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I love that the MC wants natural growth and self hard work. The world was vast & mysterious. There's so much going on and had various factors for the plot but its not jumbled and the story flow so well. I cant stop reading.
i realy like it. it combines the edgy calculative edgy mc but him actually being a good guy not some selfish mc who would do whatever he wants and kill whoever he wants and only saves those that are usefull and woudint bother saving a guy who wouldint be usefull to him.
by far the best assassin/rogue story I have ever read. the mc actually stays true to what he is good at and doesn't start doing something new because "I'm already a god at this, so let me fight life and death with something I suck at" or something like that. additionally all of the characters are very fleshed out and actually feel like people. the world is built beautifully and continuing to expand. but not so fast that it feels rushed.
Hey, I am fan of your writing and would like to talk to you, do let me know if we can connect on fb or email THe story development is outstanding
❤❤❤❤❤ it's a wonderful story [img=update][img=update]. I can say for sure that the author is puttin alot of effort to create such a wonderful story
Pros: The quality of the writing is superb. Characters are relatively well thought out and have personality World is pretty good, couple things are a bit strange but that may be due to a slow build up. Cons: Story is all over the place, a lot of missing information that would make some parts easier to keep together. The Update Stability is what makes this book hard to stay excited for; 2 chapters a week isn’t uncommon for amateur writers. One problem is the chapters are a little short. But the BIGGEST issue is the cost of reading, specifically the Privilege Access. 700+ coins for 9 chapters is not a fair price. Privilege lasts a month, approximately 8 chapters a month for 700+ coins is not worth the money readers will have to pay. I am able to pay that amount, (and I DO, I honestly enjoy this novel) but for an average reader I would not recommend doing so.
This book is a Master peice and its sad seeing such a gem not have a higher ranking Each chapter makes you want to read the next and becomes an addiction. Amazing author. The Only things that could be better is more chapters but i would rather have less chapters and higher quality.
I enjoyed, can you upload at least 3 chapters per week? so tired waiting 2 Chapters per week or 1 chapter per week. at least give time to this novel before the other novel.
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Alright, this novel has one of my least favorite tropes. Nice-guy assassin. Those two tropes just don't work well together. First off, the main character. The best assassin from a fantasy world, can even kill Kings and Queens. Is almost caught on his very first job. He is supposedly a assassin but in reality hes just a vigilante. Side characters. Another review basically talks about this perfectly. All the characters are template characters. Cop who relies on intuition, girl whos a battle maniac, cute little sister, grumpy older brother, super-genius kid who can hack into anything. Plot & writing quality. First off, this novel definitely has a amateurish tinge to it, but seems somewhat refined. The plot, however, seems super forced and is rather boring. Gang members beat up the main character's brother, he beats them up. They come back, with more, because? (This is a world with martial artists, why are these guys so keen on killing themselves) Anyway, he beats them up, takes pity on them, once again because? He decides to kill all the gangs nearby because of some pity story the guy told him. Later, when a cop invited him to dinner a young master decided to beat him up. He beat them up instead, and now decided to destroy his entire company and family. Good ol' vigilantism. It just seems rather forced, especially that young master part. (Again, there are literally martial artists in this world, the young master doesn't have a single martial artist) Anyway, another gripe I have with this novel is "intuition". God it's annoying. A lot of novels go with this really forced way of advancing the plot. A random copy intuitively knows that the main character somehow committed the crime of killing gang members, so she invites him to dinner. A random battle-junky intuitively knows that the MC is the one who fought her before. (he was completely covered in black, no resemblance) Overall, a amateurish novel that is rather low quality in general.
I love this novel I've read everything besides the premium chapters so far and it's probly one of my all time favorites but chapters haven't been posted so I just want to say that I hope mr. author is doing well and having a nice break
While I do enjoy the novel and I am currently keeping up to date on the chapters, most of the chapters contain very little progression in the story or character development. When they do focus on those subjects it is done very well. The upload times can very, and life brings unexpected interferences so I can never negatively judge on that.
really nice novel, even though it doesn't have many chapters. i absolutly love the main character like he isn't extremly cold hearted but also not like "omg i need to impress every girl so i can build my own harem"
i absolutly love this book, i have read many books but this is definitely one of my most favourite ones, but the updating dates are so long (ik not long but like I WANT TO READ MORE!) :)
read till chapter 38. the MC character is not to my liking, the idea is amazing but I didn't like how the novel progressed. .
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really GOOD stuff, It would be more interesting if you show us more of his own selfish side of mc instead of his sister drama. and Please, it would be great to update the novel faster.
Fantastic story about assasian Fade, who died due his negligence and becoming the librarian Loki. Loki had an accident, when his sibling discovered his situation. Fade as main protagonist is deadly charismatic, strong and has his own principles. Although he finds himself in modern world, new enemies and rivals dont let him relax at all. Waiting for new chapters
very creative book the storyline flows really well and will always keep you entertained the assassin fade is smart and cunning but still a good guy despite the type of work he does definitely worth the read.
hello author, I'm excited to read the next chapter. I'm somewhat new, and this is the first novel the I read overnight and was amazed by the plot and the story. I wonder if I can get a reply XD. Thank you. although I don't comment much, this is the first time I commented long. looking forward to your work.
Great story very enjoyable My only complaint is there is barely anything here at all The update schedule is abysmal at best nonexistent at worst I will continue reading and waiting because i think its worth it but if you want to binge read a good story this is not the one for you
This is one of the best novels I have ever read, I only want more, it leaves you wanting more, fade is legendary and I should know because I'm a legend he really blew my mind the story should have enough readers to be number one, FADE ALL THE WAY .
despite my 3.6 score, I really quite enjoy this novel. What I have a problem with is the illogical nature of the new world he's in. Martial artists / rich people act just as unbridled as they would in a medieval setting despite being in a modern setting, quite openly either threatening or killing/kidnapping people. A martial artist with the tiniest of strength is feared as if calling the police wouldn't work perfectly fine.
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Dropped after around 30 chapters. It's just like, everything about this is so generic, every single character just has a template personality. literally Sadistic fighter, Tough cop, Grumpy teenager, and cute little sister. He can't kill anyone if it's not for money cause then he won't be the ideal assassin his little sister wanted him to be which is just beyond me. It's so stupid and he's not even an assassin anymore as in he's not a pro, he has no 'customers' and it honestly feels like something that's purely meant to increase the word count. MC hardly bothers hiding his abilities, numerous people already know his identity and capabilities and even his gym trainer knows something is weird with him. The cultivation system is nonexistent, there is mana, inner energy, and spells. For some unknown reason, he feels that he should learn how to harness that inner energy although it's apparently less pure than the mana he already uses. TL: DR - Cringe lines, non-existent combat system. Wouldn't recommend it to anyone interested in anything beyond a children's show level of plot.
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I am unbelievably sad that i didn’t see that it had only 49 chapters so far, if i had know i would have waited for it to finish so i dont have to sait to read it! This book is amazing and I hope it can get more chapters soon!
It's a great novel for some people who prefer reading a novel with side-character getting OP like gaining a system, leveling up and gaining access through akashic records. While the mc is weak and easily discovered like the mc rejects the system and gives it to a stranger he just met a day ago like come on. You supposed to be the mc but refuse the cheats.
Revelar spoiler I love that the MC wants natural growth and self hard work. The world was vast & mysterious. There's so much going on and had various factors for the plot but its not jumbled and the story flow so well. I cant stop reading.
i realy like it. it combines the edgy calculative edgy mc but him actually being a good guy not some selfish mc who would do whatever he wants and kill whoever he wants and only saves those that are usefull and woudint bother saving a guy who wouldint be usefull to him.
by far the best assassin/rogue story I have ever read. the mc actually stays true to what he is good at and doesn't start doing something new because "I'm already a god at this, so let me fight life and death with something I suck at" or something like that. additionally all of the characters are very fleshed out and actually feel like people. the world is built beautifully and continuing to expand. but not so fast that it feels rushed.
Hey, I am fan of your writing and would like to talk to you, do let me know if we can connect on fb or email THe story development is outstanding
❤❤❤❤❤ it's a wonderful story [img=update][img=update]. I can say for sure that the author is puttin alot of effort to create such a wonderful story
Pros: The quality of the writing is superb. Characters are relatively well thought out and have personality World is pretty good, couple things are a bit strange but that may be due to a slow build up. Cons: Story is all over the place, a lot of missing information that would make some parts easier to keep together. The Update Stability is what makes this book hard to stay excited for; 2 chapters a week isn’t uncommon for amateur writers. One problem is the chapters are a little short. But the BIGGEST issue is the cost of reading, specifically the Privilege Access. 700+ coins for 9 chapters is not a fair price. Privilege lasts a month, approximately 8 chapters a month for 700+ coins is not worth the money readers will have to pay. I am able to pay that amount, (and I DO, I honestly enjoy this novel) but for an average reader I would not recommend doing so.
This book is a Master peice and its sad seeing such a gem not have a higher ranking Each chapter makes you want to read the next and becomes an addiction. Amazing author. The Only things that could be better is more chapters but i would rather have less chapters and higher quality.
I enjoyed, can you upload at least 3 chapters per week? so tired waiting 2 Chapters per week or 1 chapter per week. at least give time to this novel before the other novel.
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Alright, this novel has one of my least favorite tropes. Nice-guy assassin. Those two tropes just don't work well together. First off, the main character. The best assassin from a fantasy world, can even kill Kings and Queens. Is almost caught on his very first job. He is supposedly a assassin but in reality hes just a vigilante. Side characters. Another review basically talks about this perfectly. All the characters are template characters. Cop who relies on intuition, girl whos a battle maniac, cute little sister, grumpy older brother, super-genius kid who can hack into anything. Plot & writing quality. First off, this novel definitely has a amateurish tinge to it, but seems somewhat refined. The plot, however, seems super forced and is rather boring. Gang members beat up the main character's brother, he beats them up. They come back, with more, because? (This is a world with martial artists, why are these guys so keen on killing themselves) Anyway, he beats them up, takes pity on them, once again because? He decides to kill all the gangs nearby because of some pity story the guy told him. Later, when a cop invited him to dinner a young master decided to beat him up. He beat them up instead, and now decided to destroy his entire company and family. Good ol' vigilantism. It just seems rather forced, especially that young master part. (Again, there are literally martial artists in this world, the young master doesn't have a single martial artist) Anyway, another gripe I have with this novel is "intuition". God it's annoying. A lot of novels go with this really forced way of advancing the plot. A random copy intuitively knows that the main character somehow committed the crime of killing gang members, so she invites him to dinner. A random battle-junky intuitively knows that the MC is the one who fought her before. (he was completely covered in black, no resemblance) Overall, a amateurish novel that is rather low quality in general.
I love this novel I've read everything besides the premium chapters so far and it's probly one of my all time favorites but chapters haven't been posted so I just want to say that I hope mr. author is doing well and having a nice break
While I do enjoy the novel and I am currently keeping up to date on the chapters, most of the chapters contain very little progression in the story or character development. When they do focus on those subjects it is done very well. The upload times can very, and life brings unexpected interferences so I can never negatively judge on that.
really nice novel, even though it doesn't have many chapters. i absolutly love the main character like he isn't extremly cold hearted but also not like "omg i need to impress every girl so i can build my own harem"
i absolutly love this book, i have read many books but this is definitely one of my most favourite ones, but the updating dates are so long (ik not long but like I WANT TO READ MORE!) :)
read till chapter 38. the MC character is not to my liking, the idea is amazing but I didn't like how the novel progressed. .
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really GOOD stuff, It would be more interesting if you show us more of his own selfish side of mc instead of his sister drama. and Please, it would be great to update the novel faster.
Fantastic story about assasian Fade, who died due his negligence and becoming the librarian Loki. Loki had an accident, when his sibling discovered his situation. Fade as main protagonist is deadly charismatic, strong and has his own principles. Although he finds himself in modern world, new enemies and rivals dont let him relax at all. Waiting for new chapters
very creative book the storyline flows really well and will always keep you entertained the assassin fade is smart and cunning but still a good guy despite the type of work he does definitely worth the read.
hello author, I'm excited to read the next chapter. I'm somewhat new, and this is the first novel the I read overnight and was amazed by the plot and the story. I wonder if I can get a reply XD. Thank you. although I don't comment much, this is the first time I commented long. looking forward to your work.
Great story very enjoyable My only complaint is there is barely anything here at all The update schedule is abysmal at best nonexistent at worst I will continue reading and waiting because i think its worth it but if you want to binge read a good story this is not the one for you
This is one of the best novels I have ever read, I only want more, it leaves you wanting more, fade is legendary and I should know because I'm a legend he really blew my mind the story should have enough readers to be number one, FADE ALL THE WAY .
despite my 3.6 score, I really quite enjoy this novel. What I have a problem with is the illogical nature of the new world he's in. Martial artists / rich people act just as unbridled as they would in a medieval setting despite being in a modern setting, quite openly either threatening or killing/kidnapping people. A martial artist with the tiniest of strength is feared as if calling the police wouldn't work perfectly fine.
More More More MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Dropped after around 30 chapters. It's just like, everything about this is so generic, every single character just has a template personality. literally Sadistic fighter, Tough cop, Grumpy teenager, and cute little sister. He can't kill anyone if it's not for money cause then he won't be the ideal assassin his little sister wanted him to be which is just beyond me. It's so stupid and he's not even an assassin anymore as in he's not a pro, he has no 'customers' and it honestly feels like something that's purely meant to increase the word count. MC hardly bothers hiding his abilities, numerous people already know his identity and capabilities and even his gym trainer knows something is weird with him. The cultivation system is nonexistent, there is mana, inner energy, and spells. For some unknown reason, he feels that he should learn how to harness that inner energy although it's apparently less pure than the mana he already uses. TL: DR - Cringe lines, non-existent combat system. Wouldn't recommend it to anyone interested in anything beyond a children's show level of plot.
Revelar spoiler I am unbelievably sad that i didn’t see that it had only 49 chapters so far, if i had know i would have waited for it to finish so i dont have to sait to read it! This book is amazing and I hope it can get more chapters soon!
It's a great novel for some people who prefer reading a novel with side-character getting OP like gaining a system, leveling up and gaining access through akashic records. While the mc is weak and easily discovered like the mc rejects the system and gives it to a stranger he just met a day ago like come on. You supposed to be the mc but refuse the cheats.