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Adventurous and action scenes are something fascinates me the most and this is also the thing where I struggle the most while writing. However, the author has done a really great work here. Well designed characters, beautifully explained world background and a really cool writing style! what else we need? guys just go ahead and have a look. I love main character's cool attitude and her sense of humor. She is not like someone to cry over their misery, instead of crying she tends to adapt the new circumstances. Great work author 👍 My best wishes to you
I feel like I've read enough of this story to actually leave a detailed enough review, so attached is my not-so-initial opinion of this story. Writing Quality (5/5): I love how the author says that English is not her first author, but the writing is still very smooth to read and with little grammatical mistakes. I'm that type of reader to literally paragraph comment every little mistake I've observed, and honestly, I haven't had to do that here at all. There are variations in sentence patterns, showing and not telling, and really good descriptions that help me visualize the scene. Not to mention, I LOVE all the little extra scenes. They're literally soooo cute (and still help me understand the world/characters more). Stability of Updates (5/5) Story Development (5/5): It was honestly kind of surprising how there wasn't a single chapter that didn't have some form of action. It's what I expect of an adventure book but at the same time, one of the few books I found here that actually lives up to that expectation. Plus, at the same time, I don't really find it rushed, and everything happens at just the right pace. Character Design (5/5): Finally a "villainous" who doesn't try to somehow just become the FL of the story. Like bless, there's finally someone here with actually human reactions and logic??? Also, I really like the dynamics between Malaya and her family ^-^ The dialogue and the way they speak really give each of them some depth. World Background (5/5): It's definitely really clear that there was thought put into constructing this world. Special shoutout to all the magic levels. I read the glossary or the auxiliary chapters afterwards, and I was suddenly like omi this is geniusssss All in all a great read that lives up to it's name. There's no shady and forced romance, and Malaya really is the definition of rewriting your own future. I added the story to my library, and I think it's there to stay :D
You have a great story. The grammar is good, the storytelling format is innovative, the characters have cool names, I like the dialogue, and the world background is excellent. This is one of my favorite Webnovel stories, I'm going to try to keep up with it. I think I'd like a bit more description about what the characters look like, the environmental scene, and sometimes of underlying motivations. There are times where the description is top-notch. Feel free to check out my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey". Cheers
this novel is so goood i love it so much, the story is good and i enjoy the development and the characters so much especially malaya, el, kay, oli, pretty much all of it[img=recommend]
A great novel which excel in everything! The start is quite fast and shocking but in time we got what is going on. The writing quality is superb! I loved the descriptions provided that made reading it alive. Highly recommended and really looking forward to its deserved success.
How interesting story, transmigration to the place in novel which she read. I like this book and have added to my library. Keep writing, Author [img=update][img=update]
Hi. First i'll say it is a good novel: writing quality: I personally had no issues here. If there were some I didn't spot them and it didn't bother me. The writing was done well without too much repetition. stability updates: Seems like you are releasing it periodically so nothing to add here. story development: The story was well placed with the action being non-stop. I got a weird One piece vibe. Character development: The characters are believable, but I personally like some small personal differences that show repetition through the chapters. World background: I like the world background a lot and you obviously planned it in advance. I would though like to see a map of it if possible :) i'm such map nerd myself.
I am happy to know that I am a top Fan of this novel. I started reading this novel when the author released it’s first ten chapters. Then and there I won’t skip a day without checking and reading new updates of the book. Got hooked of the story. A break for mostly romance books that I ‘m following. Strong Lead... Magical .. Thanks Malaya! Proud to be a top fan. Thanks to the author. Happy Reading to all.
I've read 8 chapters so far and I'm in love already! I love Malaya (╥﹏╥) The world building is immerse and was explained thoroughly so far. The characters are really well crafted. The writing quality is good, everything is easy to read. I hope I can catch up with the recent chapters soon. Way to go author!~
Overall. Malaya is a cool kid with a big dream of becoming the world's greatest voyager for a villainess. Kind of reminds me of Naruto wanting to be the best Hokage then. This is a cool action filled adventure of a teenager wanting and needing to fulfill what she must do in her life. Writing Quality. You have great writing skills. Just very minor editing. Updating Stability. Very well updated. Story Development. Amazing story to fall back on with lots of action to see forward. Character Design. It's terribly cute to have an MC wearing her famous red hood. The characters were very well fleshed. World Background. So detailed my head spins reading all the details. Wow, you're amazing in coming up with all these infos. An amazing ride of fun filled adventure. Way to go, author!
Woah! I wasn't expecting such a thrilling book! The action scenes are so fun to read and the writing quality is absolutely amazing. The storyline is greatly written, plus, it's unique. Great job, author!!
The story has a lot of potential I really like reading this novel, as it gives the feeling suspense and the development of the other character is also good. The main character is pretty solid.. I hope that you give a the background story of the other characters.
The starting was nice and thrilling and recarnation and transmigration are one of my favorite theme, do I really liked this novel. The world description was clear and the characters as well as there feelings were nicely described. So overall it's a great story keep it up!!
Loving the story!! An absolutely amazing read...👍I really like the plot and everything else...!!! Such a wonderful world background... Recommending it sooo..🤩
I haven't read a great deal as of yet but from what I saw it's quite a fun read. The author has done her utmost to immerse the reader in the world that has been created. The characters are well thought out and intriguing. Therefore I look forward to the developments to come 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
This story has such a unique concept and I'm always all in for new things😄 I really love how the author designed the features of the FL. I think she did a really great job in balancing her character. The story is interesting and I have never read something like this! I look forward to the romance and wish the author a good luck😉
First I love the idea of Malaya.. Travel around the world. I felt this story is differnet from others and it is good. The writing and scenes which you are trying to show are nice. I hope there will be a lot more to discover in her journey and I wish you all the best. keep rocking auth💜🔥
So English is that our dearest author first language but but there little to no grammatical errors... The chapters flow smoothly and is entertaining something I rarely see..
A great and worthwhile read! I added this to my library and hopes for more. I am no professional writer myself but in comparison to those books written by known authors, I can say this one is almost on the same level as those. The construction of words for narration and dialogues are very creative, making them easy to comprehend and entertaining to read at the same time. Action scenes were executed well through writing too. The world background was built and explained thoroughly, I see no flaw with that so far. I am loving the MC as much as I love her story, her attitude and everything. After all the encounters she had on her new life, her ultimate dream still stands firm on her heart. This novel is great, all about it is, I am looking forward to the progress and development of the plot. Keep it up!
Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based from what I read so far, World Building: I do really like the concept of worldbuilding in this novel. It give a sense of Sci-Fi or futuristic with a mix of an alien race to make it more exciting to read. The lore in this story is also explained quite well. However, I suggest to give detailed, vivid imagery, and even the showing to make the worldbuilding more fun to read. Character: To be honest, I do really like the character so far especially on their appearance or personality. They are all distinct especially with the main character and I do believe the author will give the side character development since from the early chapter, you show Vivian which is the side character who her own chapter before she escaped with the help of the main characters. I also like how the author describes the character appearances especially on their eyes appearance or even the general one. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I do believe it have a good potential. Keep up the good work!!
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Just added to my library! Sometimes the words can be confusing but its only the beginning, its already interesting. I love the fact that villainess is friends with the FL though
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woah i can't explain it, it's really different from the other stories that i've read, it's really great, i might recommend this to my friends. i'll keep waiting for the next chaps.
Extensive fantasy world - check. Deep and realistic characters - check. Intense, fast-paced action with occasional, perfect comedy - check. Yeah, there really isn't much to complain about. A few grammatical errors here and there but that's because the author's first language isn't English, so it's understandable. Besides, it doesn't affect the story's quality in any way. Seriously, give this a try.
An absolute banger in this genre ,gives nice character interactions at the same time having an adventurous and free spirited vibe. Keep it up and best of luck
It is not every day you read this kind of novel, the plot is really unique. Interesting plot, engaging dialogues and deep characters from the few chapters I have read. I can't wait to dig in. Nice one.
The descriptive words is enough to be hooked. On the first few chapters, the author put a glossary so the readers won't be confused. The glossary and its system tier is great. especially the terminologies.
The writing style is well made. Overall, this book has high potential given the unusual set up as a villanness for the MC. If this book can commit to a consistency of update, then it will surely make big. Added it to Library. Good luck!
Overall : it was a good hidden gem read! The synopsis was intriguing enough to pull me to read the story even the cover and the title too! Writing quality : it was good and there was nearly no mistakes at all~! The writing style was great and words used are awesome to make the story even more captivating! Updating : it is stable and on track with the updates! I do hope for more~ Characters : the characters seemed interesting, i loved the conversations and dialogues between the characters of the story! World background : There was a very detailed introduction about it at the start with all the names and other magical things for the readers to know. It was excellent! My thought : this story definitely is one of a kind! It has the potential to soar even higher with its good story contents!! I really love the story and hope to see more of it, good work author and keep it up! ✨
I'll began with the author writing quality. I can say that it's good, there were sentences that I found a bit hard to understand, which I think can be fix by just rewording the sentences. Transition is good. As for grammar issues, I'm not really good either *cry cry, but I think that there were a few words that can be replace with a different word, I mean words that have the same definition, but just a different way of saying it. In regard to character design and story development, I'll think that the author did a great job on describing the characters. Especially, the villain, ahem, kind of make me think of those hot anime guy, hehe. Refocusing back to what I say about the describing the characters, yes, the author was good at trying to make her mysterious by wearing a hood. Makes me wonder how beautiful she is. As for her companion, it's a love and hate thing. I don't why, but I can't stand Dorris. Somehow, I imagine her as an annoying little girl. Author, why did you make me think of my little sister? Lol.....Moving on to the story background, the author has provide a glossary of her story world! Excellent! It may be a bit inconvenience to go back and forth when reading a part in the story that made you confuse where you have to go back and search for the meaning behind it, but hey, I'm not complaining. And finally, for story development and updates, the author did say in the synopsis that new chapters depend on the length of each arc. Which is good for eager reader to understand that they need to wait patiently. And last but not least, the story development. From the beginning to the latest chapter, the main action, or dream of the main character haven't happen yet, to be the best voyager! It look like the author is still building up to the point the main character sets on her journey. So as a last parting words of encouragement I wish the best for Malaya and the author herself. Great job, and keep up the great work!
I have added this book to my library! The story has just started and I have already enjoyed the great start. I have find this story .... somehow different to the usual stories I have been reading in webnovel. Card tricks of magician, space voyager, space warrior, migration.... ???? Hmmmm... I am curious to know.... It’s just starting but I feel that I will enjoy my reading as the story progress. I remember when I started reading Webnovel wayback 2018... you can easily identify which story will give you the reading satisfaction you crave for..... but now with the rising of different authors... different plots, varied settings.... Whoaaa , there are so many choices.... Surprisingly, this story is somewhat different. Congrats to the author and I know you can give me more of what I expected and will enjoy it till the end. Have a happy Reading.❤️❤️🙏❤️
Adventurous and action scenes are something fascinates me the most and this is also the thing where I struggle the most while writing. However, the author has done a really great work here. Well designed characters, beautifully explained world background and a really cool writing style! what else we need? guys just go ahead and have a look. I love main character's cool attitude and her sense of humor. She is not like someone to cry over their misery, instead of crying she tends to adapt the new circumstances. Great work author 👍 My best wishes to you
I feel like I've read enough of this story to actually leave a detailed enough review, so attached is my not-so-initial opinion of this story. Writing Quality (5/5): I love how the author says that English is not her first author, but the writing is still very smooth to read and with little grammatical mistakes. I'm that type of reader to literally paragraph comment every little mistake I've observed, and honestly, I haven't had to do that here at all. There are variations in sentence patterns, showing and not telling, and really good descriptions that help me visualize the scene. Not to mention, I LOVE all the little extra scenes. They're literally soooo cute (and still help me understand the world/characters more). Stability of Updates (5/5) Story Development (5/5): It was honestly kind of surprising how there wasn't a single chapter that didn't have some form of action. It's what I expect of an adventure book but at the same time, one of the few books I found here that actually lives up to that expectation. Plus, at the same time, I don't really find it rushed, and everything happens at just the right pace. Character Design (5/5): Finally a "villainous" who doesn't try to somehow just become the FL of the story. Like bless, there's finally someone here with actually human reactions and logic??? Also, I really like the dynamics between Malaya and her family ^-^ The dialogue and the way they speak really give each of them some depth. World Background (5/5): It's definitely really clear that there was thought put into constructing this world. Special shoutout to all the magic levels. I read the glossary or the auxiliary chapters afterwards, and I was suddenly like omi this is geniusssss All in all a great read that lives up to it's name. There's no shady and forced romance, and Malaya really is the definition of rewriting your own future. I added the story to my library, and I think it's there to stay :D
You have a great story. The grammar is good, the storytelling format is innovative, the characters have cool names, I like the dialogue, and the world background is excellent. This is one of my favorite Webnovel stories, I'm going to try to keep up with it. I think I'd like a bit more description about what the characters look like, the environmental scene, and sometimes of underlying motivations. There are times where the description is top-notch. Feel free to check out my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey". Cheers
this novel is so goood i love it so much, the story is good and i enjoy the development and the characters so much especially malaya, el, kay, oli, pretty much all of it[img=recommend]
A great novel which excel in everything! The start is quite fast and shocking but in time we got what is going on. The writing quality is superb! I loved the descriptions provided that made reading it alive. Highly recommended and really looking forward to its deserved success.
How interesting story, transmigration to the place in novel which she read. I like this book and have added to my library. Keep writing, Author [img=update][img=update]
Hi. First i'll say it is a good novel: writing quality: I personally had no issues here. If there were some I didn't spot them and it didn't bother me. The writing was done well without too much repetition. stability updates: Seems like you are releasing it periodically so nothing to add here. story development: The story was well placed with the action being non-stop. I got a weird One piece vibe. Character development: The characters are believable, but I personally like some small personal differences that show repetition through the chapters. World background: I like the world background a lot and you obviously planned it in advance. I would though like to see a map of it if possible :) i'm such map nerd myself.
I am happy to know that I am a top Fan of this novel. I started reading this novel when the author released it’s first ten chapters. Then and there I won’t skip a day without checking and reading new updates of the book. Got hooked of the story. A break for mostly romance books that I ‘m following. Strong Lead... Magical .. Thanks Malaya! Proud to be a top fan. Thanks to the author. Happy Reading to all.
I've read 8 chapters so far and I'm in love already! I love Malaya (╥﹏╥) The world building is immerse and was explained thoroughly so far. The characters are really well crafted. The writing quality is good, everything is easy to read. I hope I can catch up with the recent chapters soon. Way to go author!~
Overall. Malaya is a cool kid with a big dream of becoming the world's greatest voyager for a villainess. Kind of reminds me of Naruto wanting to be the best Hokage then. This is a cool action filled adventure of a teenager wanting and needing to fulfill what she must do in her life. Writing Quality. You have great writing skills. Just very minor editing. Updating Stability. Very well updated. Story Development. Amazing story to fall back on with lots of action to see forward. Character Design. It's terribly cute to have an MC wearing her famous red hood. The characters were very well fleshed. World Background. So detailed my head spins reading all the details. Wow, you're amazing in coming up with all these infos. An amazing ride of fun filled adventure. Way to go, author!
Woah! I wasn't expecting such a thrilling book! The action scenes are so fun to read and the writing quality is absolutely amazing. The storyline is greatly written, plus, it's unique. Great job, author!!
The story has a lot of potential I really like reading this novel, as it gives the feeling suspense and the development of the other character is also good. The main character is pretty solid.. I hope that you give a the background story of the other characters.
The starting was nice and thrilling and recarnation and transmigration are one of my favorite theme, do I really liked this novel. The world description was clear and the characters as well as there feelings were nicely described. So overall it's a great story keep it up!!
Loving the story!! An absolutely amazing read...👍I really like the plot and everything else...!!! Such a wonderful world background... Recommending it sooo..🤩
I haven't read a great deal as of yet but from what I saw it's quite a fun read. The author has done her utmost to immerse the reader in the world that has been created. The characters are well thought out and intriguing. Therefore I look forward to the developments to come 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
This story has such a unique concept and I'm always all in for new things😄 I really love how the author designed the features of the FL. I think she did a really great job in balancing her character. The story is interesting and I have never read something like this! I look forward to the romance and wish the author a good luck😉
First I love the idea of Malaya.. Travel around the world. I felt this story is differnet from others and it is good. The writing and scenes which you are trying to show are nice. I hope there will be a lot more to discover in her journey and I wish you all the best. keep rocking auth💜🔥
So English is that our dearest author first language but but there little to no grammatical errors... The chapters flow smoothly and is entertaining something I rarely see..
A great and worthwhile read! I added this to my library and hopes for more. I am no professional writer myself but in comparison to those books written by known authors, I can say this one is almost on the same level as those. The construction of words for narration and dialogues are very creative, making them easy to comprehend and entertaining to read at the same time. Action scenes were executed well through writing too. The world background was built and explained thoroughly, I see no flaw with that so far. I am loving the MC as much as I love her story, her attitude and everything. After all the encounters she had on her new life, her ultimate dream still stands firm on her heart. This novel is great, all about it is, I am looking forward to the progress and development of the plot. Keep it up!
Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based from what I read so far, World Building: I do really like the concept of worldbuilding in this novel. It give a sense of Sci-Fi or futuristic with a mix of an alien race to make it more exciting to read. The lore in this story is also explained quite well. However, I suggest to give detailed, vivid imagery, and even the showing to make the worldbuilding more fun to read. Character: To be honest, I do really like the character so far especially on their appearance or personality. They are all distinct especially with the main character and I do believe the author will give the side character development since from the early chapter, you show Vivian which is the side character who her own chapter before she escaped with the help of the main characters. I also like how the author describes the character appearances especially on their eyes appearance or even the general one. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I do believe it have a good potential. Keep up the good work!!
Revelar spoiler Just added to my library! Sometimes the words can be confusing but its only the beginning, its already interesting. I love the fact that villainess is friends with the FL though
Revelar spoiler woah i can't explain it, it's really different from the other stories that i've read, it's really great, i might recommend this to my friends. i'll keep waiting for the next chaps.
Extensive fantasy world - check. Deep and realistic characters - check. Intense, fast-paced action with occasional, perfect comedy - check. Yeah, there really isn't much to complain about. A few grammatical errors here and there but that's because the author's first language isn't English, so it's understandable. Besides, it doesn't affect the story's quality in any way. Seriously, give this a try.
An absolute banger in this genre ,gives nice character interactions at the same time having an adventurous and free spirited vibe. Keep it up and best of luck
It is not every day you read this kind of novel, the plot is really unique. Interesting plot, engaging dialogues and deep characters from the few chapters I have read. I can't wait to dig in. Nice one.
The descriptive words is enough to be hooked. On the first few chapters, the author put a glossary so the readers won't be confused. The glossary and its system tier is great. especially the terminologies.
The writing style is well made. Overall, this book has high potential given the unusual set up as a villanness for the MC. If this book can commit to a consistency of update, then it will surely make big. Added it to Library. Good luck!
Overall : it was a good hidden gem read! The synopsis was intriguing enough to pull me to read the story even the cover and the title too! Writing quality : it was good and there was nearly no mistakes at all~! The writing style was great and words used are awesome to make the story even more captivating! Updating : it is stable and on track with the updates! I do hope for more~ Characters : the characters seemed interesting, i loved the conversations and dialogues between the characters of the story! World background : There was a very detailed introduction about it at the start with all the names and other magical things for the readers to know. It was excellent! My thought : this story definitely is one of a kind! It has the potential to soar even higher with its good story contents!! I really love the story and hope to see more of it, good work author and keep it up! ✨
I'll began with the author writing quality. I can say that it's good, there were sentences that I found a bit hard to understand, which I think can be fix by just rewording the sentences. Transition is good. As for grammar issues, I'm not really good either *cry cry, but I think that there were a few words that can be replace with a different word, I mean words that have the same definition, but just a different way of saying it. In regard to character design and story development, I'll think that the author did a great job on describing the characters. Especially, the villain, ahem, kind of make me think of those hot anime guy, hehe. Refocusing back to what I say about the describing the characters, yes, the author was good at trying to make her mysterious by wearing a hood. Makes me wonder how beautiful she is. As for her companion, it's a love and hate thing. I don't why, but I can't stand Dorris. Somehow, I imagine her as an annoying little girl. Author, why did you make me think of my little sister? Lol.....Moving on to the story background, the author has provide a glossary of her story world! Excellent! It may be a bit inconvenience to go back and forth when reading a part in the story that made you confuse where you have to go back and search for the meaning behind it, but hey, I'm not complaining. And finally, for story development and updates, the author did say in the synopsis that new chapters depend on the length of each arc. Which is good for eager reader to understand that they need to wait patiently. And last but not least, the story development. From the beginning to the latest chapter, the main action, or dream of the main character haven't happen yet, to be the best voyager! It look like the author is still building up to the point the main character sets on her journey. So as a last parting words of encouragement I wish the best for Malaya and the author herself. Great job, and keep up the great work!
I have added this book to my library! The story has just started and I have already enjoyed the great start. I have find this story .... somehow different to the usual stories I have been reading in webnovel. Card tricks of magician, space voyager, space warrior, migration.... ???? Hmmmm... I am curious to know.... It’s just starting but I feel that I will enjoy my reading as the story progress. I remember when I started reading Webnovel wayback 2018... you can easily identify which story will give you the reading satisfaction you crave for..... but now with the rising of different authors... different plots, varied settings.... Whoaaa , there are so many choices.... Surprisingly, this story is somewhat different. Congrats to the author and I know you can give me more of what I expected and will enjoy it till the end. Have a happy Reading.❤️❤️🙏❤️