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I can’t handle the seriously poor grammar! That plus the rapid plot presentation where from the start everything gets thrown before the reader in the manner of someone upending the contents of their bag on your bed🫤 It’s simply chaotic and feels like immature writing. A shame as the story synopsis sounded interesting.
This story has a new start and end with every sub story it involves, I loved how the author has explained in detail and thoroughly the meaning and details of new stuff like an examination course, health choice, or any jargon that was mentioned in the stories. It is a must read, I wish it had more chapters, although it is a big story yet human greed never ends. It is the best thing I have read in a while 😍😃
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author I am an Indian reader , and this is the first time i have read an Indian novel here. I am so thankful ...I could at last pronounce the names of character without feeling like what is written. and the food like pav bhaji is also my favorite .. Love ur novel...
I absolutely love the interactions between the fl and ml.(I might be biased because I love the concept of quick transmigration). Also I was wondering are the character’s Indian or Pakistani? cause they look south Asian.
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Tbh, the reviews were high so I had high expectations. The grammar is absolutely terrible, I’m not a stickler on things like this, let’s say after some time the grammar got bad I’d stick with it because I already like it, I mean I used to read Mtl. But it was trash from chapter one, couldn’t even get into it before getting smacked in the face with it, is it kinda readable? Yes. Am I willing to read it with such grammar from chap 1? No.
This is my first time reading indian novel. Tho got grammar mistakes but honestly its not really a problem as I believe everyone still get the point and its not bad like machine translated. I like how realistic it is honestly. I'm a bit dissatisfief of the ending cuz I actually wanted to know more but prolly just due to my curiousity. I know creating is hard so good job author! Hope you have a great day!
Gostei do henredo, muito bem escrito, não dá vontade de parar de ler, sempre quero saber o que vai acontecer em cada mundo que ela transmigra. [img=recommend]
I am going to leave a review for this story even though I am a few chapters in. 🥰 First of all, I read the synopsis and it was already captivating. I actually know the author and she has also beena great friend of mine as I have read some of her transmigration novels, too. 🥰 I actually saw her improvement. In a span of almost a year that I knew her, I could see the great job she has done in improving her grammar. 🤩 In the first chapter, I could see how well-thought her ideas are in the narration. Even though there are grammatical errors and misspelled words here and there, I could really attest that Amruta has improved herself a lot in her past novels! Furthermore, the synopsis and the few chapters alone made me feel for Reva. What ever could she have done to deserve such death and it made me wonder what could ever be the reason why she has given a second chance at life? I like the pouring out of feelings in the book and as I read, I could see Amruta has put herself in the shoes of her characters. 🤩 Do not hesitate to put this in your library. 🥰 With the fantasy concept of transmigration instilled, you can still relate to the woes of her characters. 💪 Regards to us in the Spirity, dii! 😘 I’m proud of you! 🤩
Oh my... As a contemporary Romance Author, I would totally recommend this novel for the readers... The synopsis attracted me the most and I already feel so bad for the FL... Hope she gets her love in her life. The story development is great while the writing background is good too... I am sure, this novel is going to be one intresting one. Dii, Good luck... And fighting!
One of the most amazing realistic fiction! Highly recommended! Although I have read only a few chapters of the story. It has already hooked my interest. Keep up the good work author.
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Just writing a few for my favourite author! Loved the start and the way author presented the plot and character of Reva. Will surely recommend it to to others as well!👍🏻❤
I have to say i do not read romance often if i ever. I was asked to read this for a friend and well i was hooked and definitely still is. Who knew i would get so much into a romance novel. Well keep it author, you got this!
Synopsis is very catchy. The plot looks extremely interesting, can't deny author has some potential. want moreee....[img=update][img=recommend]
Need to publish more chapters, the rest all look good. Keep up with the good work, author. Recommending this book to all readers, this one has an interesting plot. Need Moar!
One of the most amazing novel! Highly recommended! Although I have read only a few chapters of the story. It has already hooked my interest. Keep up the good work author.
Loved the book. Author did an excellent job in writing this. Waiting impatiently for more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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It's a good story. Overall, very sad and heart warming. Love how the mc is calm throughout her meeting with the system👍 Can't wait for the next update!💕
This is definitely my taste! I also like this kind of quick transmigration plot.. I also am satisfied with the Fl’s attitude and how she do things. i love the interaction between the ml and fl.. I am hooked! And want to keep reading it.. but the downside of it is there are lock chapters which i have keep storing passes to unlock it.. but anyways the plot, and the world background is great... there are some names that are confusing.. buts its okay..I LOVE ITTTTTT! i recommend everyone thisss! Im satisfied!
I can’t handle the seriously poor grammar! That plus the rapid plot presentation where from the start everything gets thrown before the reader in the manner of someone upending the contents of their bag on your bed🫤 It’s simply chaotic and feels like immature writing. A shame as the story synopsis sounded interesting.
This story has a new start and end with every sub story it involves, I loved how the author has explained in detail and thoroughly the meaning and details of new stuff like an examination course, health choice, or any jargon that was mentioned in the stories. It is a must read, I wish it had more chapters, although it is a big story yet human greed never ends. It is the best thing I have read in a while 😍😃
Revelar spoiler author I am an Indian reader , and this is the first time i have read an Indian novel here. I am so thankful ...I could at last pronounce the names of character without feeling like what is written. and the food like pav bhaji is also my favorite .. Love ur novel...
I absolutely love the interactions between the fl and ml.(I might be biased because I love the concept of quick transmigration). Also I was wondering are the character’s Indian or Pakistani? cause they look south Asian.
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Tbh, the reviews were high so I had high expectations. The grammar is absolutely terrible, I’m not a stickler on things like this, let’s say after some time the grammar got bad I’d stick with it because I already like it, I mean I used to read Mtl. But it was trash from chapter one, couldn’t even get into it before getting smacked in the face with it, is it kinda readable? Yes. Am I willing to read it with such grammar from chap 1? No.
This is my first time reading indian novel. Tho got grammar mistakes but honestly its not really a problem as I believe everyone still get the point and its not bad like machine translated. I like how realistic it is honestly. I'm a bit dissatisfief of the ending cuz I actually wanted to know more but prolly just due to my curiousity. I know creating is hard so good job author! Hope you have a great day!
Gostei do henredo, muito bem escrito, não dá vontade de parar de ler, sempre quero saber o que vai acontecer em cada mundo que ela transmigra. [img=recommend]
I am going to leave a review for this story even though I am a few chapters in. 🥰 First of all, I read the synopsis and it was already captivating. I actually know the author and she has also beena great friend of mine as I have read some of her transmigration novels, too. 🥰 I actually saw her improvement. In a span of almost a year that I knew her, I could see the great job she has done in improving her grammar. 🤩 In the first chapter, I could see how well-thought her ideas are in the narration. Even though there are grammatical errors and misspelled words here and there, I could really attest that Amruta has improved herself a lot in her past novels! Furthermore, the synopsis and the few chapters alone made me feel for Reva. What ever could she have done to deserve such death and it made me wonder what could ever be the reason why she has given a second chance at life? I like the pouring out of feelings in the book and as I read, I could see Amruta has put herself in the shoes of her characters. 🤩 Do not hesitate to put this in your library. 🥰 With the fantasy concept of transmigration instilled, you can still relate to the woes of her characters. 💪 Regards to us in the Spirity, dii! 😘 I’m proud of you! 🤩
Oh my... As a contemporary Romance Author, I would totally recommend this novel for the readers... The synopsis attracted me the most and I already feel so bad for the FL... Hope she gets her love in her life. The story development is great while the writing background is good too... I am sure, this novel is going to be one intresting one. Dii, Good luck... And fighting!
One of the most amazing realistic fiction! Highly recommended! Although I have read only a few chapters of the story. It has already hooked my interest. Keep up the good work author.
Revelar spoiler Just writing a few for my favourite author! Loved the start and the way author presented the plot and character of Reva. Will surely recommend it to to others as well!👍🏻❤
I have to say i do not read romance often if i ever. I was asked to read this for a friend and well i was hooked and definitely still is. Who knew i would get so much into a romance novel. Well keep it author, you got this!
Synopsis is very catchy. The plot looks extremely interesting, can't deny author has some potential. want moreee....[img=update][img=recommend]
Need to publish more chapters, the rest all look good. Keep up with the good work, author. Recommending this book to all readers, this one has an interesting plot. Need Moar!
One of the most amazing novel! Highly recommended! Although I have read only a few chapters of the story. It has already hooked my interest. Keep up the good work author.
Loved the book. Author did an excellent job in writing this. Waiting impatiently for more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Revelar spoiler It's a good story. Overall, very sad and heart warming. Love how the mc is calm throughout her meeting with the system👍 Can't wait for the next update!💕
This is definitely my taste! I also like this kind of quick transmigration plot.. I also am satisfied with the Fl’s attitude and how she do things. i love the interaction between the ml and fl.. I am hooked! And want to keep reading it.. but the downside of it is there are lock chapters which i have keep storing passes to unlock it.. but anyways the plot, and the world background is great... there are some names that are confusing.. buts its okay..I LOVE ITTTTTT! i recommend everyone thisss! Im satisfied!