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Escribe una reseñaI love this story, however, the updates r rlly slow. TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT
Interesting I am not sure what to comment besides interesting. And my review should not be less than 140 characters which I am not there yet
Oh yes daddy, pump me full with those chappies!! Yes!! Yes!!! We are melting away! Harder do it and don't stop!!! Arghhh, has gosh! You Bad Daddy!!!
it really pulled me in so far. I also gave it a chance because I like the authors other work about Bloodlines. This one has real potential as well.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'll wait for 200 chaps. Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore
Okay it seems I will be the author's first. Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake. Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen. Good job dear... Author!:)
A very great start to a very interesting story I hope you continue this story it has very great potential for becoming a grate series cant wait for the next chapter.
I love this story, however, the updates r rlly slow. TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT TT-TT
Interesting I am not sure what to comment besides interesting. And my review should not be less than 140 characters which I am not there yet
Oh yes daddy, pump me full with those chappies!! Yes!! Yes!!! We are melting away! Harder do it and don't stop!!! Arghhh, has gosh! You Bad Daddy!!!
it really pulled me in so far. I also gave it a chance because I like the authors other work about Bloodlines. This one has real potential as well.
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'll wait for 200 chaps. Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore
Okay it seems I will be the author's first. Let's see. The story goes off interestingly, maybe the author could make the flow go smoother int he beginning of the first chap, but out of that I didn't see any mistake. Grammar great, plot amazing, world build is still waited. Now we only need to wait what will happen. Good job dear... Author!:)
A very great start to a very interesting story I hope you continue this story it has very great potential for becoming a grate series cant wait for the next chapter.