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I am actually kind of surprised. The quality of this book is unexpectedly good. I expected for the story to degrade as the plot continued bur oh, what a surprise I received. The emotions portrayed by the character, the descriptive scenes, and how the plot has developed till now has been fantastic and I can't wait to read more of this.
I am both surprised and delighted by your story. You are a much better writer than me, and I can't wait to read more. The story's pace is good. The characters feel like real people and aren't two dimensional. The fights are well written, and the writing style is surprisingly entertaining and fun all on its own. I rarely do reviews, but that's just how much I liked what I read so far. Only things I'd point out story wise to make the MC slightly more proactive. He's a prince and a strong fighter. But, he's still vulnerable to schemes and what not. His mere presence changes things, thats why sticking too closely to canon and waiting for events to happen isn't wise. Writing wise, I'd recommend inserting a few more POVs especially of characters like joffery and Cersi. I am just nitpicking by this point, but overall I'm quite happy buy what I have read so far.
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................................................... very good ............................................................................................
Great story so far , hope you didn't dropped it as i would really like to read the following chapter
Such a absolute shame this was dropped or isnt posting for the last 3 months the writing was excellent the pacing the shaping of the story and even the romance was all spot on for me tbh its really a shame i hope its picked back up because this would have been an absolute gem no doubt
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it was a perfect history, god mc, mc strong.................................................................................................................................................................. But the autor drop it.
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don't let this story die please man it's pretty amazing so far ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
A surprisingly good story, can't wait to see more, only worrying thing is that the author said he was gonna have a pint and since then he hasnt posted a chapter, hope it's not gonna stop
Your doing a great job so far and I've been enjoying it ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Amazing. I regret that I read it too early and caught up with the latest. While I am not actively looking for a GOT fanfic that is exactly my taste nor waste time looking. There is one GOT fanfic on this site that I like, that GOT Necromancer fanfic. If I would compare the two. This one is superior, at least in my taste. The other fanfic has most the qualities I like, same to this. Don't get me wrong, both authors are amazing but where they differ is the way they write. The other focused on the events, feels like reading a summary sometimes, and lack interactions. Not a dealbreaker tho, and still amazing. While this. Umu. This is good, I love the character interactions. Dialogues. I love it! The author did a great job. I've been considering writing a GOT fanfic that suits my liking but then I stumbled to this. Thank the lords I didn't because it will suck. This fanfic and the other fanfic are much better than what would I'll ever make. Crazy that I'm not paying for reading up to this quality.
the quality talks for itself. I highly suggest to give this a try . . . .. . . ... . . .. . .. . .. .. ... .. . . . . .. .. ..
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Your doing a great job so far and I've been enjoying it ☺️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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This is actually very good the writeing quality is amazing and You take time to show your charecters motivations and you also make these motivations the driveing force for the charecter in some famfics the charecter just does something without any motivations. you do well with this and actually hive your charecter real personality. i also like how you use different povs you dont overuse them you use them to bring to light certain story elements and guve attention to certain things instead of useing them for the sake of having a diffrent pesective.
give me new episodeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. //////////////////////////Gap-filling /////////////////////////
I love this story. Please hope joffery also dies with robert. Hope joffery doesn't become king even for a day. I love this story. Please hope joffery also dies with robert. Hope joffery doesn't become king even for a day.
Don’t worry fellow sellswords, I was not forced or paid in any way to make this review. The quality of this fanfiction can not be explained and describe with a few mere words. This is more fine than the wine at the Red Wedding. - Ser Tyrone Lannister
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Im just happy you didn’t do the “3 wishes in game of thrones” trope where the dude is also a wizard and a demigod. Thank you for just giving the dude enhanced strength.
Mc is strong, good humor, not bad romance. I hope it will harem. Recommend reading because it's best GoT fanfic I have seen so far. Even tho I didn't see much
this novel is a hidden treasure for anyone who was wondering the dialogue fits and is also very funny at times I will say the Harem tag scares me because the relationship going on rn is so good and I'm worried more girls would ruin that aspect of the story but we'll have to wait and see I suppose
lo que no me gusta es el cambio de edades de los personajes , pero todo lo otro esta muy bien 👍.,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,.............................................
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I truly enjoy this story. The pacing of the story itself is done very well. The plot moves along in each chapter quick enough that it doesn’t feel like a slog and slow enough that I don’t feel like things are a blur. The design of the main character comes across well and he feels truly integrated into the world of Westeros. I also enjoyed his interactions with the characters so far and hope to see how his relationship with his grandfather and mother has developed in the future. The way you introduce things is also well done it is not info dumped onto you and feels natural. The story is still new so I can’t really gauge update stability yet. Once more the story is published I’ll be able to really tell if it develops well overtime. All in all my eyes have been blessed (Grammatically) compared to what I have seen and read on this site. Keep it up 👍🏾. P.S. I do have some questions. Will there be more OC’s and the story is tagged harem so how big are you going or have you changed you mind on that? Another is will you have other POV’s to give it that ASOIAF feel or mainly focus on Tomman? Just a final question how will Dorne factor into this (Arianne Martell??)? Regardless if you answer, good luck 🍀 and I hope this helps you grow as a writer if that is your passion. -Hmm...this is one of my rare reviews
I am actually kind of surprised. The quality of this book is unexpectedly good. I expected for the story to degrade as the plot continued bur oh, what a surprise I received. The emotions portrayed by the character, the descriptive scenes, and how the plot has developed till now has been fantastic and I can't wait to read more of this.
I am both surprised and delighted by your story. You are a much better writer than me, and I can't wait to read more. The story's pace is good. The characters feel like real people and aren't two dimensional. The fights are well written, and the writing style is surprisingly entertaining and fun all on its own. I rarely do reviews, but that's just how much I liked what I read so far. Only things I'd point out story wise to make the MC slightly more proactive. He's a prince and a strong fighter. But, he's still vulnerable to schemes and what not. His mere presence changes things, thats why sticking too closely to canon and waiting for events to happen isn't wise. Writing wise, I'd recommend inserting a few more POVs especially of characters like joffery and Cersi. I am just nitpicking by this point, but overall I'm quite happy buy what I have read so far.
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................................................... very good ............................................................................................
Great story so far , hope you didn't dropped it as i would really like to read the following chapter
Such a absolute shame this was dropped or isnt posting for the last 3 months the writing was excellent the pacing the shaping of the story and even the romance was all spot on for me tbh its really a shame i hope its picked back up because this would have been an absolute gem no doubt
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it was a perfect history, god mc, mc strong.................................................................................................................................................................. But the autor drop it.
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don't let this story die please man it's pretty amazing so far ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
A surprisingly good story, can't wait to see more, only worrying thing is that the author said he was gonna have a pint and since then he hasnt posted a chapter, hope it's not gonna stop
Your doing a great job so far and I've been enjoying it ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Amazing. I regret that I read it too early and caught up with the latest. While I am not actively looking for a GOT fanfic that is exactly my taste nor waste time looking. There is one GOT fanfic on this site that I like, that GOT Necromancer fanfic. If I would compare the two. This one is superior, at least in my taste. The other fanfic has most the qualities I like, same to this. Don't get me wrong, both authors are amazing but where they differ is the way they write. The other focused on the events, feels like reading a summary sometimes, and lack interactions. Not a dealbreaker tho, and still amazing. While this. Umu. This is good, I love the character interactions. Dialogues. I love it! The author did a great job. I've been considering writing a GOT fanfic that suits my liking but then I stumbled to this. Thank the lords I didn't because it will suck. This fanfic and the other fanfic are much better than what would I'll ever make. Crazy that I'm not paying for reading up to this quality.
the quality talks for itself. I highly suggest to give this a try . . . .. . . ... . . .. . .. . .. .. ... .. . . . . .. .. ..
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Revelar spoiler Your doing a great job so far and I've been enjoying it ☺️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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This is actually very good the writeing quality is amazing and You take time to show your charecters motivations and you also make these motivations the driveing force for the charecter in some famfics the charecter just does something without any motivations. you do well with this and actually hive your charecter real personality. i also like how you use different povs you dont overuse them you use them to bring to light certain story elements and guve attention to certain things instead of useing them for the sake of having a diffrent pesective.
give me new episodeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. //////////////////////////Gap-filling /////////////////////////
I love this story. Please hope joffery also dies with robert. Hope joffery doesn't become king even for a day. I love this story. Please hope joffery also dies with robert. Hope joffery doesn't become king even for a day.
Don’t worry fellow sellswords, I was not forced or paid in any way to make this review. The quality of this fanfiction can not be explained and describe with a few mere words. This is more fine than the wine at the Red Wedding. - Ser Tyrone Lannister
Revelar spoiler Im just happy you didn’t do the “3 wishes in game of thrones” trope where the dude is also a wizard and a demigod. Thank you for just giving the dude enhanced strength.
Mc is strong, good humor, not bad romance. I hope it will harem. Recommend reading because it's best GoT fanfic I have seen so far. Even tho I didn't see much
this novel is a hidden treasure for anyone who was wondering the dialogue fits and is also very funny at times I will say the Harem tag scares me because the relationship going on rn is so good and I'm worried more girls would ruin that aspect of the story but we'll have to wait and see I suppose
lo que no me gusta es el cambio de edades de los personajes , pero todo lo otro esta muy bien 👍.,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,..............................................,.............................................
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I truly enjoy this story. The pacing of the story itself is done very well. The plot moves along in each chapter quick enough that it doesn’t feel like a slog and slow enough that I don’t feel like things are a blur. The design of the main character comes across well and he feels truly integrated into the world of Westeros. I also enjoyed his interactions with the characters so far and hope to see how his relationship with his grandfather and mother has developed in the future. The way you introduce things is also well done it is not info dumped onto you and feels natural. The story is still new so I can’t really gauge update stability yet. Once more the story is published I’ll be able to really tell if it develops well overtime. All in all my eyes have been blessed (Grammatically) compared to what I have seen and read on this site. Keep it up 👍🏾. P.S. I do have some questions. Will there be more OC’s and the story is tagged harem so how big are you going or have you changed you mind on that? Another is will you have other POV’s to give it that ASOIAF feel or mainly focus on Tomman? Just a final question how will Dorne factor into this (Arianne Martell??)? Regardless if you answer, good luck 🍀 and I hope this helps you grow as a writer if that is your passion. -Hmm...this is one of my rare reviews