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Despite being over 500 chapters in length you get the feeling the author has barely scratched the surface of what is possible. So even though I'm making this review now I still consider this in the beginning stages. Without further ado, let's begin... WRITING QUALITY: -Overall the quality is legible meaning accurate grammar and sentence structure most of the time. How do you know that your reading is poor? One way is because of the need to read over the text you just read not because of its complexity or depth but because you didn't grasp what the author is trying to convey. You won't need to worry about this. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -The author as far as I can tell never stayed in the double digits for weekly releasing nor dropped below 4 chapters for long if at all. This is a sign showing the author's desire to stick at it for the long run compared to the amount released I find this a better gauge of stability. Basically, the author so far has not given us a reason to doubt. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -The short answer is you always find yourself coming back for more. The longer answer is the beginning you are brought to some of the highest peaks of power which shows the vast gap between where the MC is now and the progress to be made from the bottom. With his dungeon as a center point, you see the characters venture out exploring the world similar to a character in a game bringing color to grey areas. This is a deliberate decision the author has made compared to other stories that have the MCs base of operations move with him while he scales the ladder of power. Neither is inherently better just more of a preference this author shows. -Not only do you see the MC develop the story being the one we follow but also many side characters and future villains scheming in the background giving you a foreshadowing of events to come. Overall great job. CHARACTER DESIGN: -The author does a masterful job of making sure each character is fleshed out so they add to the MC and the greater plot. Everyone close to the MC has a distinct personality, side characters you meet along the way regardless of duration feel like real people, and the villains are good villains in the sense they make you root for the MC and his companions. -Many people who don't like harem have legitimate concerns that those characters will either be useless or take away from the greater plot. You don't need to worry about this because so far the author has eluded to a few potential harem members however the plot demands your full attention so romance is not the center but instead the byproduct of a compelling story you read unfold. -Another concern many readers have is stories that have harem members surrounding the MC lack other companions which works sometimes while other times it leaves the reader wanting. I would say you are given a myriad of companions helping the MC, hindering the MC, and being there to flesh out the world. WORLD BACKGROUND: -As I wrote earlier the beginning does an excellent job of showing how vast the world is and how much potential the author can use to develop the story and characters. As the story progresses the MC is shown more of the world that seems never-ending which reminds me of peeling back the layers of an onion trying to find the nonexistent core. -The background is tied in obvious and mysterious ways to the MC letting you make your own judgments while giving you more bit by bit proving how much and little you really know so far. Overall I can't recommend this novel enough. Give it try if you're looking for quality content.
i have a question ⁉️ where is the workshop floor and other floors located Could you please tell me
Since no one has asked, I will ask, Is there some kind of Yuri or NTR in the harem, a question that interests many readers, Thank you, I look forward to your reply.
📝Going to Start Reading. -I'm not really a fan of harems so Ive actually put this novel off for years now since I liked the concept since its release..., but here goes, I just hope the FLs are pleasant to read and arent tsundere, yandere, or mary sue beeches... Not that I hate those much, but too much flavor can be overwhelming🫠 PS: Rating might change depending on my personal preference.
the 1st 100 chapter were great but in the next chapters aside from the chapters concerning making the dungeon, the MC's brain was turned off and it's frustrating. sigh!!! anyway the novels good, just skip some paragraphs or chapter. Now i need to recharge my brain.
Pleasure Report [As of Ch.245] MC: Overall- 6 "Doesnt't Disappoint nor Impress" Good 0-10 Evil- 4.4 Mostly neutral, leaning very slightly to good Social- Romance-Somewhat passive/ Ally-Cares deeply/ Enemy-Kill Mindset- Knows his place, willing to compromise with bottomline, wants to be strong to protect and catch up. Story: Overall- 7 Like: Nice balance of Dungeon building, Gacha summoning and Travelling adventure (Rather rare mix and decently done at that) Dislike: MC is not assertive/determined enough for my tastes, In romance and everything else. Far from spineless but how should I put it? He takes a step back too easily in things he needs to, then is weirdly stubborn about doing things the right way in situations he necessarily doesn't have to. Conclusion: MC's "annoying moments" bothers me. Unfortunately more that I hoped. But the interesting women around him, the world mechanics esp. that summoning+dungeons makes me want to continue reading to see who will join his team next, their changing team dynamics and the various race/guild/kingdom conflicts he will get into. With the hope that he will change for the better. For now though, I might take a break from this as I'm running out of patience...
good story , character building good, excellent world building , i don't want author to stop it , sometimes good novel qre dropped but i hope it is not ane of them
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Before I start I want to say that this is just my personal opinion.I have read till chapter 400 and I some things bothered me:First thing is that I found some spelling mistakes and sentences that don't make a lot of sense.Second the story is good at the start but gets boring quick.Third the fight are too long the same goes for the story arcs.Forth the MC is very clique(idk if this is the right word).Other than that I like the concept of the story and the world background.Per short: Good book but gets boring fast.
it's overall good the only thing I don't like about it is his rank that is still stuck like i expected him to like rank up faster heck even cultivation novels rank up is better than this and those guys go like 1 realm per 100 chapters..ohh yeah I don't like it when MCs reincarnate as a devil or a monster for that matter and still play nice the only reason why they are not killed for it is because they're the MCs it's just Nah for me... the overall story is great though and I like his cheat
the title of the story is so fake man ....the demon lord of pride without pride lol 😂😂
Good story with an interisting character, the World is pleasant to discover with a truly identity of eachs demon's class. The MC is not stupidly ruthless and the development is stable. Great job ! Hope the updating will folow.
at the beginning it was very good, seriously, I was really enjoying it, but then irene appeared and everything was very embarrassing for me, she talks all the time about her beauty, the protagonist seems to have changed out of nowhere and became a ''good person'' different from when it was in the beginning. the saddest thing for me about this work is that he DOES NOT SEEM TO BE PRIDE, he is NOTHING proud that he shouldn't be, the author should watch 'nanatsu no taizai' and learn from escanor.
You’re either gonna love it or hate it. Personally I hate it but not because it’s bad (well it is bad, but I have seen way worse so can’t be to judgy), but more because it isn’t what I wanted it to be. I got to chapter 180 and then I couldn’t anymore. It feels slow and I feel like a lot that is described could essentially be trimmed or skipped. Maybe that is because the first 20-30 chapters are pretty fast paced with time skips and then that just stops, which makes the story feel slow imo. (Spoiler) My explanation of the plot from what I read of the story: (spoiler) MC was someone who made games then died after working on his newest game for 1 year. He is reborn as a demon in a pretty standard fantasy setting and starts building his dungeon. He is given a system with the same name as his game and also is an inheritor of the sin of pride. Action scenes are either boring and dragged out of almost just skipped. Romance is, well, nonexistent or just so plain it might as well not be there.
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One day I longed to read a novel with a non-human mc so I could avoid reading about emotions that are typically displayed by human mc’s (compassion, kindness, etc. etc.) so, like many others before me, I enabled the filter for non human mc’s and browsed. Found this peculiar novel and was immediately intrigued by the concept and world, so much so that I reached chapter 90 in a few days even with my limited time, and just like any other novel out there - there were ups and downs but nothing bad enough to cause a drop. It was however around chapter 90 that the mc started displaying and explaining behaviors I would not expect from a non human mc and later on admitted that he is still human inside regardless of all the changes he has experienced and that’s when I found out I just wasted my time on this novel, because this was never properly explained by the author beforehand. The mc was simply never in a position to show his humanity before, it took nearly 100 chapters for him to do so. Tldr——— the non human mc tag is true in appearance but false in spirit
Eu ja estou quase chegando no capítulo 100, e os subordinados deles são muito mais forte que ele, isso vai mudar no decorrer da história?.......................................................
one of my favourite. The start would seem weak and unplanned which i know but the author managed it well and the quality went highet as it went. Thank God the mc didnt become a nice demon to humans trope after the arc around 500.
At first I liked it a lot, but then I began to be a little disappointed with the development of the character. Perhaps the author wants to create a new concept of "demon" because MC is nothing like one, he is not so cunning or so ruthless. Also, the description of Irene's physical features whenever she appears is annoying. Despite this, I recognise that the author had a good initial idea.
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Everyone this is a gem, I love how youu involved a dungeon-style system, so far he is not a cold MC (thank God ) there's humour and with females
i m not good at writing review so just my honest take on the novel so far. -pace is good most of the time but sometime quite slow -i don know about others but i really like if you give more detail out for the character. just my opinion on this one -i believe when theres a great battle about to happen you could just delay some of the chapter and then boom mass release so we could feel the fight more closely -thats all, for me this novel is good
Despite being over 500 chapters in length you get the feeling the author has barely scratched the surface of what is possible. So even though I'm making this review now I still consider this in the beginning stages. Without further ado, let's begin... WRITING QUALITY: -Overall the quality is legible meaning accurate grammar and sentence structure most of the time. How do you know that your reading is poor? One way is because of the need to read over the text you just read not because of its complexity or depth but because you didn't grasp what the author is trying to convey. You won't need to worry about this. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -The author as far as I can tell never stayed in the double digits for weekly releasing nor dropped below 4 chapters for long if at all. This is a sign showing the author's desire to stick at it for the long run compared to the amount released I find this a better gauge of stability. Basically, the author so far has not given us a reason to doubt. STORY DEVELOPMENT: -The short answer is you always find yourself coming back for more. The longer answer is the beginning you are brought to some of the highest peaks of power which shows the vast gap between where the MC is now and the progress to be made from the bottom. With his dungeon as a center point, you see the characters venture out exploring the world similar to a character in a game bringing color to grey areas. This is a deliberate decision the author has made compared to other stories that have the MCs base of operations move with him while he scales the ladder of power. Neither is inherently better just more of a preference this author shows. -Not only do you see the MC develop the story being the one we follow but also many side characters and future villains scheming in the background giving you a foreshadowing of events to come. Overall great job. CHARACTER DESIGN: -The author does a masterful job of making sure each character is fleshed out so they add to the MC and the greater plot. Everyone close to the MC has a distinct personality, side characters you meet along the way regardless of duration feel like real people, and the villains are good villains in the sense they make you root for the MC and his companions. -Many people who don't like harem have legitimate concerns that those characters will either be useless or take away from the greater plot. You don't need to worry about this because so far the author has eluded to a few potential harem members however the plot demands your full attention so romance is not the center but instead the byproduct of a compelling story you read unfold. -Another concern many readers have is stories that have harem members surrounding the MC lack other companions which works sometimes while other times it leaves the reader wanting. I would say you are given a myriad of companions helping the MC, hindering the MC, and being there to flesh out the world. WORLD BACKGROUND: -As I wrote earlier the beginning does an excellent job of showing how vast the world is and how much potential the author can use to develop the story and characters. As the story progresses the MC is shown more of the world that seems never-ending which reminds me of peeling back the layers of an onion trying to find the nonexistent core. -The background is tied in obvious and mysterious ways to the MC letting you make your own judgments while giving you more bit by bit proving how much and little you really know so far. Overall I can't recommend this novel enough. Give it try if you're looking for quality content.
i have a question ⁉️ where is the workshop floor and other floors located Could you please tell me
Since no one has asked, I will ask, Is there some kind of Yuri or NTR in the harem, a question that interests many readers, Thank you, I look forward to your reply.
📝Going to Start Reading. -I'm not really a fan of harems so Ive actually put this novel off for years now since I liked the concept since its release..., but here goes, I just hope the FLs are pleasant to read and arent tsundere, yandere, or mary sue beeches... Not that I hate those much, but too much flavor can be overwhelming🫠 PS: Rating might change depending on my personal preference.
the 1st 100 chapter were great but in the next chapters aside from the chapters concerning making the dungeon, the MC's brain was turned off and it's frustrating. sigh!!! anyway the novels good, just skip some paragraphs or chapter. Now i need to recharge my brain.
Pleasure Report [As of Ch.245] MC: Overall- 6 "Doesnt't Disappoint nor Impress" Good 0-10 Evil- 4.4 Mostly neutral, leaning very slightly to good Social- Romance-Somewhat passive/ Ally-Cares deeply/ Enemy-Kill Mindset- Knows his place, willing to compromise with bottomline, wants to be strong to protect and catch up. Story: Overall- 7 Like: Nice balance of Dungeon building, Gacha summoning and Travelling adventure (Rather rare mix and decently done at that) Dislike: MC is not assertive/determined enough for my tastes, In romance and everything else. Far from spineless but how should I put it? He takes a step back too easily in things he needs to, then is weirdly stubborn about doing things the right way in situations he necessarily doesn't have to. Conclusion: MC's "annoying moments" bothers me. Unfortunately more that I hoped. But the interesting women around him, the world mechanics esp. that summoning+dungeons makes me want to continue reading to see who will join his team next, their changing team dynamics and the various race/guild/kingdom conflicts he will get into. With the hope that he will change for the better. For now though, I might take a break from this as I'm running out of patience...
good story , character building good, excellent world building , i don't want author to stop it , sometimes good novel qre dropped but i hope it is not ane of them
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Before I start I want to say that this is just my personal opinion.I have read till chapter 400 and I some things bothered me:First thing is that I found some spelling mistakes and sentences that don't make a lot of sense.Second the story is good at the start but gets boring quick.Third the fight are too long the same goes for the story arcs.Forth the MC is very clique(idk if this is the right word).Other than that I like the concept of the story and the world background.Per short: Good book but gets boring fast.
it's overall good the only thing I don't like about it is his rank that is still stuck like i expected him to like rank up faster heck even cultivation novels rank up is better than this and those guys go like 1 realm per 100 chapters..ohh yeah I don't like it when MCs reincarnate as a devil or a monster for that matter and still play nice the only reason why they are not killed for it is because they're the MCs it's just Nah for me... the overall story is great though and I like his cheat
the title of the story is so fake man ....the demon lord of pride without pride lol 😂😂
Good story with an interisting character, the World is pleasant to discover with a truly identity of eachs demon's class. The MC is not stupidly ruthless and the development is stable. Great job ! Hope the updating will folow.
at the beginning it was very good, seriously, I was really enjoying it, but then irene appeared and everything was very embarrassing for me, she talks all the time about her beauty, the protagonist seems to have changed out of nowhere and became a ''good person'' different from when it was in the beginning. the saddest thing for me about this work is that he DOES NOT SEEM TO BE PRIDE, he is NOTHING proud that he shouldn't be, the author should watch 'nanatsu no taizai' and learn from escanor.
You’re either gonna love it or hate it. Personally I hate it but not because it’s bad (well it is bad, but I have seen way worse so can’t be to judgy), but more because it isn’t what I wanted it to be. I got to chapter 180 and then I couldn’t anymore. It feels slow and I feel like a lot that is described could essentially be trimmed or skipped. Maybe that is because the first 20-30 chapters are pretty fast paced with time skips and then that just stops, which makes the story feel slow imo. (Spoiler) My explanation of the plot from what I read of the story: (spoiler) MC was someone who made games then died after working on his newest game for 1 year. He is reborn as a demon in a pretty standard fantasy setting and starts building his dungeon. He is given a system with the same name as his game and also is an inheritor of the sin of pride. Action scenes are either boring and dragged out of almost just skipped. Romance is, well, nonexistent or just so plain it might as well not be there.
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One day I longed to read a novel with a non-human mc so I could avoid reading about emotions that are typically displayed by human mc’s (compassion, kindness, etc. etc.) so, like many others before me, I enabled the filter for non human mc’s and browsed. Found this peculiar novel and was immediately intrigued by the concept and world, so much so that I reached chapter 90 in a few days even with my limited time, and just like any other novel out there - there were ups and downs but nothing bad enough to cause a drop. It was however around chapter 90 that the mc started displaying and explaining behaviors I would not expect from a non human mc and later on admitted that he is still human inside regardless of all the changes he has experienced and that’s when I found out I just wasted my time on this novel, because this was never properly explained by the author beforehand. The mc was simply never in a position to show his humanity before, it took nearly 100 chapters for him to do so. Tldr——— the non human mc tag is true in appearance but false in spirit
Eu ja estou quase chegando no capítulo 100, e os subordinados deles são muito mais forte que ele, isso vai mudar no decorrer da história?.......................................................
one of my favourite. The start would seem weak and unplanned which i know but the author managed it well and the quality went highet as it went. Thank God the mc didnt become a nice demon to humans trope after the arc around 500.
At first I liked it a lot, but then I began to be a little disappointed with the development of the character. Perhaps the author wants to create a new concept of "demon" because MC is nothing like one, he is not so cunning or so ruthless. Also, the description of Irene's physical features whenever she appears is annoying. Despite this, I recognise that the author had a good initial idea.
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Everyone this is a gem, I love how youu involved a dungeon-style system, so far he is not a cold MC (thank God ) there's humour and with females
i m not good at writing review so just my honest take on the novel so far. -pace is good most of the time but sometime quite slow -i don know about others but i really like if you give more detail out for the character. just my opinion on this one -i believe when theres a great battle about to happen you could just delay some of the chapter and then boom mass release so we could feel the fight more closely -thats all, for me this novel is good