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Escribe una reseñaYa leí un par de veces está historia y sigue tan exelente como siempre una de las mejores que e leído por su desarrollo y diseño del protagonista. Seguiré esperando por tu regreso :'(
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I realized that I needed to start giving reviews to stories I read. To give feedback and encourage/thank authors for their work and effort. I am not a “brony” or anything but I will admit I genuinely enjoyed this fic and would recommend it(Not IRL, don't want anyone knowing I read this fr). Thank for the fic. I'll never forget it.
overall, like the story, I just finished reading it. I would wish for it to be continued someday but I understand though. I do know the writer still on this app cuz if go into his profile and his activity he posted like a day ago for me of making this review a comment on another fanfic
Muy genial está historia espero que el autor la continúe, me gustó mucho el desarrollo de los personajes y como el protagonista se va volviendo más poderoso.
I understand quitting a fanfic but come on, at least reach a major milestone first! You were so close to the season 4 finale man. It’s a shame to let it die like this, on a trixie episode?? Come onnnnnn!
Great until the yuri, really brought down the story for me. won't continue reading buy hey all power to you I guess
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Es una historia genial una pregunta el protagonista se convertirá en alicornio para enfrentar los grandes desafíos que le aguardan y para acérese mas fuerte y proteger a sus seres queridos
it's still impressive how can you put a story that talk about friendship and add to it a bunch of lewd scenes and come out so good I'm really enjoying this Story
Eu gostei da história, do desenvolvimento dos personagens e do jeito que as falas dos personagens são escritas. Gostei do estilo de escrita do autor e de como ele também desenvolveu os personagens secundários. No geral é uma boa história que eu recomendaria pra alguém com os mesmos gostos que eu.
It's very good with the story and character development but I wish the author uploads more chapter and don't drop the Novel lalalalalalallalalaalalallalall
it may not be the beast but most of the mlp fanfict that I have read make the world in my opinion to dark but this one ceps to the filling of the tv show . I like how the authors mack the world be influenced by magic. it make the world more understandable and he adds a bit of more rillisom.
Probably one of the most in depth with details and consistency of world mechanics I’ve read ever and I feel I’m not alone with that
Not sure if you will go back to writing this story. Anyway great story and i can't wait to read more....................................................
I have read all 164 chapters written so far in two days. I am very grateful to the author for the work done, this is one of the best fan fiction on mlp. I hope the author will finish this work.
I'm afraid I don't want to click to read after I saw the harem tag I'm too scared I don't want to click anymore curiosity calls me and kills me inside help God forgive me
are these ponies the humanoid ones or the originals, if its the originals im out no second thought but if its the humanoids then i-ll probably give it a chance.
everything is very good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍
the ideas proposed by the author were good and well executed... It's a pity that the update is not constant, but whenever a new chapter comes out I'll be there to read... I sincerely look forward to the Equestria Girls Arc
Loved so far my friend. Very sweet! I just read the whole thing, and man... what a journey. So many things happened since the start. Hope Starfall can help Chrys see the light. I'm also wondering whats going on in that alternative timeline... hmm... would the ponies from that place be impressed with our boy Starfall?
Author at first chapter you already disabled this story as characters from other Universes appear because this means that as,I remember there was a crossover episode in which rainbow dash goes to the universe of Powerpuff girls. So will this never happen? and the MC will never go other Universes so that the story can evolve to something more original. Now the ending will be similar to mlp where Twilight Sparkle has to watch every loved one die as even if MC becomes a Alicorn all others non Alicorn of MC's harem will die. While if MC could go to other Universes he can find more ways to achieve Immortality and get stronger than Celestia because even Celestia isn't invincible and no matter how much MC trains he won't be able to move the sun.
I have no idea why I'm reading this... no clue, but I did... perhaps out of curiosity or something else? All I can say is read at your own risk
a while back o found this, this was kne of my first webnovels and I loved it, I forgot about it for some time but now I'm back and I'm gunnar re read the whole thing again, I remember it being amazing and I can't wait to dig in
This author is like Joshua Graham from fallout new vegas, except he doesn't convert you to christianity, he turns you into a brony, I have to confess that prior to reading this fic I had no knowledge of mlp and sweet Celestia I'm glad I did for I would have had my childhood ruined
Now that I think about it, I didn't do the traditional shameless Author Review so here it is <3 Great story. Beautiful and a must read for everyone! Now seriously... This Story started as an idea when I was bored and had a writer block with my novel Blood Gacha and somehow ended up taking my priority ever since. I always loved mlp because of the friendship aspect and the interesting story and met a few friends because of it, (yep that really can happen)... I have to say that making it an R18 was another spur of the moment idea which was originally to see people's reactions and as training because I never wrote any smut, but then I realised that I would have to write such chapter for each of the girls in the herd and well...I went with it and I think it turned out well haha! Though I do have to admit there was a bit too much lemons at some point because most of the girls joined at almost the same time, but not to worry, I am going to focus more on the story now so all's well.. Now the Spike sidestories...Why people hate it so much I have no idea but I guess I won't make them as often now other than when the CMC make an appearance which would most likely be just mentioning how their relationship is developing...heh but honestly its fun watching you squirm so I might go back to them..who knows hahaha! Anyway Hope you still love the Story and like always ENJOY!!!
Ya leí un par de veces está historia y sigue tan exelente como siempre una de las mejores que e leído por su desarrollo y diseño del protagonista. Seguiré esperando por tu regreso :'(
✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️🐉✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️🎶✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️✴️
I realized that I needed to start giving reviews to stories I read. To give feedback and encourage/thank authors for their work and effort. I am not a “brony” or anything but I will admit I genuinely enjoyed this fic and would recommend it(Not IRL, don't want anyone knowing I read this fr). Thank for the fic. I'll never forget it.
overall, like the story, I just finished reading it. I would wish for it to be continued someday but I understand though. I do know the writer still on this app cuz if go into his profile and his activity he posted like a day ago for me of making this review a comment on another fanfic
Muy genial está historia espero que el autor la continúe, me gustó mucho el desarrollo de los personajes y como el protagonista se va volviendo más poderoso.
I understand quitting a fanfic but come on, at least reach a major milestone first! You were so close to the season 4 finale man. It’s a shame to let it die like this, on a trixie episode?? Come onnnnnn!
Great until the yuri, really brought down the story for me. won't continue reading buy hey all power to you I guess
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Es una historia genial una pregunta el protagonista se convertirá en alicornio para enfrentar los grandes desafíos que le aguardan y para acérese mas fuerte y proteger a sus seres queridos
it's still impressive how can you put a story that talk about friendship and add to it a bunch of lewd scenes and come out so good I'm really enjoying this Story
Eu gostei da história, do desenvolvimento dos personagens e do jeito que as falas dos personagens são escritas. Gostei do estilo de escrita do autor e de como ele também desenvolveu os personagens secundários. No geral é uma boa história que eu recomendaria pra alguém com os mesmos gostos que eu.
It's very good with the story and character development but I wish the author uploads more chapter and don't drop the Novel lalalalalalallalalaalalallalall
it may not be the beast but most of the mlp fanfict that I have read make the world in my opinion to dark but this one ceps to the filling of the tv show . I like how the authors mack the world be influenced by magic. it make the world more understandable and he adds a bit of more rillisom.
Probably one of the most in depth with details and consistency of world mechanics I’ve read ever and I feel I’m not alone with that
Not sure if you will go back to writing this story. Anyway great story and i can't wait to read more....................................................
I have read all 164 chapters written so far in two days. I am very grateful to the author for the work done, this is one of the best fan fiction on mlp. I hope the author will finish this work.
I'm afraid I don't want to click to read after I saw the harem tag I'm too scared I don't want to click anymore curiosity calls me and kills me inside help God forgive me
are these ponies the humanoid ones or the originals, if its the originals im out no second thought but if its the humanoids then i-ll probably give it a chance.
everything is very good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍
the ideas proposed by the author were good and well executed... It's a pity that the update is not constant, but whenever a new chapter comes out I'll be there to read... I sincerely look forward to the Equestria Girls Arc
Loved so far my friend. Very sweet! I just read the whole thing, and man... what a journey. So many things happened since the start. Hope Starfall can help Chrys see the light. I'm also wondering whats going on in that alternative timeline... hmm... would the ponies from that place be impressed with our boy Starfall?
Author at first chapter you already disabled this story as characters from other Universes appear because this means that as,I remember there was a crossover episode in which rainbow dash goes to the universe of Powerpuff girls. So will this never happen? and the MC will never go other Universes so that the story can evolve to something more original. Now the ending will be similar to mlp where Twilight Sparkle has to watch every loved one die as even if MC becomes a Alicorn all others non Alicorn of MC's harem will die. While if MC could go to other Universes he can find more ways to achieve Immortality and get stronger than Celestia because even Celestia isn't invincible and no matter how much MC trains he won't be able to move the sun.
I have no idea why I'm reading this... no clue, but I did... perhaps out of curiosity or something else? All I can say is read at your own risk
a while back o found this, this was kne of my first webnovels and I loved it, I forgot about it for some time but now I'm back and I'm gunnar re read the whole thing again, I remember it being amazing and I can't wait to dig in
This author is like Joshua Graham from fallout new vegas, except he doesn't convert you to christianity, he turns you into a brony, I have to confess that prior to reading this fic I had no knowledge of mlp and sweet Celestia I'm glad I did for I would have had my childhood ruined
Now that I think about it, I didn't do the traditional shameless Author Review so here it is <3 Great story. Beautiful and a must read for everyone! Now seriously... This Story started as an idea when I was bored and had a writer block with my novel Blood Gacha and somehow ended up taking my priority ever since. I always loved mlp because of the friendship aspect and the interesting story and met a few friends because of it, (yep that really can happen)... I have to say that making it an R18 was another spur of the moment idea which was originally to see people's reactions and as training because I never wrote any smut, but then I realised that I would have to write such chapter for each of the girls in the herd and well...I went with it and I think it turned out well haha! Though I do have to admit there was a bit too much lemons at some point because most of the girls joined at almost the same time, but not to worry, I am going to focus more on the story now so all's well.. Now the Spike sidestories...Why people hate it so much I have no idea but I guess I won't make them as often now other than when the CMC make an appearance which would most likely be just mentioning how their relationship is developing...heh but honestly its fun watching you squirm so I might go back to them..who knows hahaha! Anyway Hope you still love the Story and like always ENJOY!!!