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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Fantastic, slow development, but objective and easy to understand, characters with their depth, should continue the work, please continue... 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
At the beginning i didn't really like it much but after a while it got a lot better. the cooking's really detailed the characters personality doesn't seem to be one dimensional the mc at the beginning was a bit of a turn off but his attitude is a lot better than the start of the novel good novel to read really reccommend till you reach about 40 - 50 ch to see if you like it or not
ahhhh just noticed the tags... the story could have been great, sadly it is a harem which completely ruins it... wish author best of luck, 5 stars just to cheer
I think I read too much of this kind of novel or fanfic novel that the start of the story the mc got betray by the girl that he love because his not good looking, not rich etc. that I got a loyalty, trust and love problem I will remain a virgin to become a great sage until the wise one hahaha kill all rapist and make all betrayers suffer hahahaha. I think I read to much dark story hehehee
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You know I heard this story about a boy. This boy brought tons of chicken nuggets and eat those in front of his family. He got spanked one hundred time from each family member. He is apart of the biggest family in the world. They say he can't poo until this day.
I am looking forward to more chapters of this novel. I hope that the author would not drop this novel since it has lots of potential. EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
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harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
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It's a Food wars fanfic but the only that says it's a food wars fanfic is the foodgasm literally everything else is just oc characters the author made like they don't even talk about the original characters
okay so i wanted to give it a 1 star but the grammar is good and updating stability is good so i cant anyway the mc has a goddes that can read his thoughts and can also telepathically talk with him mc has sime sort of system and the story only cares about pointing out the food orgasm faces and isnt really going along the mc was reading cooking theory books for a week which isnt any kind of training you do that by actually cooking the mc is just a dissapointment the goddess is really annoying and so far ive only see good revirws and i dont agree with that if this review gets deleted ill report the story cuz i think some might have been deleted
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BROOOOTHERRRRRRRR I FKING LOVE YOUUUU!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 BROOOOTHERRRRRRRR I FKING LOVE YOUUUU!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
The system in this reminds me a lot of the system from The God of Cooking, which I really like. I also quite like how Rin is portrayed as a character. He's deeply interested in cooking and advancing more as a chef. I can't wait for the day Rin starts destroying other chefs in the kitchen. Keep up the good work!
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Synopsis and harem tag make me not read it. Are all authors so into harem that thay want several mother's engaged in palace drama? ?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Fantastic, slow development, but objective and easy to understand, characters with their depth, should continue the work, please continue... 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
At the beginning i didn't really like it much but after a while it got a lot better. the cooking's really detailed the characters personality doesn't seem to be one dimensional the mc at the beginning was a bit of a turn off but his attitude is a lot better than the start of the novel good novel to read really reccommend till you reach about 40 - 50 ch to see if you like it or not
ahhhh just noticed the tags... the story could have been great, sadly it is a harem which completely ruins it... wish author best of luck, 5 stars just to cheer
I think I read too much of this kind of novel or fanfic novel that the start of the story the mc got betray by the girl that he love because his not good looking, not rich etc. that I got a loyalty, trust and love problem I will remain a virgin to become a great sage until the wise one hahaha kill all rapist and make all betrayers suffer hahahaha. I think I read to much dark story hehehee
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Revelar spoiler You know I heard this story about a boy. This boy brought tons of chicken nuggets and eat those in front of his family. He got spanked one hundred time from each family member. He is apart of the biggest family in the world. They say he can't poo until this day.
I am looking forward to more chapters of this novel. I hope that the author would not drop this novel since it has lots of potential. EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
Revelar spoiler harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM harem just makes the story better, get out of here heretic we don’t need you, LIVE TO HAREM
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
It's a Food wars fanfic but the only that says it's a food wars fanfic is the foodgasm literally everything else is just oc characters the author made like they don't even talk about the original characters
okay so i wanted to give it a 1 star but the grammar is good and updating stability is good so i cant anyway the mc has a goddes that can read his thoughts and can also telepathically talk with him mc has sime sort of system and the story only cares about pointing out the food orgasm faces and isnt really going along the mc was reading cooking theory books for a week which isnt any kind of training you do that by actually cooking the mc is just a dissapointment the goddess is really annoying and so far ive only see good revirws and i dont agree with that if this review gets deleted ill report the story cuz i think some might have been deleted
Revelar spoiler BROOOOTHERRRRRRRR I FKING LOVE YOUUUU!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 BROOOOTHERRRRRRRR I FKING LOVE YOUUUU!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
The system in this reminds me a lot of the system from The God of Cooking, which I really like. I also quite like how Rin is portrayed as a character. He's deeply interested in cooking and advancing more as a chef. I can't wait for the day Rin starts destroying other chefs in the kitchen. Keep up the good work!
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Synopsis and harem tag make me not read it. Are all authors so into harem that thay want several mother's engaged in palace drama? ?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]