Misogynistic Hololiver (A Hololive Fanfic)

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ImNex

I really don't know how to give scores with this fanfic...It's just too unexpecting in my opinion. All the female characters I have seen in books usually are not this wild or weird... No wonder MC is misogynistic. Other than this, the fanfic itself is good. I would rather see the MC more. I feel like you're giving more screentimes to these weirdo girls than the protagonist himself. The part where one of the b****es was sexting to her boyfriend...what was the point of it? Are we supposed to get hard or something? Or to show how delusional these girls are? Don't worry, author. I would NEVER fap to these girls even if ONE of them started dating MC and have se*. At this point, I'd rather you get rid of harem tag cause I would rather see him single and successful than go near these cougars. Still... 5 stars as a support. I feel clickbaited... none of the females are normal.. most are just slu*s. And MC who doesn't trust women is going to be in a relationship with some of them?... Their POVs keep turning me off from liking them so much... I can't really help you with how to make things better since you're the author. I'm just a reader who's telling my experience. You could take some of the criticisms here and probably think about how to improve it or just ignore it if you think what I said are cap. Hope you have a nice day, good sir.

LV 4

Eytuzi

this fanfic is really out of the box. because this fanfic dare to take a risk about the member. maybe some of you not gonna like it but if you want something new about hololive fanfic i recommend this

LV 4

MissPinkElf

YESSSS! this is the first time I see a hololive fanfic that the mc is working for the holostar all I see I where the mc even though he is a male he is in the hololive

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Fuehrer

yeah.. I don't know much about Hololive or Holostar bcz I only watch it occasionally on yt and social media. but, I can say that the story in this fic is good and impressive, although there are some things I don't understand and the scenes are a bit absurd, but I can justify it. I also don't really like Yuri's scene here even though the author has tagged Yuri in Tag. well.. it was my fault for not paying attention to that.. oh.. and also, I have a little suggestion. don't write too many words in one chapter, you can divide it into 3 or 4 chapters so readers (Especially for readers reading on google/chrome/other Web, like me) can easily mark the last place read.. but the most important thing is, This story is good in my opinion, but it's not my cup of tea. Soo yeah see ya.

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Librarian_Heroen

It is so good! I love how the mc works, I don't know if he will go out with his sister, but don't care, I love Shiina! I will be waiting for more chapters of this masterpiece, thank you for all!

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Lonely_Nobody5

This is a real nice vtuber fan fic, it takes the characters and changes them up a little and explores them without feeling weird for the people playing these vtuber characters

LV 4

JollyBottomDweller

Pretty out there in the open with some great ideas, including that it flows pretty good and has great quaility writing compared to some over things but pretty much over all is a terrific idea.

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Red_baron

Le novel a un bon potentiel mais les "sensei" "Onu et autre petite expression casse vraiment les roubignole Mais sinon continue comme ça [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]