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Escribe una reseñabros think we only read for how powerful mc. Why are u not give saitamas power and just give us some story huh literally do some plotting things instead of how power works. thank u.
this....is really hurt to read, you need an actual editer, all dialogue is out of place,it feel.... stiff?, yeah that is a right word for this novel, hope your improvement may come soon.
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HAHAHA. Hi guys Crownball is here! to know that I'm shameless for rating full my own story haha. I hope you guys go EZ on me by sending here review even though I still continue this if its bad or not to you LOL
bros think we only read for how powerful mc. Why are u not give saitamas power and just give us some story huh literally do some plotting things instead of how power works. thank u.
this....is really hurt to read, you need an actual editer, all dialogue is out of place,it feel.... stiff?, yeah that is a right word for this novel, hope your improvement may come soon.
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HAHAHA. Hi guys Crownball is here! to know that I'm shameless for rating full my own story haha. I hope you guys go EZ on me by sending here review even though I still continue this if its bad or not to you LOL