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Very well-written! I quite like your prose, and how nicely emphasized the nuances of the characters. Your descriptions also helped create such a vivid scene, but there were a few comma splices/run-on sentences, so I suggest proofreading for grammar. As for the prologue, I had a bit of trouble following what was going on because of the lack of context. There were hints here and there, but I was still left a bit confused. All in all, it's a good read. Keep up the good work!
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
Magical, for sure would be the right definition for this story, well explained in the fights and dialogues, well described and with a rich world, and of course clearly amazing characters.
This is certainly an intriguing beginning to the story. At the moment there are only four chapters (one chapter appears to have been posted twice) and their are numerous characters being introduced, but I am very much looking forward to seeing how these various narrative threads all tie together. The chapters are all well-written and very enjoyable to read. I particularly liked the prologue as it threw the reader right into the thick of the action and provided a hook for the story that follows. The author has created a terrific fictional world with numerous fantastical elements and powers and so far he has done a great job developing the cast of characters. I'm not sure who the protagonist will be just yet, but I would be happy to follow an adventure with any one of the cast so far introduced. So far so good. I hope this story does well in the contest.
the fantasy vibes i get are hugggggeeeee. the author made sure to come with names that definitely make you feel like you're in another world.
What a excellent find, the transtitions, the premise, the battles, precise and crisp as clean as Levi in aot cleaning the castle... I recommend this novel to everyone, its neat! Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you!
I love this!💕 First, the book cover is so beautiful. It stands out. The synopsis is fun and interesting. The English is delightsome. The narrative is very explanatory, and the story is so interesting, it pulls you in! I love that the author is very knowledgeable about cultivation and Dao... etc. This is a book with great potential. Nice work, Author.
Very well-written! I quite like your prose, and how nicely emphasized the nuances of the characters. Your descriptions also helped create such a vivid scene, but there were a few comma splices/run-on sentences, so I suggest proofreading for grammar. As for the prologue, I had a bit of trouble following what was going on because of the lack of context. There were hints here and there, but I was still left a bit confused. All in all, it's a good read. Keep up the good work!
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance 🙏. The author will surely surprise you in many ways. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha 😂 Gracias!
Magical, for sure would be the right definition for this story, well explained in the fights and dialogues, well described and with a rich world, and of course clearly amazing characters.
This is certainly an intriguing beginning to the story. At the moment there are only four chapters (one chapter appears to have been posted twice) and their are numerous characters being introduced, but I am very much looking forward to seeing how these various narrative threads all tie together. The chapters are all well-written and very enjoyable to read. I particularly liked the prologue as it threw the reader right into the thick of the action and provided a hook for the story that follows. The author has created a terrific fictional world with numerous fantastical elements and powers and so far he has done a great job developing the cast of characters. I'm not sure who the protagonist will be just yet, but I would be happy to follow an adventure with any one of the cast so far introduced. So far so good. I hope this story does well in the contest.
the fantasy vibes i get are hugggggeeeee. the author made sure to come with names that definitely make you feel like you're in another world.
What a excellent find, the transtitions, the premise, the battles, precise and crisp as clean as Levi in aot cleaning the castle... I recommend this novel to everyone, its neat! Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you!
I love this!💕 First, the book cover is so beautiful. It stands out. The synopsis is fun and interesting. The English is delightsome. The narrative is very explanatory, and the story is so interesting, it pulls you in! I love that the author is very knowledgeable about cultivation and Dao... etc. This is a book with great potential. Nice work, Author.