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Writing Quality [★★★★o] Story Development [★★★★★] Character Design [★★★oo] Updating Stability [★★★★★] World Background [★★★oo] » First I want to say this a good fanfic... I'm not gonna lie and just say the truth... the fanfic actually good and interesting fanfic only the perspective was pretty awful well what do you expect when the author was new author also this fanfic have potential to be honest so I'm gonna drop this. {The review will change probably}
This is amazing, great new author and the groundworks for a really entertaining story. A must read for sure, well written and super unique
This book is what you guys should try to read. I really like the plot, the character development. I can't wait to see more from this author. keep up the good work.
This is a total must read! I have just finished the first two chapters and I'm now a junkie, wanting more. The author did a really good job here!
story is very nice and the author is very sexy and cool and I am not being held at gunpoint by the author to write this review. (good job, pamuf. It's better than I first thought.)
THIS IS SO ENTERTAINING! Glad I found this... The switch from 2nd to 1st and 3rd was good. The characters are really great. The story is entertaing... Keep it up[img=recommend]
Haha!! I don't author even tried to be funny while writing this, it feels like the characters themselves were the comedians. Very dedicated character design and setting. Looking forward to read more.
Great chapter! The mc is such a vibe, and that second-person intro is entertaining. The only problem is the perspective. It started as second-person, suddenly switched to third-person, then became first-person. Hopefully, you fix that third-person slip(I left a paragraph comment) Other than that, the casualness may be too excessive for my taste and those parentheses need to go, but god this is entertaining!
Yo! I honestly made this book on a whim, but I can say I'm quite happy with how its turned out and the ideas I have for the future are OVERWHEALMING. If you love isekai, then this book is for you!
Writing Quality [★★★★o] Story Development [★★★★★] Character Design [★★★oo] Updating Stability [★★★★★] World Background [★★★oo] » First I want to say this a good fanfic... I'm not gonna lie and just say the truth... the fanfic actually good and interesting fanfic only the perspective was pretty awful well what do you expect when the author was new author also this fanfic have potential to be honest so I'm gonna drop this. {The review will change probably}
This is amazing, great new author and the groundworks for a really entertaining story. A must read for sure, well written and super unique
This book is what you guys should try to read. I really like the plot, the character development. I can't wait to see more from this author. keep up the good work.
This is a total must read! I have just finished the first two chapters and I'm now a junkie, wanting more. The author did a really good job here!
story is very nice and the author is very sexy and cool and I am not being held at gunpoint by the author to write this review. (good job, pamuf. It's better than I first thought.)
THIS IS SO ENTERTAINING! Glad I found this... The switch from 2nd to 1st and 3rd was good. The characters are really great. The story is entertaing... Keep it up[img=recommend]
Haha!! I don't author even tried to be funny while writing this, it feels like the characters themselves were the comedians. Very dedicated character design and setting. Looking forward to read more.
Great chapter! The mc is such a vibe, and that second-person intro is entertaining. The only problem is the perspective. It started as second-person, suddenly switched to third-person, then became first-person. Hopefully, you fix that third-person slip(I left a paragraph comment) Other than that, the casualness may be too excessive for my taste and those parentheses need to go, but god this is entertaining!
Yo! I honestly made this book on a whim, but I can say I'm quite happy with how its turned out and the ideas I have for the future are OVERWHEALMING. If you love isekai, then this book is for you!