, its honestly just hard to follow and the interactions between characters will have you thinking two characters are going to possibly be friends until the very next chapter when it looks like they might become sworn enemies - with little to no reason given for the change. tl;dr: its not great, and the writing quality only makes it worse. Character Design: Again, writing quality hinders here. The MC is reincarnated (this happens in the first chapter so its not a spoiler) and has the "I am omnicient about all things modern despite having a job that should have had no exposure to these things" - this is a pet peeve of mine so I am a tad bias. However, its got some of the cliches I tend to like. Old grandpa figure who teaches MC? check. Elves that are a touch haughty but not insane? ... kind of check (can't explain since trying to stay spoiler free - it has to do with the writing quality/story developement though). One issue I find is that the author will build up a character and then within a few chapters completely change them without any rhyme or reason. tl;dr: characters are rather typical of a fantasy/reincarnation story, but the writing and story REALLY take a hit out of them. World Background: As I mentioned in the short version, THIS HAS POTENTIAL!!! I like a fantasy world with an established magic system (definitely like the angle the author took with his in the novel, but again, spoilers so read about 20-25 chapters to find out what I'm talking about), a clear cut enemy, various kingdoms (single empire controlling everything can get boring if parts of it aren't regionalized enough), and a decent history for the world as hinted at in some of the exchanges and exposition from characters. However, this world is honestly chained by the writing quality and story development - maybe in the future it gets better, but I cannot justify nor recommend using fast passes or coins to find out. tl;dr: good potential, sadly that potential is not realized
Thought it was good but it ain’t fix your so called “genius” I’m only on the 11th chapter so i might be wrong so I’ll delete this if it gets better or something.
just picked this up today bc webnovel recommend it and I'm gonna be honest I am really interested with the story development and the kingdom building I'm in the early stages i believe right aftert he story fast forward the time from him being 5 to 12 and I really love the story their is some grammatical errors but the author lets us know that he knew about it and the errors are rarely spotted by the time you hit the 15 chap area honestly gonna buy privlaged for this book! definitely worth a read!
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Of all the novels in my back log that I've read so far, this one has the least amount of writing errors and the most interesting story:......
This is one of the greatest novels I've read in a long time, and the plotline and premise have me captivated. The character development is also incredible, and I can truly feel linked to them, which speaks volumes about how well-written it is. So far, it's been a fantastic book, and I'm eagerly anticipating the release of new chapters.
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The writing quality is great. Story development is good and the novel's pacing was not that fast but not that slow either. The character design is good and the mc's character was well-designed but I don't know about the side and background characters. The world has magic and stuff which is good also. The author updates every day so the novel doesn't have that many problems.
Its so good, the writing style is awesome, and i suggest you try it out. The story is really nice, and i really like the way it is going.
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read more than 50 chapters while traveling and it was good . but not exciting enough for me. in starting chapter i was a little attached to character but after some times i lost interest. but overall story is not bad .
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Amazing story, God-level development, nothing really cliché, No Extra Fillers and stuff, Overall, this story is pretty good its still developing a lot though, so to say in cultivation level, this story is in the Early-Stage of The Nascent realm! •>•[img=recommend] This story is still in early stages so don't be mean about it!
Good story, good kingdom-based novel. It has a lot of potential. however, the chapters are short and why does the main character retain his earth name while every other person in his family has English names.
The story was great from chapter 1 to 90s but it went downhill from there. There were so many fillers and unecessary chaps that wont disturb the story with or without it.
what can I say, in his previous life his lover was at the gun point and he really threatened the villain about calling the police, in this life he is completely dependent on some spirits for his power, and those spirits are like don't be cruel to demons or u will be like them nd spirit will not favour you. seriously.
Revelar spoiler The plot is interesting but the time at the academy was quite boring. Other than that it was pretty good though. I am excited to see what this mysterious voice from the latest chapters is and how that's going to effect the Mc.
Revelar spoiler I just started the book and I get that the main character is supposed to be op but you skipped over the whole development stage the best parts of a story. like when he was 5 just got magic then skipped to when his 12 and is a 5 circle magician. im still reading because It has an interesting concept but for future books dont use the word “impossible” Its way over played in fantasy novels and if you are going to skip time make sure you go over character development before hand so i dont feel like i missed all the cool struggles the mc has to go through to find depth of knowledge.
A cheap rip off of Legend of the Arch Magus. Rushed story, horrible characters with absolutely no depth. Plot armor is thicker than the actual plot.
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the novel was good until like chapter 43 where the writing dropped and it got confusing and I didn't quite understand why it got that bad bc it was pretty decent at the beginning. Anyways i expected more from this novel but then it got really bad and confusing.
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Very decent story that makes me want to read more but the writing stile is soo choppy and sentences are soo badly put together that it makes me want to blow my brains out reading this novel
good story and background but not interesting, I haven't felt any anticipation for what will happen next, I was not able to hook with this story.
This review is as of Chapter 65 - I won't spend my limited free passes on this novel nor do I wish to waste anymore time or spend money on this novel. Short summary: The novel has your classic fantasy setting with a bit of isekai/reincarnation. The MC is NOT OP, though he does have an apparently perfect memory as well as abilities and knowledge well outside anything he should have from his previous occupation that he suddenly has in this new world. He has the standard MC luck of most things working out in his favor with little to no downside. Arrogant young masters abound - they do not get face slapped, they usually just fizzle out. The chapters are written in a very rushed and disorganized manner with topics and characters being thrown around progression of the chapter. One positive thing I'll say, the world background has potential - but the earlier chapters (the author claims the later chapters are better) at least need to be rewritten or at the very least edited and then re-uploaded. Longer explanation: Writing Quality: Frequent errors abound the early chapters, its that simple. Its clear to tell the author isn't well versed in writing in English though the writing can generally be followed but you will likely scratch your head while reading more often than not. Some of the later free reading chapters (58-65) have a sudden downturn in quality that really sealed my judgement for the writing quality. Furthermore, scenes are often jumped between and time skips kind of come out of left field with no lead in like "and so (MC) settled into his new routine as time passed, with two months going by in the blink of an eye", instead events are happening when suddenly, time skip. In chapter 63 or there about, some lines are very much out of place as a scene at the beginning of the chapter suddenly has a line towards the end that clearly was meant to go with that but its not present with that scene. tl;dr: Very "buggy" (disjointed, for non-gamers) feeling and could really use an edit/re-write of the earlier chapters especially if you want to convince users to invest free passes or coins into the novel. Stability of Updates: Seems decent? all the free chapters were already released as of when I started but the table of contents shows a bit of a off-beat release schedule with some of the higher chapters so I'm only giving it a 3-star. Check other reviews of those who have read longer for more info on this. Story Developement: The novel's story feels rushed. Its that simple. There is no exposition between characters and no real world building that doesn't directly advance the plot. This might not be bad in a novel with great writing quality, but the novel's writing quality is as stated above - bad. As such I can't say the story is good at all, its honestly just hard to follow and the interactions between characters will have you thinking two characters are going to possibly be friends until the very next chapter when it looks like they might become sworn enemies - with little to no reason given for the change. tl;dr: its not great, and the writing quality only makes it worse. Character Design: Again, writing quality hinders here. The MC is reincarnated (this happens in the first chapter so its not a spoiler) and has the "I am omnicient about all things modern despite having a job that should have had no exposure to these things" - this is a pet peeve of mine so I am a tad bias. However, its got some of the cliches I tend to like. Old grandpa figure who teaches MC? check. Elves that are a touch haughty but not insane? ... kind of check (can't explain since trying to stay spoiler free - it has to do with the writing quality/story developement though). One issue I find is that the author will build up a character and then within a few chapters completely change them without any rhyme or reason. tl;dr: characters are rather typical of a fantasy/reincarnation story, but the writing and story REALLY take a hit out of them. World Background: As I mentioned in the short version, THIS HAS POTENTIAL!!! I like a fantasy world with an established magic system (definitely like the angle the author took with his in the novel, but again, spoilers so read about 20-25 chapters to find out what I'm talking about), a clear cut enemy, various kingdoms (single empire controlling everything can get boring if parts of it aren't regionalized enough), and a decent history for the world as hinted at in some of the exchanges and exposition from characters. However, this world is honestly chained by the writing quality and story development - maybe in the future it gets better, but I cannot justify nor recommend using fast passes or coins to find out. tl;dr: good potential, sadly that potential is not realized
Thought it was good but it ain’t fix your so called “genius” I’m only on the 11th chapter so i might be wrong so I’ll delete this if it gets better or something.
just picked this up today bc webnovel recommend it and I'm gonna be honest I am really interested with the story development and the kingdom building I'm in the early stages i believe right aftert he story fast forward the time from him being 5 to 12 and I really love the story their is some grammatical errors but the author lets us know that he knew about it and the errors are rarely spotted by the time you hit the 15 chap area honestly gonna buy privlaged for this book! definitely worth a read!
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Of all the novels in my back log that I've read so far, this one has the least amount of writing errors and the most interesting story:......
This is one of the greatest novels I've read in a long time, and the plotline and premise have me captivated. The character development is also incredible, and I can truly feel linked to them, which speaks volumes about how well-written it is. So far, it's been a fantastic book, and I'm eagerly anticipating the release of new chapters.
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The writing quality is great. Story development is good and the novel's pacing was not that fast but not that slow either. The character design is good and the mc's character was well-designed but I don't know about the side and background characters. The world has magic and stuff which is good also. The author updates every day so the novel doesn't have that many problems.
Its so good, the writing style is awesome, and i suggest you try it out. The story is really nice, and i really like the way it is going.
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read more than 50 chapters while traveling and it was good . but not exciting enough for me. in starting chapter i was a little attached to character but after some times i lost interest. but overall story is not bad .
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Amazing story, God-level development, nothing really cliché, No Extra Fillers and stuff, Overall, this story is pretty good its still developing a lot though, so to say in cultivation level, this story is in the Early-Stage of The Nascent realm! •>•[img=recommend] This story is still in early stages so don't be mean about it!