The Plot is pretty decent and the world seems interesting, the development of the characters is pretty decent too, I myself am an author actually. Overall 4/5 Keep it up!
Hank, overall it's good for the meantime. Hopefully, it won't turn into one of those trash novels where the mc just wins with some sort of special talent like cheat skills or just don't really care about other people during the development in the tower thingy
The Plot is pretty decent and the world seems interesting, the development of the characters is pretty decent too, I myself am an author actually. Overall 4/5 Keep it up!
Hank, overall it's good for the meantime. Hopefully, it won't turn into one of those trash novels where the mc just wins with some sort of special talent like cheat skills or just don't really care about other people during the development in the tower thingy
The Plot is pretty decent and the world seems interesting, the development of the characters is pretty decent too, I myself am an author actually. Overall 4/5 Keep it up!