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The story hooked me from the start, I definitely recommend this. starting with an action really does it. the characters and their names are interesting... good job.
Everything about this book is interesting, it puts the reader on the edge, as you will be anxious about the next scene, the female lead is really good and Ares who is being forced to save his enemy because of his feelings for her. The book is filled with thrills and suspense [img=exp] well done author your book is amazing 👌
First of all, I loved the book cover! Nice Art! Okay, for the review. It's a great mix of different themes. I really liked how you do the action scenes. Great job!
What a mix of reincarnation, cultivation, crime, fantasy...! Well done! The character, Aries De Luna, assasin, rich and powerful..., but in his 'reality' a very poor guy, who has to save the world... first of all he has to save his enemies, that even more difficult. The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive, I like the way you described the fighting scenes.
I like it, the plot and world background, as well as the title. Not to mention that I super love the characters name mainly Aries as I'm an Aries, a fire sign, then De Luna,?? which means of moon right? so I'm guessing Aries of moon... I don't know if that wasn't purpose, but I am soft when it comes names that has meanings in it. Anyway the novel itself is quite promising and I'm wishing you the very best dearest author.
Creatively written and really good plot so far that I've read, its worth diving into however, THE SYNOPSIS IS NOT EVEN A PERCENT OF HOW GOOD THE BOOK IS! , gotta say the author has taste when it comes to sketching the attire of Luna and Aries, honestly looking forward to finishing this book soon however some chunks of text are wordy at times which may be a downside for some readers.
very creative idea, I like it so much. the most important thing that the language and the description were so ease and light. that making me as a reader focused on the events and action. the first chapter for example impeded me in the main event that make me hocked. I Highly recommended great novel.
The author did well with writing the fighting scenes. It was clear and cut to the point. The characters were well developed, having clear goals, and the story so far seems to have an exciting plot. Worth the read so far!
Finally an interesting novel with not a goody too shoes MC. This novel depicts the story of an imperfect mc and that's the beauty of it. The world doesn't feel black and while
First and foremost I'd like to say great work for bringing this masterpiece to life. I love it and the way you used the words to create the image is so admirable. I can go on and on, the plot flows so well that it seems natural, attracting every inch of attention i had to the story. A beautiful masterpiece, definitely worth a vote
This is a must read! No kidding 🥰💕 The first chapter already gave me the reason to support this until the end. [img=recommend][img=recommend] Your writing quality is great, and so does your characters. The flow of the story is well-written, and I can pick up the strong emotions of your novel through your character. It's also easy to play my imagination while reading it, well done! [img=recommend][img=recommend] Keep up the good work, Author! Definitely going to keep this in my collection. Good luck! 😊👍🏻
Wow! An amazing story with perfect dialogues and background description! It's well written and interesting too! Keep up the good work, author!
5 stars! The novel has a great story and potential the character and mc were wholesome, the narration was smooth there were just a few punctuation mark error but that didn't affect the story. Keep up the good work author
The characters are consistent and well done with little grammar mistakes. I have enjoyed reading this and will continue to as this has kept me captivated. Keep up the good work Author! I'm expecting more from this novel.
It was interesting in the way that the MC was deliberating between his realities in the new world he was in. Kind of funny and exciting how the story plays out. I love it!
Books for WSA must get a loud hand. Great work. Well, never imagined a spiritual drama fantasy to be so good. An advise here, please make your synopsis/description a bit bigger to catch more audience. It is just... straight forward. Include dialogues or more description of the worlds, or of the characters, or anything, that can make someone hooked for more. May you make it to the win-win! [img=recommend]
Short review: an action-packed start, with an MC who's very convinced he's being tormented in a subtle way, and some good characterizations. Long review: The writing is good, with only a few kinks, overall making it a natural read. The story starts out strong, with action and characterizations, but then it drags a little bit while the whole setting is being explained. Perhaps I'm being harsh, but if action is being thrown at me from the start, I kinda expect there to be more stabby stabby than talky talky in the story. The characters are all well-rounded, with a good schism between the MC's expectations, based on his old world, and what is actually happening in this new world. It's very well done. Which brings me to the world, which seems deep and well-thought out. I have some questions which I would like to get answered in the future, but for now I give it all the marks I can.
Honestly wish I could rate it 4.999999999 forever. Only one problem. I have no idea what this story is about. I read 3 chapters, probably could read more, but I have no idea what direction the story is heading towards. If you clear that up within the first few chapters, it will definitely be an amazing book
Definitely a gripping beginning! There was a lot of information and many characters being introduced at once, but the writing itself was descriptive and well-paced. The author paints a very clear picture with their writing. This seems like it will be a very interesting story!
A gripping story even from the start. The characters are intriguing, and the narration is fast-paced with fantastic action scenes. Great job, author, and good luck winning the contest!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
The story hooked me from the start, I definitely recommend this. starting with an action really does it. the characters and their names are interesting... good job.
Everything about this book is interesting, it puts the reader on the edge, as you will be anxious about the next scene, the female lead is really good and Ares who is being forced to save his enemy because of his feelings for her. The book is filled with thrills and suspense [img=exp] well done author your book is amazing 👌
First of all, I loved the book cover! Nice Art! Okay, for the review. It's a great mix of different themes. I really liked how you do the action scenes. Great job!
What a mix of reincarnation, cultivation, crime, fantasy...! Well done! The character, Aries De Luna, assasin, rich and powerful..., but in his 'reality' a very poor guy, who has to save the world... first of all he has to save his enemies, that even more difficult. The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive, I like the way you described the fighting scenes.
I like it, the plot and world background, as well as the title. Not to mention that I super love the characters name mainly Aries as I'm an Aries, a fire sign, then De Luna,?? which means of moon right? so I'm guessing Aries of moon... I don't know if that wasn't purpose, but I am soft when it comes names that has meanings in it. Anyway the novel itself is quite promising and I'm wishing you the very best dearest author.
Creatively written and really good plot so far that I've read, its worth diving into however, THE SYNOPSIS IS NOT EVEN A PERCENT OF HOW GOOD THE BOOK IS! , gotta say the author has taste when it comes to sketching the attire of Luna and Aries, honestly looking forward to finishing this book soon however some chunks of text are wordy at times which may be a downside for some readers.
very creative idea, I like it so much. the most important thing that the language and the description were so ease and light. that making me as a reader focused on the events and action. the first chapter for example impeded me in the main event that make me hocked. I Highly recommended great novel.
The author did well with writing the fighting scenes. It was clear and cut to the point. The characters were well developed, having clear goals, and the story so far seems to have an exciting plot. Worth the read so far!
Finally an interesting novel with not a goody too shoes MC. This novel depicts the story of an imperfect mc and that's the beauty of it. The world doesn't feel black and while
First and foremost I'd like to say great work for bringing this masterpiece to life. I love it and the way you used the words to create the image is so admirable. I can go on and on, the plot flows so well that it seems natural, attracting every inch of attention i had to the story. A beautiful masterpiece, definitely worth a vote
This is a must read! No kidding 🥰💕 The first chapter already gave me the reason to support this until the end. [img=recommend][img=recommend] Your writing quality is great, and so does your characters. The flow of the story is well-written, and I can pick up the strong emotions of your novel through your character. It's also easy to play my imagination while reading it, well done! [img=recommend][img=recommend] Keep up the good work, Author! Definitely going to keep this in my collection. Good luck! 😊👍🏻
Wow! An amazing story with perfect dialogues and background description! It's well written and interesting too! Keep up the good work, author!
5 stars! The novel has a great story and potential the character and mc were wholesome, the narration was smooth there were just a few punctuation mark error but that didn't affect the story. Keep up the good work author
The characters are consistent and well done with little grammar mistakes. I have enjoyed reading this and will continue to as this has kept me captivated. Keep up the good work Author! I'm expecting more from this novel.
It was interesting in the way that the MC was deliberating between his realities in the new world he was in. Kind of funny and exciting how the story plays out. I love it!
Books for WSA must get a loud hand. Great work. Well, never imagined a spiritual drama fantasy to be so good. An advise here, please make your synopsis/description a bit bigger to catch more audience. It is just... straight forward. Include dialogues or more description of the worlds, or of the characters, or anything, that can make someone hooked for more. May you make it to the win-win! [img=recommend]
Short review: an action-packed start, with an MC who's very convinced he's being tormented in a subtle way, and some good characterizations. Long review: The writing is good, with only a few kinks, overall making it a natural read. The story starts out strong, with action and characterizations, but then it drags a little bit while the whole setting is being explained. Perhaps I'm being harsh, but if action is being thrown at me from the start, I kinda expect there to be more stabby stabby than talky talky in the story. The characters are all well-rounded, with a good schism between the MC's expectations, based on his old world, and what is actually happening in this new world. It's very well done. Which brings me to the world, which seems deep and well-thought out. I have some questions which I would like to get answered in the future, but for now I give it all the marks I can.
Honestly wish I could rate it 4.999999999 forever. Only one problem. I have no idea what this story is about. I read 3 chapters, probably could read more, but I have no idea what direction the story is heading towards. If you clear that up within the first few chapters, it will definitely be an amazing book
Definitely a gripping beginning! There was a lot of information and many characters being introduced at once, but the writing itself was descriptive and well-paced. The author paints a very clear picture with their writing. This seems like it will be a very interesting story!
A gripping story even from the start. The characters are intriguing, and the narration is fast-paced with fantastic action scenes. Great job, author, and good luck winning the contest!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
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