My Demon Pet System

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Immanioripse

Author's notes: No heartbreaking or encouraging descriptions for this work. I'm confident that if you'll give it a try, it will satisfy you. I'll post 2 chapters/day, unless unexpected events and I'll give it my all everyday to write and edit chapters, making them enjoyable to read. Needless to say, I hope you guys will support my work through the WSA, voting for it and helping it climb the ranks. Constructive comments and reviews will always be appreciated. Have a talk with me via my social profiles (links at the end of the synopsis).

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FlorenceFe

I think this author is swinging for the fences! The quality of his novels is high, it is not the usual mainstream or poor quality thing that the books of this platform very often offer. We have to give importance and reward those who deserve it as Immanioripse and his wonderful books. It really has great potential. Keep goin on and don't stop believing please.

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Olamide_Oladipo_9256

This was one of the best books i have ever read and i hope the author keeps on doing stuff like this great writing, awesome storyline all in all incredible hreat job

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JakeRomeo

I read all the story so far and what I found is one of the most promising novel on the app. Our mc's system is not a cheat coming from who know which God but a true, hidden and mysterious system that works beneath the surface of things. The fact is, I really hope this goes high in ranks. As a reader and reviewer I'm sick to see the same stories always on top. need something fresh .. kudos!

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Itsuki_Suzuki

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

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FlorenceFe

every expectation is fulfilled. the author is amazing and deserves to rise high in contests ✨✨✨✨✨ let's vote for it and support it all! can't stop writing pleaseeee🖋

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Mr_Empty

Very detailed character and world development, Great storytelling and good plotline. I really look forward to the upcoming chapters. good luck to both the author and the book.

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Bunny_Junnie

I just loved it! Though your language is a bit harsh but I love the plot and the way you explained. Book cover is also very cool and I kinda like it. Great work author-kun! I appreciate it!

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Mel_Aniv

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 ADVICE None, the author was a better writer compared to me..... kudos!

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Cyclxne

Interesting system novel I've never really seen before. Unique concept, great characters (though not really my type of MC lol) and awesome writing quality. Keep it up, author!

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kuhaku_sora

I really like the book cover of the novel, and I have been seeing this book from time to time lately. Although I have yet to read all of the chapters, what I can say is it has potential. I really love these kinds of genre, and I cannot wait to read more of it!

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FallenAngeI

Read all available chapters and so far the novel is good, not amaizing but still good. I have few problems with the novel: 1. World Background (so far): 1.1 This is my personal opinion but there are only 2 nations (factions as author calls them). One is on our continent the other on the enemy continent and that's it. For me that's close to nothing. There is Bronzewood ( or something like that) where MC comes from, there is village/town/city i forgot the name of because it was included in like 2 chapters, and then there is Godhaven (capital). Not only is the whole continent a single country, but is seems that even that country is small. MC reached the capital in like 2 hours or so from his godforsaken farm. 2. Story Development (so far): 2.1 This is my personal opinion (again), for me the development is too slow. Maybe that's authors' idea and it might pick up speed in later chapters, but still for 36 chapters he found out very little and basic information about the world he is in and travevled to Godhaven (capital city). His first mission was to capture demon in 48 hours and there are still more than 20 hours left, meaning 36 chapters descirbe only 20-30 hours. 2.2 The other think for me is that battles are too basic, there is only 1 skill that demon can use (I know thats only for now but still...) and demons from same species alway have the same abilities. You (author) could have put Mutation where the demon/pet mutates and gains diffrent skills, there are other ideas but you get the point - more uniqueness. 3. Character Design (so far): 3.1 This is my personal opinion (AGAIN), the character is too rash on making decisions, especially about rescuing the princess. Did he fall for her already? I know he says something about not being a 'Coward', but in my opinon that's whole diffrent level of 'Bravery' bordering 'Stupidity' and 'Simping' . That's just the begining so he may evolve, but that;s what i saw up until now. That's pretty much it all my ranting. Its still good, but yea.. P.S. Good luck with the novel author.

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Ricardo2

I haven't actually read this, but given that this author has 2 other novels that he didn't bother to finish and didn't even warn his readers if he was just taking a break through the comment section or an additional chapter idk if it is safe to start reading this since he might just drop it out of nowhere without mentioning anything. Aside from that the synopsis looks interesting so I'll probably give it a try anyway. If the author keeps posting chapters without dropping this and the story is good I'll edit my review and score later.

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d_nmalory

Immersive and wholesome. Those are the two words they come into my mind while reading this book. Right from the beginning the author just builds up this amazing world that comes to life as you continue reading. I highly recommend this book to everyone

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_Rain

The plot is interesting and I especially liked the introduction. The writing style is superb with no grammar errors. Overall this is one of the books which would reach heights. Good work, Author!!

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Book_Pen

I was always into fantasy. It is a good plot with vivid description of the surroundings and even the emotions of the characters are well explained Well Written!!!!

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Up_The_Monster

The story idea is really good. Good back ground. the only thing i dont like is the super slow pace. Everything seems to drag for chapters. im all for building the story and world but I would rmhoy it way more if he bumped up the pace of the story

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Lamelle

I loved the cover and how the chapters are short. The story line is well defined and I really like the author's writing style. Overall I can say this is an incredible webnovel I have read so far. I am giving it a five star.

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Pendragon_DNT

I'll speak my honest opinion, the novel is very good and I've already added it to my collection, I'm a fan of the fantasy genre and I really like system tags. The world construction is very good and the plot is interesting, I hope the author stays firm with this novel.