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i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far...
The story is very good and easy to understand but the mc growth seems to be limited despite having said to have an adaptable body i also found confusing about the power system i hope the author will release new chapter
Guys I've never read the original before, is this readable for types like me? -.-..-.-.-.-.-..--..-.-.-.-.-.-..-.--..-.-.-.-.-.-.-...-.-.-.-..-.-.-.-.-..--.-.-...-.-.-.-.-.-..-.-.-.-.
so far so good as of chapter 50 the story is solid. new world is good se far. ...............................................................
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never read it but since you're the one who wrote a father's duty it's gonna be good hehehe that's my prediction also hopes that you don't drop this because if you do I'm gonna be so sad 😭
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Great fanfic ................................................................................................................................................................................
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Que puedo decir , excelente como el autor hizo si trabajo en está novela el personaje es la hostia, desarrollo de personaje bueno,buena historia de fondo la pelea del ultimo capitulo es épica espero que sigas así
Its a Good FF and a def read. Writing Quality is good. Updates idk but if you check when they are updated its recent and it has 2-3 every week. Story is good, its in A Returner Magic and it starts with his own background not the start of cannon. In fact it doesnt even start near cannon instead it builds to the character more and the world background that it has. The character Design is good, the characters are built enough that its actually a character. World background is the same as the original but we focus on our mc more and his actions. Btw he doesnt care if it affects cannon or not which is good since i hate it when MC's are scared or say im using cannon knowledge for myself but dont even do anything. Keep it up
Shishishishi...The taste of other worlds and slice of life is still there...... Welcome back Brother 🎉🎉🎉 -------------------------
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Best 5★★★★★ 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Best.. How can i introduce my own word... I read this novel without any pause.. Best 5(★★★★★) Keep it go 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🙂🙂🙂🙂😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Very original and very well written , this author has never failed to entertain with his works and i expect great things from this ff !! ...
I like it the novel is unique and the MC's situation is good he have a unique magic and the ability to dispel magic same like the original MC and i really like that the mc use spear instead of sword I been reading too much sword user and it's rare to find a spear user MC and can you please describe the look of the weapon or just the picture.and welcome back to writing novel
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so far it's very good! much better than I expected at first. if the fanfic loses quality over time, i will change my rating. --------------------------------
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
finally someone done a fanfic on this manhwa... but author can you please do a time skip? A 5year old do this and that is kinda illogical...
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I haven't seen a returner's magic should be special fanfic before so i really hope you dont drop because its really good. ..................
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i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far... i am the beginning of the story and i liked so far...
The story is very good and easy to understand but the mc growth seems to be limited despite having said to have an adaptable body i also found confusing about the power system i hope the author will release new chapter
Guys I've never read the original before, is this readable for types like me? -.-..-.-.-.-.-..--..-.-.-.-.-.-..-.--..-.-.-.-.-.-.-...-.-.-.-..-.-.-.-.-..--.-.-...-.-.-.-.-.-..-.-.-.-.
so far so good as of chapter 50 the story is solid. new world is good se far. ...............................................................
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never read it but since you're the one who wrote a father's duty it's gonna be good hehehe that's my prediction also hopes that you don't drop this because if you do I'm gonna be so sad 😭
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Great fanfic ................................................................................................................................................................................
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Que puedo decir , excelente como el autor hizo si trabajo en está novela el personaje es la hostia, desarrollo de personaje bueno,buena historia de fondo la pelea del ultimo capitulo es épica espero que sigas así
Its a Good FF and a def read. Writing Quality is good. Updates idk but if you check when they are updated its recent and it has 2-3 every week. Story is good, its in A Returner Magic and it starts with his own background not the start of cannon. In fact it doesnt even start near cannon instead it builds to the character more and the world background that it has. The character Design is good, the characters are built enough that its actually a character. World background is the same as the original but we focus on our mc more and his actions. Btw he doesnt care if it affects cannon or not which is good since i hate it when MC's are scared or say im using cannon knowledge for myself but dont even do anything. Keep it up
Shishishishi...The taste of other worlds and slice of life is still there...... Welcome back Brother 🎉🎉🎉 -------------------------
Revelar spoiler Best 5★★★★★ 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Best.. How can i introduce my own word... I read this novel without any pause.. Best 5(★★★★★) Keep it go 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🙂🙂🙂🙂😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
Very original and very well written , this author has never failed to entertain with his works and i expect great things from this ff !! ...
I like it the novel is unique and the MC's situation is good he have a unique magic and the ability to dispel magic same like the original MC and i really like that the mc use spear instead of sword I been reading too much sword user and it's rare to find a spear user MC and can you please describe the look of the weapon or just the picture.and welcome back to writing novel
Revelar spoiler so far it's very good! much better than I expected at first. if the fanfic loses quality over time, i will change my rating. --------------------------------
This is good, deal with it----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
finally someone done a fanfic on this manhwa... but author can you please do a time skip? A 5year old do this and that is kinda illogical...
Revelar spoiler I haven't seen a returner's magic should be special fanfic before so i really hope you dont drop because its really good. ..................
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