Reviews of The Alpha King by chillnutella - Webnovel

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pocketpet

Overall, this was a good book. Unfortunately, there were a lot of words that were misspelled and phrases mixed up. Both of those things made it difficult to follow the world building and romance plot line.

6mth
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Tamarama

I really enjoyed the different characters and the inner dialogue. You get to feel the heart wrenching emotions throughout the story. Thank you for a wonderful adventure.

6mth
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novelline00

Book was okay but it is infuriating that the common response to their argument and conflict is running away and keeping secrets. It makes the plot and characters so juvenile.

9mth
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Jonna9799

The book had its ups and downs, and there was a part that I did not understand of why she was released, but I’m glad she was because it allowed the story to move forward I did enjoy their love and I really really loved the fact that she just did not like him at the beginning and made him work for it ,that was so cool. Enjoyed how it came together at the end. Kind of wish it was a little bit longer, but it is what it is. Thanks for that extra at the end

1yr
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Eleanor_Martin

great job loved it 😊😊👍👍 sent it to family

1yr
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Emmy_Arnold

It was an amazing book and not too lengty totally my cup of tea. I cant stop smilling while reading this book the way Victoria and Xaviar were witb eachother and how possesive Xaviar was about Victoria..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

1yr
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Denise_Fludd

I loved this story wished it was longer I wanted to know what they did with Katherine for living, as well as the twins and if Tori was able to finally reach out to Aurora about the death of Jacob. so many unanswered questions but overall good story

1yr
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Nabibam

This book was well written despite a lot of misspelled words and grammatical errors here and there. The story itself was sweet and engaging and I liked the fact that it didn’t drag on.

2yr
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Patricia_Levy

This is the first book on WEBNOVEL I have ever finished. Which is saying something. Author, wonder story. You have given another version to the werewolf culture that I simply LOVE. I loved Tori and her feisty nature. I love that you kept her personality the same even to the end. I love Xavier and his need to protect her no matter what. I love the story behind everything that has happened to both of them. Truly, a wonderful story. I do reccomend going back and editing. You have a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Other than that, beautiful work.

2yr
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Sharyl_Anderson_6556

A must read book!! This book has a different spin to werewolves and that's what keeps you hook. It doesn't have moments where you feel the author uses a lot of fillers to get their thoughts acrossed. Looking forward to reading more from this author. Enjoy!!

2yr
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Mma_Nnamani

what a hidden gem😳. this book is very intriguing, finished it under one night. the character development is amazing and i could feel their emotions with the beautiful description the author gave of the characters. wonderful story author 🙃

2yr
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Manuella_Romana

Till now I enjoyed every chapter of the story. hope that there will be an update soon. because I can't wait to continue reading this novel💞🥰👍👍

2yr
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ElleFrost2303

This is such an amazing book! I couldn’t put it down. The writing is amazing - I felt every awakward, loving and even horrible moments of the characters. I dream to write as well as this book has been and do my own chaeacters justice.

2yr
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Roxanne_Quezada

This is one of the better books on Webnovel without a doubt! Very well written and the fact that you can actually read the book without the annoying locked privelage chapters! A definite must read!

2yr
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KristleYoung

A sassy & funny FL and a strong Alpha King. Of this I would have enjoyed it more on it explaining a bit more on ‘his side.’ His character seems to not be quite filled in and is solely her view. The scenery is fairly vague. Leaving details out and unanswered questions. None the less- the basics are strong enough and I still feel satisfied on the overall experience.

2yr
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Tash_Schofield

A wonderful story ❤️ It seriously needs editing though. I would be honored to edit this story for you, and any others that you write. A little more background on some of the important characters , would be good, also.

2yr
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Joan_Mitsou

Nice story. I would like some more details on the King though. The daily life of Luna and A, is not mentioned. The ending is very nice but short. I would like to see the celebration

2yr
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Heather_Ham

Story line was a good one. However, there were definitely a lot of grammatical errors. The lead female character takes a while to become a believable person. Her insecurities are definitely over the top

2yr
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Idhriel
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I read it when already concluded so I can’ t say anything about how was the update. It was a good story, well written although with a few grammar mistakes, nothing that a good proofreading wouldn’t solve. it was not enough to make me want to drop the book. I like the fact the story was not dragged over 400 chapters, which was actually the reason I decided to read one more werewolf story. But I had to point out a few things, like some people came up and desapeares without development or explanation of what was made of them. Overall, it was enjoyable, I do not regret spending a few coins in it. Congrats author, I hope to have the opportunity to read more from you.

2yr
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Marilyn_Roman

this is a fascinating and different story with good twists. the only problem is an occasional misspelled word or wrong one. A very easy read

2yr
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2yr
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Mlga0_put_7166

Enjoyed the character development and all the twists in the plot. have to admit was annoying at times, but by the next chapter (s) there were resolutions or plot changes.

2yr
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ReaderPrime

Excellent adventure! Definitely the best book I have read in a while. Smartly written with a story that is captivating and rewarding. Enjoyed the journey. Recommend this as a great book and now a new favorite author. Looking forward to reading more from this author. Thank you for the journey!!!

2yr
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Gosia_Lovett

Well developed story and characters. The lead characters are full of spirit and very likable. You will root for them to the the last sentence of this book.

2yr
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Cessasmom_09

I loved the story. I wish it didn't end so soon. I read it all in one sitting. I am so hoping for a sequel to see where and how things progressed!!!

2yr
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Ruchie_Mr

I've read a lot of werewolves story and so far it's the only one on this app that is good from start to finish. Dramatic and funny, surprised and character acting their age. Great job.

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2yr
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Gabriela_Ochoa_7987

Beautiful story rough start to have and lose everything and everyone you loved and then have to start all over with strangers.. true blessings when someone gives you a chance to feel loved. Miracles in of the moon goddess to bless them with twins

2yr
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Noly_Reuben

finally... the 1st book i finished read. well thanks for the short chapter but i really feel full with the development of the story n it didn't left me hanging although i know its still hanging..🤣🤣 n yes worth reading n spending some penny.. i hope 2nd volume will be here soon with more love story btwn ( x n v) n their twin.. smile all over my face after i finished this book. yay... happy ending.. tq author..❤️❤️

3yr
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Faith_Glover

Fellow readers I must tell you this is a amazing story with a even better story line and writer. Once you start too read it, it will draw you in and you will need to keep reading it until it is finished. Such a good book /story relay well done.

3yr
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Faith_Glover

Hello, Oh my dayssssss! Just stunningly amazing and so well written. I mean I have read a lot of these types of story's but this one just is mind blowing and so good!

3yr
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pocketpet

Overall, this was a good book. Unfortunately, there were a lot of words that were misspelled and phrases mixed up. Both of those things made it difficult to follow the world building and romance plot line.

6mth
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Tamarama

I really enjoyed the different characters and the inner dialogue. You get to feel the heart wrenching emotions throughout the story. Thank you for a wonderful adventure.

6mth
Ver 0 respuestas
novelline00

Book was okay but it is infuriating that the common response to their argument and conflict is running away and keeping secrets. It makes the plot and characters so juvenile.

9mth
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Jonna9799

The book had its ups and downs, and there was a part that I did not understand of why she was released, but I’m glad she was because it allowed the story to move forward I did enjoy their love and I really really loved the fact that she just did not like him at the beginning and made him work for it ,that was so cool. Enjoyed how it came together at the end. Kind of wish it was a little bit longer, but it is what it is. Thanks for that extra at the end

1yr
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Eleanor_Martin

great job loved it 😊😊👍👍 sent it to family

1yr
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Emmy_Arnold

It was an amazing book and not too lengty totally my cup of tea. I cant stop smilling while reading this book the way Victoria and Xaviar were witb eachother and how possesive Xaviar was about Victoria..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Denise_Fludd

I loved this story wished it was longer I wanted to know what they did with Katherine for living, as well as the twins and if Tori was able to finally reach out to Aurora about the death of Jacob. so many unanswered questions but overall good story

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Nabibam

This book was well written despite a lot of misspelled words and grammatical errors here and there. The story itself was sweet and engaging and I liked the fact that it didn’t drag on.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Patricia_Levy

This is the first book on WEBNOVEL I have ever finished. Which is saying something. Author, wonder story. You have given another version to the werewolf culture that I simply LOVE. I loved Tori and her feisty nature. I love that you kept her personality the same even to the end. I love Xavier and his need to protect her no matter what. I love the story behind everything that has happened to both of them. Truly, a wonderful story. I do reccomend going back and editing. You have a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Other than that, beautiful work.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Sharyl_Anderson_6556

A must read book!! This book has a different spin to werewolves and that's what keeps you hook. It doesn't have moments where you feel the author uses a lot of fillers to get their thoughts acrossed. Looking forward to reading more from this author. Enjoy!!

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Mma_Nnamani

what a hidden gem😳. this book is very intriguing, finished it under one night. the character development is amazing and i could feel their emotions with the beautiful description the author gave of the characters. wonderful story author 🙃

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Manuella_Romana

Till now I enjoyed every chapter of the story. hope that there will be an update soon. because I can't wait to continue reading this novel💞🥰👍👍

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
ElleFrost2303

This is such an amazing book! I couldn’t put it down. The writing is amazing - I felt every awakward, loving and even horrible moments of the characters. I dream to write as well as this book has been and do my own chaeacters justice.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Roxanne_Quezada

This is one of the better books on Webnovel without a doubt! Very well written and the fact that you can actually read the book without the annoying locked privelage chapters! A definite must read!

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
KristleYoung

A sassy & funny FL and a strong Alpha King. Of this I would have enjoyed it more on it explaining a bit more on ‘his side.’ His character seems to not be quite filled in and is solely her view. The scenery is fairly vague. Leaving details out and unanswered questions. None the less- the basics are strong enough and I still feel satisfied on the overall experience.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Tash_Schofield

A wonderful story ❤️ It seriously needs editing though. I would be honored to edit this story for you, and any others that you write. A little more background on some of the important characters , would be good, also.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Joan_Mitsou

Nice story. I would like some more details on the King though. The daily life of Luna and A, is not mentioned. The ending is very nice but short. I would like to see the celebration

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Heather_Ham

Story line was a good one. However, there were definitely a lot of grammatical errors. The lead female character takes a while to become a believable person. Her insecurities are definitely over the top

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Idhriel
LV 15 Badge

I read it when already concluded so I can’ t say anything about how was the update. It was a good story, well written although with a few grammar mistakes, nothing that a good proofreading wouldn’t solve. it was not enough to make me want to drop the book. I like the fact the story was not dragged over 400 chapters, which was actually the reason I decided to read one more werewolf story. But I had to point out a few things, like some people came up and desapeares without development or explanation of what was made of them. Overall, it was enjoyable, I do not regret spending a few coins in it. Congrats author, I hope to have the opportunity to read more from you.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Marilyn_Roman

this is a fascinating and different story with good twists. the only problem is an occasional misspelled word or wrong one. A very easy read

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Daoistp56IMS

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2yr
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Mlga0_put_7166

Enjoyed the character development and all the twists in the plot. have to admit was annoying at times, but by the next chapter (s) there were resolutions or plot changes.

2yr
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ReaderPrime

Excellent adventure! Definitely the best book I have read in a while. Smartly written with a story that is captivating and rewarding. Enjoyed the journey. Recommend this as a great book and now a new favorite author. Looking forward to reading more from this author. Thank you for the journey!!!

2yr
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Gosia_Lovett

Well developed story and characters. The lead characters are full of spirit and very likable. You will root for them to the the last sentence of this book.

2yr
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Cessasmom_09

I loved the story. I wish it didn't end so soon. I read it all in one sitting. I am so hoping for a sequel to see where and how things progressed!!!

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Ruchie_Mr

I've read a lot of werewolves story and so far it's the only one on this app that is good from start to finish. Dramatic and funny, surprised and character acting their age. Great job.

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2yr
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Gabriela_Ochoa_7987

Beautiful story rough start to have and lose everything and everyone you loved and then have to start all over with strangers.. true blessings when someone gives you a chance to feel loved. Miracles in of the moon goddess to bless them with twins

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Noly_Reuben

finally... the 1st book i finished read. well thanks for the short chapter but i really feel full with the development of the story n it didn't left me hanging although i know its still hanging..🤣🤣 n yes worth reading n spending some penny.. i hope 2nd volume will be here soon with more love story btwn ( x n v) n their twin.. smile all over my face after i finished this book. yay... happy ending.. tq author..❤️❤️

3yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Faith_Glover

Fellow readers I must tell you this is a amazing story with a even better story line and writer. Once you start too read it, it will draw you in and you will need to keep reading it until it is finished. Such a good book /story relay well done.

3yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Faith_Glover

Hello, Oh my dayssssss! Just stunningly amazing and so well written. I mean I have read a lot of these types of story's but this one just is mind blowing and so good!

3yr
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