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Only read the summary an I had to write this here. The worst place to be at LOL like really the worst place you decide is to be is bleach. To the best of my knowledge you can just live your life normally as a human or in soul society even if you end up as a hollow you may have a rough start but in the end is still a good place to be.
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the idea was good and promising but as the story goes on the author continues to write memes or jokes that were fine at the beginning but the author has exaggerated and you see 3 in each chapter, the story also has few dialogues and explanations, mc and op from the first chapters and it is not clear how and nothing is explained massacres everyone as if they were characters in a video game and it is not explained how or what he did, there are various time jumps that spoil the story and if you didn't know the bleach manga I would not understand even some pieces, the author assumes that the readers have read the manga and understand everything, the story goes too fast and many details are skipped, the interactions between the characters are short and approximate, mc seems almost alien in how he behaves and no one around him sees his change since he owned the body or from the dialogues that make continuous references to everything, fairly long chapters but slow updates (although now I think it is hyatus)
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Hype for bleach oct 2022... Gonna spam 5 star to any bleach fanfiction that has enter my eyes. I'm so happy today. I never thought it possible for bleach to have a new season of the anime.
i love this please update soon............................................................................................................................
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The first few chapters was great but as the story progress all the conversation turned into like someone talking in discord, You'll know what i mean when you read it.
The story makes sometimes no sense and to many ,,funny,, Moments become stupid if it's without logic dz8izözdäizdoädozyäuupäouyäihyoähuoxupfdououdrx
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great updates, though the story needs a lot of work. first off, actual conservation would be nice? this feels like meme and joke after joke. there is not much actual talking going on. second, the author didn't really pay attention to the details of the characters and bleach rules. third, the fighting scene's suck. there really isn't much of it. fourth, too much reference from other stories.
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I really like this book alot. Who would have thought someone would make a bleach reincarnation story.I haven't read many novels but so far, this and Dimensional overhaul are really promising
A parody of bleach with some "slime" elements.Does tend to repeat a few jokes too much and the character development could use some work overall if you're looking for a good laugh then you should start reading the main character loves trolling the bleach cast
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Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters and can't
Writing Quality 3 star: It's understandable can be improved Stability 4 star : 1 chap a day great Story Development 2 star : So many crack don't like it Character Design 3 Star : Out of character for example byukuya talk back like a kid World Background 3 Star : It's fanfiction I know but author should pay more attentiond to it a little bit it so bland Overall 3 Star : Can read it to kill time no addiction though
The story would be vastly improved if you have the main character some character, and rather than giving him infinite potential in an unsightly information dump at the very beginning it would be much better if he had to go around collecting Plot Coupons to improve his powers.
its more like a parody with 4th wall breaking... filler fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfiller
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Perfect for the moments that you just want to turn off your brain and enjoy some silly comedy imo,or something like that im still at the start of the novel.
tis a good one a new take not many people think of making the mc a quincy----------------------------------///////////////////////////----------------------........................................::::::::::::::::;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters and can't wait to read more and more new chapters so keep up the great work
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It’ pretty bad tbh, the mc doesn’ have a personality like he is everywhere doing the most random stuff. Completely lost me
Only read the summary an I had to write this here. The worst place to be at LOL like really the worst place you decide is to be is bleach. To the best of my knowledge you can just live your life normally as a human or in soul society even if you end up as a hollow you may have a rough start but in the end is still a good place to be.
C de la mère [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the idea was good and promising but as the story goes on the author continues to write memes or jokes that were fine at the beginning but the author has exaggerated and you see 3 in each chapter, the story also has few dialogues and explanations, mc and op from the first chapters and it is not clear how and nothing is explained massacres everyone as if they were characters in a video game and it is not explained how or what he did, there are various time jumps that spoil the story and if you didn't know the bleach manga I would not understand even some pieces, the author assumes that the readers have read the manga and understand everything, the story goes too fast and many details are skipped, the interactions between the characters are short and approximate, mc seems almost alien in how he behaves and no one around him sees his change since he owned the body or from the dialogues that make continuous references to everything, fairly long chapters but slow updates (although now I think it is hyatus)
Revelar spoiler Hype for bleach oct 2022... Gonna spam 5 star to any bleach fanfiction that has enter my eyes. I'm so happy today. I never thought it possible for bleach to have a new season of the anime.
i love this please update soon............................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler The first few chapters was great but as the story progress all the conversation turned into like someone talking in discord, You'll know what i mean when you read it.
The story makes sometimes no sense and to many ,,funny,, Moments become stupid if it's without logic dz8izözdäizdoädozyäuupäouyäihyoähuoxupfdououdrx
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great updates, though the story needs a lot of work. first off, actual conservation would be nice? this feels like meme and joke after joke. there is not much actual talking going on. second, the author didn't really pay attention to the details of the characters and bleach rules. third, the fighting scene's suck. there really isn't much of it. fourth, too much reference from other stories.
exp...........................................................................................................................................
I really like this book alot. Who would have thought someone would make a bleach reincarnation story.I haven't read many novels but so far, this and Dimensional overhaul are really promising
A parody of bleach with some "slime" elements.Does tend to repeat a few jokes too much and the character development could use some work overall if you're looking for a good laugh then you should start reading the main character loves trolling the bleach cast
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Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters and can't
Writing Quality 3 star: It's understandable can be improved Stability 4 star : 1 chap a day great Story Development 2 star : So many crack don't like it Character Design 3 Star : Out of character for example byukuya talk back like a kid World Background 3 Star : It's fanfiction I know but author should pay more attentiond to it a little bit it so bland Overall 3 Star : Can read it to kill time no addiction though
The story would be vastly improved if you have the main character some character, and rather than giving him infinite potential in an unsightly information dump at the very beginning it would be much better if he had to go around collecting Plot Coupons to improve his powers.
its more like a parody with 4th wall breaking... filler fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfiller
Revelar spoiler MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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Perfect for the moments that you just want to turn off your brain and enjoy some silly comedy imo,or something like that im still at the start of the novel.
tis a good one a new take not many people think of making the mc a quincy----------------------------------///////////////////////////----------------------........................................::::::::::::::::;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
Revelar spoiler Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters and can't wait to read more and more new chapters so keep up the great work
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It’ pretty bad tbh, the mc doesn’ have a personality like he is everywhere doing the most random stuff. Completely lost me