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pas de mise a jour je c est pas ce que vous faite mais c est trop long pour avoir d autre chapitre merci de le mettre a jour je pense que ce roman est ecrit il aura du monde
....................................................................................,......................Dragons are cool.................
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the story so slow the idea is good but you just make it trash story by bing so stretched haaa~~😔 what a disappointment i’m actually kind to give you 3 stars even the slow of the story makes me angry i don’t know about others but that’s just killing a good story
is this dropped? cuz you haven't updated in over a month if it is plz do tell, and if it isn't when will you start updating again. . . . . .
This novel is actually great. It starts of as an entertainment park but now it is steering towards VR kind you know 'Black Tech Internet Cafe' that type. All in all its great but the updating stability is kind of random and very slow.
I like the story but the update is so slow :< so im gonna rate it 4.8:>................................ ................................ .
Me thinking this story is going awesome. It was such a big letdown compare to the author previous works. Why would MC show everyone how he is making the buildings and everything and why would the MC not decide what to do with the town in general. In the end such a disappointment Gould have been a better novel but didn’ t like it was headed too.
this is a good book so far so thanks to the creator! I really like the characters and how the story has progressed.
The novel is very good, it has a good story, although the MC is very narcissistic, and I feel that the story is not developing well and that the updates are very slow.
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I love it 😘😘 pls update more 😍 it's fun reading the story and I love the way system and MC is interacting to each other it's fun 🤪 and I also love the way how all buildings has mystery and those membership cards 🤣 it's just like a phone
its good... chu che is so funny HAHAHAHAHA now im curious if there's a girl that can make chu che fall in love not gonna lie my guts tell me its fairy yimu
Can u update it once a day ? Or 5 chap A week ? It's a nice story .. but slow updating !! ☹️ It take's 4ever .. just to reach 200chap .. it's like 8 or 7 chapter a month 😔 Moarrr !! Moarrr !! Moarrr !!
I'm writing this review due to one problem I have. I'm not just just talking about this novel alone but also the King of Technology (haven't read the newest one.) The problem is that the author stretches things to the extreme. Arcs that should be over in like 2-3 chapters are over 5. I don't care if english is your main language or not. Writing a story is universal so it doesn't matter if you wrote your whole novel in Spanish or something. However, you're still suffering the same problem that you have with your other story. You have written over 1000 chapters in the King of Technology so you're obviously dedicated in making stories but you gotta fix your story development. It's so slow. And it's slow because you're stretching it with pointless stuff. I think I've said this to your other novel before but I'm making a review this time. You have talent in writing and I really believe that so I hope you consider this review I made. -See ya.
I want to start off by saying I love the concept. Some of my favorite novels on this site are stories that bring pop culture to another world like the Black Tech Internet Cafe System or Bringing Culture to Another World. Also, I loved some of the pop culture choices that the author chose to utilize. I am a huge fan of One Piece and you never see western cartoons like the Jetsons referenced. However, while I loved the concept of the story, I felt like execution of the story could have been greatly improved. It felt like the author was just rushing to add as much stuff/new features in the park as possible in an effort to keep the audience's attention rather than properly exploring any one feature with any depth. Take the Rosie Robots as an example. They were first added in the very beginning of the story when the park is first created. I thought they would be a great comedic character. Not only would they have a funny way to handle troublemakers, they were described as being sassy like the original which made me look forward to other funny interactions between the Rosies and the other characters. However, Rosie was never properly developed. Rosie never took any actions or even spoke until chapter 89 when she finally handled her first troublemakers. And after those troublemakers were handled, she has not done anything since. Furthermore, we have never seen her act sassy like her original counterpart. You could have replaced rosey with a generic robot/puppet and had the same result. You had the potential for a great character completely go to waste because you did not explore it. Some features I still don't fully get like the mission center. Can independent people post missions or are they all connected/posted by the park? What does the park even do with the items collected for missions like the fire Chu Che collected in the demonstration mission? Besides cleaning, what other missions are available to the general townsfolk (after all with the installation of self cleaning roads some of the cleaning jobs would have been eliminated)? The simulation pavilion is a similar as I don't really get how that is different from the virtual reality video games or what are the options for that feature since you are only now exploring the Snakes and Ladders option despite mentioning it many chapters ago. These are all things that I could have learned fairly early on, but because the author did not spend tons of time to explore the concept, I still don't fully get these features. In all honesty, I feel like if the author simply used a quarter of the features he had in the story and focused on exploring on each feature in greater depth from various different perspectives, the story would have been more well rounded and engaging. Take One Piece for example, all we saw was that people thought the first episode was interesting. However, readers don't read this kind of story to just see characters mindlessly say a list of pop culture items are cool. Instead, they want to see how pop culture is viewed from vastly different perspectives and how they would affect/impact different environments. When you introduced One Piece, all everyone says is that the first episode is interesting and that everyone calls Luffy, Senior Luffy. However, would everyone call him that? After all, Luffy is a young, dumb, lighthearted teen? Would serious people fixated on decorum and who are hundreds of years old really call him Senior? Plus for the honorable sects, what would they feel about rooting for a pirate? Would they feel like it is dishonorable, would they not care since cultivators rob people as well for cultivation resources (which is a problem in of itself/something to explore), or do they learn to recognize people more for their actions rather than their labels through this story? What new moves can people who have similar yet still distinctly different fighting styles create (ex. swordfighters who don't want to use three swords or martial artists who don't have luffy's stretchiness)? What do the people think about seeing a story happen on the ocean? Is there an ocean in the lower realm? Have many people in that region seen the ocean (especially more local individuals that have not travelled far)? Are people now inspired to sail? Can the design of the sailing ships serve as inspiration and are easier to copy than modern technology? Having an entire arc focused on multiple One Piece episodes and from various perspectives would allow the audience to learn a lot more about the world in general. I also have questions about X-Men. Why were the audience able to sense qi from the characters and learn their special abilities? After all, the X-Men did not really learn their skills, they were born with them. They are genetic mutations, closer to inborn natural features like a hair color or an extra hand rather than skills naturally learned. As such, how were they able to mimic them? If the X-Men and other superheroes like the Hulk (which is always attributed to radiation) have Qi, it begs the question, what even is Qi? And no one found it strange that Iron Man was so strong even without any Qi or did they somehow think the electricity/power source of the suits were the same thing as Qi? Also, to me, it would have been cooler for characters to put in effort towards learning skills instead of automatically being granted skills by simply reading. Even if it is just adapting the skills they already had in new ways (ex. the sword control skill could be expanded to Magneto's metal control) to mimic the skills of characters and work for those skills instead of being handed on a silver platter. These are all things you can explore. The point is not to just say different features or properties are cool. If that was all readers wanted than they would read a list rather than a novel. The point is to use those pop culture properties to explore various characters, see different ways they can influence people, and the world in general. You have plenty of stuff already in the novel which deserves more exploration. Don't feel like you need to add something new every three chapters. Also, be more careful with the spelling. It seems like every chapter there is at least one word that rhymes with the word you actually meant. When you write the word "shower" instead of "cower" you know things are bad. If the author takes their time more, I feel like the story would be a lot better.
so far so good and i wonder why u didn't update this for the last 13 days i hope you wont dropped it bc i enjoyed this novel a b c d e f g h
PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER
These is an overrated novel ! There's no character development in this novel. The Pacing is also nonexistent . Many characters are even forgotten or disappeared as the story progress . The setting is on the lower realm but Author just drop High level Games / Movie (or Movie World that have high civilization ) to the customers which are not fitted for them. Author, they are not modern people ! Do you expect them to understand the modern world norms with less prior knowledge about them ? The norms of the modern world are completely different to the norms of cultivation world. It sounds like you made a caveman watch sci-fi movies. The novel focuses more on comedy yet the jokes are all dry and cringy . I didn't even laugh once when I started reading this novel . The cultivation level is only decorations in this novel cause the MC could even fight higher realm or cultivators who are more experience than him , just because he is a genius. Even if he is a genius, He( who only have regular training for 8-10 years) shouldn't be able to defeat veteran cultivator who has 100 years worth of battle experience ,right ? There are also unexplainable actions the MC could do like making beast achieved breakthrough , extracting spiritual veins and etc . You should give the process how he did it not just make MC do OP stunts with no explanation . That's all .
Are you really the author of i am the king of technology!? To be frank am a great fan of kong of technology, but this novel is not even half good as that. The story beginning was good but it's all get ruiend from MC tell about his handsome dumb things, and some places where didn't have enough explanation. I read up to chapter 24 and seeing more of MC's shameless and dumb handsome comments. I sinisterly hope to see a MC like king of technology in the future chapters of the novel.
Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅. Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Don't miss out on great adventure Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅
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I like the technology gaps in ancient times. It makes things very interesting 🧐 and exciting. I also like 👍 how it is beneficial to cultivate just by playing games and watching anime and eating snacks as well.
interesting novel and a nice example of a novel that isn't innovative but because of generally a good writing quality still an enjoyable read. A guy transmigrates to the body of an hidden talent in a world with cultivation and realms divided by strength. The talent is off course on the lowest realm and he receives a system that helps him in creating a facility that trains people by playing videoganes. What is especially noticeable, at least in the first 30 chapters, is that the author avoids most of the small mistakes and plotholes that you generally see with similar novels. And it's not that the story is very different from the others it is just that the author gives logical explanations for why things happen, just short simple explanations that give just enough away that you don't think 'why is that?' but also not so much that you know what is coming. But there are also mistakes such as a lack of long term planning with regards to plot armor (like the mc suddenly revealing that he was trained by his parents in all sorts of skills without ever revealing that his parents did train him in earlier chapters (off course not revealing what he was trained in))
when I 1st saw it I was expecting for at least 1 entire kingdom to know about MC at 150 chapters but we are still in the Beginning"village" . I can only hope to read it soon.
Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.
I think it's really good, only slight issue is that there are some grammar mistakes but it's nothing major. All in all a good concept which is well executed
I am happy that all the bad guys are getting killed if one by one until the world is at peace. I hope that Landon will bring some people along side to ease the loneliness.
This novel is actually great its like the dark cafe book except with a new world, mc , games, movies, shows and it also ads a new addition to the system with comics/manga being cultivation manuals. This novel made me upset when I ran out of chapters to read and I cant wait for more
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It's fun to read. If possible it would be nice if chapters are added every other day[img=update]. Kidding! As long as the chapters are well made then take all the time you need mr./ms./mrs. author.
My Review for the Readers who are deciding: Well the concept is good and has a lot of potential. It makes the story pretty funny with MC's low EQ. Has a light background. Now onto forward, the MC is DUMB, slow-witted and narcissist. No explanation as to what reward does MC get from system until in late 60s (chapter). Really slow-witted as he usually does not properly understand the situation. The NOVEL mentioned that he was an 'Otaku' who had read all sorts of Novels in his previous life. MC doesn't even kill or even injure the person who tried to kill him. The whole Wenji town should be under System's Security and Monitoring but children as easily kidnapped and why do you even mention that MC is omnipotent in town when it signifies nothing.
pas de mise a jour je c est pas ce que vous faite mais c est trop long pour avoir d autre chapitre merci de le mettre a jour je pense que ce roman est ecrit il aura du monde
....................................................................................,......................Dragons are cool.................
Revelar spoiler the story so slow the idea is good but you just make it trash story by bing so stretched haaa~~😔 what a disappointment i’m actually kind to give you 3 stars even the slow of the story makes me angry i don’t know about others but that’s just killing a good story
is this dropped? cuz you haven't updated in over a month if it is plz do tell, and if it isn't when will you start updating again. . . . . .
This novel is actually great. It starts of as an entertainment park but now it is steering towards VR kind you know 'Black Tech Internet Cafe' that type. All in all its great but the updating stability is kind of random and very slow.
I like the story but the update is so slow :< so im gonna rate it 4.8:>................................ ................................ .
Me thinking this story is going awesome. It was such a big letdown compare to the author previous works. Why would MC show everyone how he is making the buildings and everything and why would the MC not decide what to do with the town in general. In the end such a disappointment Gould have been a better novel but didn’ t like it was headed too.
this is a good book so far so thanks to the creator! I really like the characters and how the story has progressed.
The novel is very good, it has a good story, although the MC is very narcissistic, and I feel that the story is not developing well and that the updates are very slow.
Revelar spoiler I love it 😘😘 pls update more 😍 it's fun reading the story and I love the way system and MC is interacting to each other it's fun 🤪 and I also love the way how all buildings has mystery and those membership cards 🤣 it's just like a phone
its good... chu che is so funny HAHAHAHAHA now im curious if there's a girl that can make chu che fall in love not gonna lie my guts tell me its fairy yimu
Can u update it once a day ? Or 5 chap A week ? It's a nice story .. but slow updating !! ☹️ It take's 4ever .. just to reach 200chap .. it's like 8 or 7 chapter a month 😔 Moarrr !! Moarrr !! Moarrr !!
I'm writing this review due to one problem I have. I'm not just just talking about this novel alone but also the King of Technology (haven't read the newest one.) The problem is that the author stretches things to the extreme. Arcs that should be over in like 2-3 chapters are over 5. I don't care if english is your main language or not. Writing a story is universal so it doesn't matter if you wrote your whole novel in Spanish or something. However, you're still suffering the same problem that you have with your other story. You have written over 1000 chapters in the King of Technology so you're obviously dedicated in making stories but you gotta fix your story development. It's so slow. And it's slow because you're stretching it with pointless stuff. I think I've said this to your other novel before but I'm making a review this time. You have talent in writing and I really believe that so I hope you consider this review I made. -See ya.
I want to start off by saying I love the concept. Some of my favorite novels on this site are stories that bring pop culture to another world like the Black Tech Internet Cafe System or Bringing Culture to Another World. Also, I loved some of the pop culture choices that the author chose to utilize. I am a huge fan of One Piece and you never see western cartoons like the Jetsons referenced. However, while I loved the concept of the story, I felt like execution of the story could have been greatly improved. It felt like the author was just rushing to add as much stuff/new features in the park as possible in an effort to keep the audience's attention rather than properly exploring any one feature with any depth. Take the Rosie Robots as an example. They were first added in the very beginning of the story when the park is first created. I thought they would be a great comedic character. Not only would they have a funny way to handle troublemakers, they were described as being sassy like the original which made me look forward to other funny interactions between the Rosies and the other characters. However, Rosie was never properly developed. Rosie never took any actions or even spoke until chapter 89 when she finally handled her first troublemakers. And after those troublemakers were handled, she has not done anything since. Furthermore, we have never seen her act sassy like her original counterpart. You could have replaced rosey with a generic robot/puppet and had the same result. You had the potential for a great character completely go to waste because you did not explore it. Some features I still don't fully get like the mission center. Can independent people post missions or are they all connected/posted by the park? What does the park even do with the items collected for missions like the fire Chu Che collected in the demonstration mission? Besides cleaning, what other missions are available to the general townsfolk (after all with the installation of self cleaning roads some of the cleaning jobs would have been eliminated)? The simulation pavilion is a similar as I don't really get how that is different from the virtual reality video games or what are the options for that feature since you are only now exploring the Snakes and Ladders option despite mentioning it many chapters ago. These are all things that I could have learned fairly early on, but because the author did not spend tons of time to explore the concept, I still don't fully get these features. In all honesty, I feel like if the author simply used a quarter of the features he had in the story and focused on exploring on each feature in greater depth from various different perspectives, the story would have been more well rounded and engaging. Take One Piece for example, all we saw was that people thought the first episode was interesting. However, readers don't read this kind of story to just see characters mindlessly say a list of pop culture items are cool. Instead, they want to see how pop culture is viewed from vastly different perspectives and how they would affect/impact different environments. When you introduced One Piece, all everyone says is that the first episode is interesting and that everyone calls Luffy, Senior Luffy. However, would everyone call him that? After all, Luffy is a young, dumb, lighthearted teen? Would serious people fixated on decorum and who are hundreds of years old really call him Senior? Plus for the honorable sects, what would they feel about rooting for a pirate? Would they feel like it is dishonorable, would they not care since cultivators rob people as well for cultivation resources (which is a problem in of itself/something to explore), or do they learn to recognize people more for their actions rather than their labels through this story? What new moves can people who have similar yet still distinctly different fighting styles create (ex. swordfighters who don't want to use three swords or martial artists who don't have luffy's stretchiness)? What do the people think about seeing a story happen on the ocean? Is there an ocean in the lower realm? Have many people in that region seen the ocean (especially more local individuals that have not travelled far)? Are people now inspired to sail? Can the design of the sailing ships serve as inspiration and are easier to copy than modern technology? Having an entire arc focused on multiple One Piece episodes and from various perspectives would allow the audience to learn a lot more about the world in general. I also have questions about X-Men. Why were the audience able to sense qi from the characters and learn their special abilities? After all, the X-Men did not really learn their skills, they were born with them. They are genetic mutations, closer to inborn natural features like a hair color or an extra hand rather than skills naturally learned. As such, how were they able to mimic them? If the X-Men and other superheroes like the Hulk (which is always attributed to radiation) have Qi, it begs the question, what even is Qi? And no one found it strange that Iron Man was so strong even without any Qi or did they somehow think the electricity/power source of the suits were the same thing as Qi? Also, to me, it would have been cooler for characters to put in effort towards learning skills instead of automatically being granted skills by simply reading. Even if it is just adapting the skills they already had in new ways (ex. the sword control skill could be expanded to Magneto's metal control) to mimic the skills of characters and work for those skills instead of being handed on a silver platter. These are all things you can explore. The point is not to just say different features or properties are cool. If that was all readers wanted than they would read a list rather than a novel. The point is to use those pop culture properties to explore various characters, see different ways they can influence people, and the world in general. You have plenty of stuff already in the novel which deserves more exploration. Don't feel like you need to add something new every three chapters. Also, be more careful with the spelling. It seems like every chapter there is at least one word that rhymes with the word you actually meant. When you write the word "shower" instead of "cower" you know things are bad. If the author takes their time more, I feel like the story would be a lot better.
so far so good and i wonder why u didn't update this for the last 13 days i hope you wont dropped it bc i enjoyed this novel a b c d e f g h
PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER PLS NEW CHAPTER
These is an overrated novel ! There's no character development in this novel. The Pacing is also nonexistent . Many characters are even forgotten or disappeared as the story progress . The setting is on the lower realm but Author just drop High level Games / Movie (or Movie World that have high civilization ) to the customers which are not fitted for them. Author, they are not modern people ! Do you expect them to understand the modern world norms with less prior knowledge about them ? The norms of the modern world are completely different to the norms of cultivation world. It sounds like you made a caveman watch sci-fi movies. The novel focuses more on comedy yet the jokes are all dry and cringy . I didn't even laugh once when I started reading this novel . The cultivation level is only decorations in this novel cause the MC could even fight higher realm or cultivators who are more experience than him , just because he is a genius. Even if he is a genius, He( who only have regular training for 8-10 years) shouldn't be able to defeat veteran cultivator who has 100 years worth of battle experience ,right ? There are also unexplainable actions the MC could do like making beast achieved breakthrough , extracting spiritual veins and etc . You should give the process how he did it not just make MC do OP stunts with no explanation . That's all .
Are you really the author of i am the king of technology!? To be frank am a great fan of kong of technology, but this novel is not even half good as that. The story beginning was good but it's all get ruiend from MC tell about his handsome dumb things, and some places where didn't have enough explanation. I read up to chapter 24 and seeing more of MC's shameless and dumb handsome comments. I sinisterly hope to see a MC like king of technology in the future chapters of the novel.
Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅. Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Don't miss out on great adventure Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅ Worth reading✅✅✅✅✅
moowwrrrrrr!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I like the technology gaps in ancient times. It makes things very interesting 🧐 and exciting. I also like 👍 how it is beneficial to cultivate just by playing games and watching anime and eating snacks as well.
interesting novel and a nice example of a novel that isn't innovative but because of generally a good writing quality still an enjoyable read. A guy transmigrates to the body of an hidden talent in a world with cultivation and realms divided by strength. The talent is off course on the lowest realm and he receives a system that helps him in creating a facility that trains people by playing videoganes. What is especially noticeable, at least in the first 30 chapters, is that the author avoids most of the small mistakes and plotholes that you generally see with similar novels. And it's not that the story is very different from the others it is just that the author gives logical explanations for why things happen, just short simple explanations that give just enough away that you don't think 'why is that?' but also not so much that you know what is coming. But there are also mistakes such as a lack of long term planning with regards to plot armor (like the mc suddenly revealing that he was trained by his parents in all sorts of skills without ever revealing that his parents did train him in earlier chapters (off course not revealing what he was trained in))
when I 1st saw it I was expecting for at least 1 entire kingdom to know about MC at 150 chapters but we are still in the Beginning"village" . I can only hope to read it soon.
Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.
I think it's really good, only slight issue is that there are some grammar mistakes but it's nothing major. All in all a good concept which is well executed
I am happy that all the bad guys are getting killed if one by one until the world is at peace. I hope that Landon will bring some people along side to ease the loneliness.
This novel is actually great its like the dark cafe book except with a new world, mc , games, movies, shows and it also ads a new addition to the system with comics/manga being cultivation manuals. This novel made me upset when I ran out of chapters to read and I cant wait for more
Revelar spoiler It's fun to read. If possible it would be nice if chapters are added every other day[img=update]. Kidding! As long as the chapters are well made then take all the time you need mr./ms./mrs. author.
My Review for the Readers who are deciding: Well the concept is good and has a lot of potential. It makes the story pretty funny with MC's low EQ. Has a light background. Now onto forward, the MC is DUMB, slow-witted and narcissist. No explanation as to what reward does MC get from system until in late 60s (chapter). Really slow-witted as he usually does not properly understand the situation. The NOVEL mentioned that he was an 'Otaku' who had read all sorts of Novels in his previous life. MC doesn't even kill or even injure the person who tried to kill him. The whole Wenji town should be under System's Security and Monitoring but children as easily kidnapped and why do you even mention that MC is omnipotent in town when it signifies nothing.