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This book is quite good from what I can tell and I think that in the future it’ll be one of the most popular books Ffjcgccccccgcjfccjcygcyygcgckcgyycgckchuckkllksitffydrd456) givegjghtcftfft
Started out good but it feels like the plot became more and more sloppy. Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.
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first time writing review the story and atmosphere is over all good but I don't like mc coz? that simple he isn't a human hero type person he have what it take to be hero but don't have hearts of a hero to sacrifice everything for the greater good. character development is going on but that all I can say for now.
The synopsis attracted me The story enchante me Amazing Placed this in my library and waiting for further updates Keep up the good work, youve got something herr author
I love this novel, The concept is very good. ..10/10 for plot and storyline It has very good character design and update stability ...Very well written,The writter doing very good job. [img=update]
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this is an amazing book read you won't regret it the mc is someone who would do anything for the people he cares about and while he may make mistakes he trys to learn from it all
Haven't read it yet but many peeps reviewed it 5 stars. Ever since getting interested in supernatural creatures and the Witcher, I've been looking for monster hunter stories and finally found one! I'm expecting great things from this!
I love your story it's super interesting, and the plot is amazing, and I appreciate you giving us alot of info on what is happening thank you 💓.
I really like the storyline 😩👌🏽although it’s still not finished. And the way that he was willing to die just to save his brother was so cool😎!
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Such an interesting story. The beginning is good but I feel more interesting parts will be coming soon. Good job author. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
Except for the world background and update stability, I really can't cut a star anywhere else. It can get you hooked just after reading five chapters.
well I promised after 10 chapters I would give a true review so here it is. This is so far a great story the MC is well made and relatible so far and I doubt he will be op anytime soon. His power and skills sound reasonable. The first boss sounds like something I would love to fight myself and hints at the idea of hidden blood lines/abilities. so I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
After a long time a story managed to grab my attention.. Seems well thought out story. I can put it in words how well this story grabs attention from its readers. A rare gem, Totally worth reading this story
If you're reading this review, then I guess you stumbled upon this novel by chance. Let me tell you one thing, fellow daoists: you will definitely regret not reading this novel! Even if you are not used to reading this particular genre, you'll still be immersed in the story because of the author's impeccable writing style.
An interesting plot furthered by good writing. Although system fantasy stories have become an increasingly common staple, hopefully the author will be able to distance this story from others.
Great potential if well executed. Video game aesthetic in power systems has sort of become a cliché at this point but I believe the author will be able to find a new approach to the genre. It is a bit on the nose and the main character gets over grief a bit too fast, but everything else seems fine. I will probably catch up with future chapters.
I can so well relate with this book only because this is the case of my country right now with different case of kidnap. This might be a novel even so, it is also a caricature of life. Thank you author for writing this great piece. I will sure read until the end of it.
I've read all of the novels author-san and I must say, this story is by far the best one I've read. I'm completely absorbed by the story, great going. I hope you'll win the WSA or at least be somewhat successful at it. Thanks for such a great story.
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Your story is like a magnet. Each chapter makes the readers want for more. I don't want to spoil the fun of others but you're seriously missing out if you're not reading this excellent masterpiece.
I really love the story even though its only four chapter i cant wait for more i really bad at reviews so i never know what to write but this story definitely deserves a five star review I if you see this book i definitely recommend you read it. Anyways thanks for the chapters Author-sama.
I don't know how the author does it, but with every passing chapter the story gets better and better. I know a bit more about the story than the crowd here as I'm a beta reader. Still I can't wait for y'all to see what happens in the future.
the novel is pretty good I like the fact that he is like going to fight weird ghost and supernatural stuff and this is based of me only reading the first chapter I hope you don't drop
After finishing the first volume of the story, I can finally give my work an honest rating. 1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy. 2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake. 3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story. 4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever. Thanks for reading!
This book is quite good from what I can tell and I think that in the future it’ll be one of the most popular books Ffjcgccccccgcjfccjcygcyygcgckcgyycgckchuckkllksitffydrd456) givegjghtcftfft
Started out good but it feels like the plot became more and more sloppy. Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.Filler.
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first time writing review the story and atmosphere is over all good but I don't like mc coz? that simple he isn't a human hero type person he have what it take to be hero but don't have hearts of a hero to sacrifice everything for the greater good. character development is going on but that all I can say for now.
The synopsis attracted me The story enchante me Amazing Placed this in my library and waiting for further updates Keep up the good work, youve got something herr author
I love this novel, The concept is very good. ..10/10 for plot and storyline It has very good character design and update stability ...Very well written,The writter doing very good job. [img=update]
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this is an amazing book read you won't regret it the mc is someone who would do anything for the people he cares about and while he may make mistakes he trys to learn from it all
Haven't read it yet but many peeps reviewed it 5 stars. Ever since getting interested in supernatural creatures and the Witcher, I've been looking for monster hunter stories and finally found one! I'm expecting great things from this!
I love your story it's super interesting, and the plot is amazing, and I appreciate you giving us alot of info on what is happening thank you 💓.
I really like the storyline 😩👌🏽although it’s still not finished. And the way that he was willing to die just to save his brother was so cool😎!
Revelar spoiler Such an interesting story. The beginning is good but I feel more interesting parts will be coming soon. Good job author. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
Except for the world background and update stability, I really can't cut a star anywhere else. It can get you hooked just after reading five chapters.
well I promised after 10 chapters I would give a true review so here it is. This is so far a great story the MC is well made and relatible so far and I doubt he will be op anytime soon. His power and skills sound reasonable. The first boss sounds like something I would love to fight myself and hints at the idea of hidden blood lines/abilities. so I can't wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
After a long time a story managed to grab my attention.. Seems well thought out story. I can put it in words how well this story grabs attention from its readers. A rare gem, Totally worth reading this story
If you're reading this review, then I guess you stumbled upon this novel by chance. Let me tell you one thing, fellow daoists: you will definitely regret not reading this novel! Even if you are not used to reading this particular genre, you'll still be immersed in the story because of the author's impeccable writing style.
An interesting plot furthered by good writing. Although system fantasy stories have become an increasingly common staple, hopefully the author will be able to distance this story from others.
Great potential if well executed. Video game aesthetic in power systems has sort of become a cliché at this point but I believe the author will be able to find a new approach to the genre. It is a bit on the nose and the main character gets over grief a bit too fast, but everything else seems fine. I will probably catch up with future chapters.
I can so well relate with this book only because this is the case of my country right now with different case of kidnap. This might be a novel even so, it is also a caricature of life. Thank you author for writing this great piece. I will sure read until the end of it.
I've read all of the novels author-san and I must say, this story is by far the best one I've read. I'm completely absorbed by the story, great going. I hope you'll win the WSA or at least be somewhat successful at it. Thanks for such a great story.
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Your story is like a magnet. Each chapter makes the readers want for more. I don't want to spoil the fun of others but you're seriously missing out if you're not reading this excellent masterpiece.
I really love the story even though its only four chapter i cant wait for more i really bad at reviews so i never know what to write but this story definitely deserves a five star review I if you see this book i definitely recommend you read it. Anyways thanks for the chapters Author-sama.
I don't know how the author does it, but with every passing chapter the story gets better and better. I know a bit more about the story than the crowd here as I'm a beta reader. Still I can't wait for y'all to see what happens in the future.
the novel is pretty good I like the fact that he is like going to fight weird ghost and supernatural stuff and this is based of me only reading the first chapter I hope you don't drop
After finishing the first volume of the story, I can finally give my work an honest rating. 1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy. 2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake. 3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story. 4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever. Thanks for reading!