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December 25, 2021. Merry Christmas from Santa Kevin and Santa Kris! It's a small gift for my dear readers. Thank you for supporting this book 💙
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To this author, i applaud your work. I was not very much of a werewolves person, I was more into vampires---- but who cares about that when this is so great?!. One thing that you got me hooked was the background story, and the overall goal of the characters. I'm still on the earlier part, but I could hardly wait to see how this story would unfold. The way you write is neat, it is neater than my room I swear. The mistakes was little to none. I will stay tuned! Although I really can't catch up to the latest chapters due to the lack of fast pass, if I finally buy a membership, except some coins from meee!. I wish you all the best muaah.
Although I only read a few chapters, for now, I am already loving this story. It really seems interesting and is really a must-read. You can really see the effort of the Author. Fighting, Authornim!
I've only read a few chapters so far, but it's clear that the author has put a lot of effort into creating the story and building the characters. I don't usually read werewolf stories, but this one seems quite interesting.
I am a big fan of werewolf stories, so I really enjoy reading this! The chapters really show how the author works hard on writing them. Kudos to you, Authornim! <3
The story is so well written, the world building is highly detailed, showing just how much work the author has put into this and I love how the characters have been developing. There's a consistent number of chapters being uploaded and so I look forward to how the rest of the story plays out !!
An interesting start to the novel. The characters are well-developed and the flow of dialogue is very smooth! The world building is very very well done and is made more interesting by the narration.
So, lets me recap, so the Blue Eyes belong to a girl, but this is BL, I'm wondering who the ML since this is supposed to be BL, I'm going to read it over again, maybe I missed it, really looking for the Male Lead [img=faceslap]
This novel is pretty good. Although I tend to like the start to slap me in the face, this one was more slower pace of explanation- which was needed for the story. You learn more about werewolves lineage and evolution and lots of character backstory. Only thing I would suggest is for author to fix some writing errors- but they are easy to fix and very little. Overall, a good read for anyone into slowburn, bl, werewolves, and scientists (lol) Give it a read!
To be honest, I am not really in wolf, vampire, elf, etc. stories, but your story is different. From the very beginning, you started to describe the created world, so the reader knows the background and the history of the conflict... After reading a few chapters I have assumptions about your inspirations, influences, etc. Well done! Don't worry about errors. Most of the writers have their own editors, but here most of us - doing everything by ourself ;)
What I liked: The author thought out the history and origin of the central conflict. The characterization is also there. What needs improvement: the author can use the good old "show don't tell" writing advice. I also suggest the use of editing and proofreading softwares like Grammarly. In general, the story has potential, even in a saturated genre, it can deliver something fresh.
Ok, ok. I left a comment in you story, yet I'll reiterate. I love the world building in this. Yet, at the same time felt like a slog to read at certain parts for one reason: info dumps. For the rest I'm curious where this will go and I will continue reading it. This one goes to my library. Besides that, the story is good and interesting so far.
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
I love the story! The world building is pretty smooth, introducing all the important topics in the first few chapters, and I enjoy the characters' interactions with each other. The writing style is good and the dialogue is well written, everything is pushing the story forward. I can't wait for the rest of the chapters!
AMAZING! I really, really love a good BL story and this one just does it for me! The first few chapters were very informative and sets the scene for what's to come. The writing was smooth and easy to read as well as very detailed. You really did well in giving the readers background information to your world! Overall, I was really into it, and I can't wait until the romance is further developed! Great job author ^U^
Well, this is my first time reading a BL fiction. Although the genre is not my cup of tea, I'm quite satisfied with the quality of the writing. It's not overly complicated but quite sophisticated. Overall, it's a good read!
Okay, dear... With a werewolfs' story, you're in my territory actually ;p The plot is interesting and the author has ideas. She puts lots of effort into writing and I can just wish her good luck! Readers, give it a try! Now, notes for the author: I'll give you 5/5 to encourage you and because it is worth it. But you have to proofread as you have lots of repetition. My advice: write, let the text rests, then proofread ;)
Love this story author, really amazing....... Especially for a bl lover like me, hehe. I am in heaven............... Best of luck. Waiting for more. ....... Stay safe and keep writing amazing stories like that....
Beautiful story. Though I’m not really interested in bl, I still read it as I should. Congratulations you’re going places. Your English was good. Still invest in something like Grammarly to help catch mistakes you didn’t know where made, a beta reader is also great but none the less. Good job.
Nice story! It's totally different from all kinds of warewolf stories. Synopsis is very interesting and it dragged me in this book. Plot is defined very well. Keep it up author! I appreciate it!
Woah! I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Very nice. No grammatical errors that I can see. The prologue is very dense in facts, but that is very handy going on later in the story, as less has to be explained. I really like the concept for werewolves here, it's a rather unique take and certainly a nice change from the usual. Keep it up!
There are only few chapters when I'm reading this but this book is good. It has neat backstory making it clear from the beginning. Because of the character introduction, it is easy to follow the story. The writing quality is excellent, making the book so immersive. Overall, a much more balanced book with a ton of potential. Waiting for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!1
I read no errors from the author's writing, I can sense that the author really did a great job by polishing the chapters. Readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. If you are into BL novel, Give this a read!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
I read this story before. It is really interesting, I love werewolves and vampires and stuff like that. So of course I love your book! I thought the MC would be the red eyed vampire but I thought wrong!
Revelar spoiler I want to upgrade my shameless review by giving this book a little spoiler in the picture attached, lol~ Today (July, 25), this book finally reached 400s collections after struggling for more than 2 months. I'd like to thanks the readers who are still with me today. I won't shamelessly say that this story is good, but I just wanna say that I put a lot of effort here. I'm proud of this book even though there are a lot of mistakes here. That's why I appreciate all readers who are still with me. Thank you so much for your support! 🥰
December 25, 2021. Merry Christmas from Santa Kevin and Santa Kris! It's a small gift for my dear readers. Thank you for supporting this book 💙
Its a good read Weldone author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
To this author, i applaud your work. I was not very much of a werewolves person, I was more into vampires---- but who cares about that when this is so great?!. One thing that you got me hooked was the background story, and the overall goal of the characters. I'm still on the earlier part, but I could hardly wait to see how this story would unfold. The way you write is neat, it is neater than my room I swear. The mistakes was little to none. I will stay tuned! Although I really can't catch up to the latest chapters due to the lack of fast pass, if I finally buy a membership, except some coins from meee!. I wish you all the best muaah.
Although I only read a few chapters, for now, I am already loving this story. It really seems interesting and is really a must-read. You can really see the effort of the Author. Fighting, Authornim!
I've only read a few chapters so far, but it's clear that the author has put a lot of effort into creating the story and building the characters. I don't usually read werewolf stories, but this one seems quite interesting.
I am a big fan of werewolf stories, so I really enjoy reading this! The chapters really show how the author works hard on writing them. Kudos to you, Authornim! <3
The story is so well written, the world building is highly detailed, showing just how much work the author has put into this and I love how the characters have been developing. There's a consistent number of chapters being uploaded and so I look forward to how the rest of the story plays out !!
An interesting start to the novel. The characters are well-developed and the flow of dialogue is very smooth! The world building is very very well done and is made more interesting by the narration.
So, lets me recap, so the Blue Eyes belong to a girl, but this is BL, I'm wondering who the ML since this is supposed to be BL, I'm going to read it over again, maybe I missed it, really looking for the Male Lead [img=faceslap]
This novel is pretty good. Although I tend to like the start to slap me in the face, this one was more slower pace of explanation- which was needed for the story. You learn more about werewolves lineage and evolution and lots of character backstory. Only thing I would suggest is for author to fix some writing errors- but they are easy to fix and very little. Overall, a good read for anyone into slowburn, bl, werewolves, and scientists (lol) Give it a read!
To be honest, I am not really in wolf, vampire, elf, etc. stories, but your story is different. From the very beginning, you started to describe the created world, so the reader knows the background and the history of the conflict... After reading a few chapters I have assumptions about your inspirations, influences, etc. Well done! Don't worry about errors. Most of the writers have their own editors, but here most of us - doing everything by ourself ;)
What I liked: The author thought out the history and origin of the central conflict. The characterization is also there. What needs improvement: the author can use the good old "show don't tell" writing advice. I also suggest the use of editing and proofreading softwares like Grammarly. In general, the story has potential, even in a saturated genre, it can deliver something fresh.
Ok, ok. I left a comment in you story, yet I'll reiterate. I love the world building in this. Yet, at the same time felt like a slog to read at certain parts for one reason: info dumps. For the rest I'm curious where this will go and I will continue reading it. This one goes to my library. Besides that, the story is good and interesting so far.
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
I love the story! The world building is pretty smooth, introducing all the important topics in the first few chapters, and I enjoy the characters' interactions with each other. The writing style is good and the dialogue is well written, everything is pushing the story forward. I can't wait for the rest of the chapters!
AMAZING! I really, really love a good BL story and this one just does it for me! The first few chapters were very informative and sets the scene for what's to come. The writing was smooth and easy to read as well as very detailed. You really did well in giving the readers background information to your world! Overall, I was really into it, and I can't wait until the romance is further developed! Great job author ^U^
Well, this is my first time reading a BL fiction. Although the genre is not my cup of tea, I'm quite satisfied with the quality of the writing. It's not overly complicated but quite sophisticated. Overall, it's a good read!
Okay, dear... With a werewolfs' story, you're in my territory actually ;p The plot is interesting and the author has ideas. She puts lots of effort into writing and I can just wish her good luck! Readers, give it a try! Now, notes for the author: I'll give you 5/5 to encourage you and because it is worth it. But you have to proofread as you have lots of repetition. My advice: write, let the text rests, then proofread ;)
Love this story author, really amazing....... Especially for a bl lover like me, hehe. I am in heaven............... Best of luck. Waiting for more. ....... Stay safe and keep writing amazing stories like that....
Beautiful story. Though I’m not really interested in bl, I still read it as I should. Congratulations you’re going places. Your English was good. Still invest in something like Grammarly to help catch mistakes you didn’t know where made, a beta reader is also great but none the less. Good job.
Nice story! It's totally different from all kinds of warewolf stories. Synopsis is very interesting and it dragged me in this book. Plot is defined very well. Keep it up author! I appreciate it!
Woah! I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Very nice. No grammatical errors that I can see. The prologue is very dense in facts, but that is very handy going on later in the story, as less has to be explained. I really like the concept for werewolves here, it's a rather unique take and certainly a nice change from the usual. Keep it up!
There are only few chapters when I'm reading this but this book is good. It has neat backstory making it clear from the beginning. Because of the character introduction, it is easy to follow the story. The writing quality is excellent, making the book so immersive. Overall, a much more balanced book with a ton of potential. Waiting for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!1
I read no errors from the author's writing, I can sense that the author really did a great job by polishing the chapters. Readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. If you are into BL novel, Give this a read!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
I read this story before. It is really interesting, I love werewolves and vampires and stuff like that. So of course I love your book! I thought the MC would be the red eyed vampire but I thought wrong!
Revelar spoiler
I want to upgrade my shameless review by giving this book a little spoiler in the picture attached, lol~ Today (July, 25), this book finally reached 400s collections after struggling for more than 2 months. I'd like to thanks the readers who are still with me today. I won't shamelessly say that this story is good, but I just wanna say that I put a lot of effort here. I'm proud of this book even though there are a lot of mistakes here. That's why I appreciate all readers who are still with me. Thank you so much for your support! 🥰