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Moonsoon

I noticed that the beginning introduces the parents and the second chapter 2 is when the girl little that's lock up, was reveal not to mention that she scared the heck of 'mother/sister" or whatever. Can't wait to see what else she'll do, focus on how your wording the words a little, 🤔 although when I think about it, it does make your writing unique so I guess it's alright... and I checked your PF and see that this is your first? right? anyways 👏👏👏👏 great job!!

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Moonsoon

I noticed that the beginning introduces the parents and the second chapter 2 is when the girl little that's lock up, was reveal not to mention that she scared the heck of 'mother/sister" or whatever. Can't wait to see what else she'll do, focus on how your wording the words a little, 🤔 although when I think about it, it does make your writing unique so I guess it's alright... and I checked your PF and see that this is your first? right? anyways 👏👏👏👏 great job!!

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