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Looks like a great novel, but the whole multiple reincarnatiors and competition stuff is just not my cup of tea.
good novel, I liked the beginning so far, I just wanted to know if there will be construction of the kingdom too xDD continues with the good work author
Base on the existing chapters, this novel has potential. It has an interesting world building and good character design. Writing quality and grammar mmm quite good, and fights are easy to follow. May edit this again after there are more chapters.
Shameless author Review here. So I won't be giving myself 5 stars since I am new and I still have many things that I could improve. The story is about Leo your everyday guy that found himself in the world of Aria and has to fend for himself to survive and accomplish his aspiration. To do so he would have the help of his system that wanted to create the ultimate beast. As we follow Leo we would learn more about the boundless world of Aria, and meet plenty of interesting characters. I think it is an interesting book and you wouldn't be disappointed to pick it.
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Looks like a great novel, but the whole multiple reincarnatiors and competition stuff is just not my cup of tea.
good novel, I liked the beginning so far, I just wanted to know if there will be construction of the kingdom too xDD continues with the good work author
Base on the existing chapters, this novel has potential. It has an interesting world building and good character design. Writing quality and grammar mmm quite good, and fights are easy to follow. May edit this again after there are more chapters.
Shameless author Review here. So I won't be giving myself 5 stars since I am new and I still have many things that I could improve. The story is about Leo your everyday guy that found himself in the world of Aria and has to fend for himself to survive and accomplish his aspiration. To do so he would have the help of his system that wanted to create the ultimate beast. As we follow Leo we would learn more about the boundless world of Aria, and meet plenty of interesting characters. I think it is an interesting book and you wouldn't be disappointed to pick it.
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